Talk:Yes/Tom & Tash/D-1(B) Br2/Keep Pushing

I choose . . . take the ring off THEN ask Tash. If they're really close, they shouldn't be willing to compel each other so easily on something as big as incest. Asking her without the ring though . . . that works for me. --Elerneron (talk) 16:18, 6 February 2017 (CET)

That's fair! I'll have a think about how that conversation will go. It might be that the conversation will have to be had two or three times throughout the day, or will have multiple option points during the conversation. I don't want it to just be that Tom really wants incest and Tash doesn't, rather they would have to talk each other into it, particularly as, although they've seen each other naked hundreds of times, and have occasionally explored each other, they have never gotten close to the foreplay stage before! Also, that way if Tash gets hold of the ring, her mind can't just be suddenly changed by her becoming the protagonist of the idea. --Jackmaster (talk) 16:40, 6 February 2017 (CET)

Well, I have to say that this is a considerable improvement from the previous rendition. And while I am not particularly sold on writing for this branch yet, if I were going that direction then Elerneron's request is exactly the thing that I would ask for, so I think I will second that. Jemini (talk) 18:08, 6 February 2017 (CET)