User talk:TerryAce
Hi, I'll be suggesting story chapters, making minor edits and reading. I am NOT a Time Ninja. I repeat NOT a Time Ninja
Welcome to the site. I hope you enjoy your stay. If you have any questions, or need any help please feel free to contact me on my Talk Page. Feel free to remove this welcome notice if it bothers you.--Elerneron (talk) 11:41, 4 October 2015 (CEST)
Feel free to contribute however you'd like. Have fun with it. Villenia (talk) 04:11, 4 November 2015 (CET)
I didn't have anything really specific. I tend to let inspiration strike. But I would think that Kylie has no idea you're there. She's lounging around in the nude as per normal when you show up out of no where. She may be an exhibitionist, but she's as easily embarrassed as anyone especially when surprised with something. From there you can go anywhere. Maybe she quickly composes herself and lets you watch her get dressed. Or she might run over and kick you out getting crazy dramatic and offended only to tease you about it relentlessly over the course of the day. Even another option, you pull rank as the babysitter when she gets lippy and 'discipline' her. Or some combo of those.
The only suggestion I have would be to keep the options you present at the end as decisions for Riley to make. You're role playing as Riley, so "Kylie frigs herself" or "Carol jerks you off" aren't decisions that Riley is making. That way the reader is really playing as the character. Besides, things don't always turn out how you want them to. That ensure it's less obvious and more open ended as to where the story could go. --Villenia (talk) 23:32, 10 January 2016 (CET)
Jemini
About your last vote. With this one,
https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Bandit_in_the_park/Sneak_up_behind_them_and_pin_the_both_of_them_sandwiched_together (act like you're here to discipline them for being out so early)
That option is actually on that list twice under two different headings. I am going to need you to specify witch heading you want this one under.
Jemini (talk) 20:54, 17 October 2015 (CEST)
Sorry, my story-sense kind of demanded for me to do an overhaul on your entry to Hot Summer Job where the MC sticks his finger into his sister's pussy. Yours was kind of rushed an not very compelling. It also didn't fit into the characters previously displayed trates very well. Jemini (talk) 03:56, 5 January 2016 (CET)
It's cool. I re-read it and yours flows much better
I have decided to temporarily suspend filling in votes for 2T4U due to my burn out. I have made notes of this on my talk page, but I decided to back this up here. You can feel free to make requests for Hot Summer Job or God's Compensation though.Jemini (talk) 20:19, 28 March 2016 (CEST)
Since I have been idle on the route in question for a while, I thought I would announce to you here that I just finally filled your request on this leg of the story so you don't miss it. (I backed it up a few pages since, again, it has been a while)
Elerneron
I've noticed that you are commenting a lot on the direction you would like Life Hacks to go, but you aren't marking any requests on the pages themselves. Since you are accustom to the way Jemini takes requests, I wanted to make sure you knew how to make requests on the story. If you see a red link that you would like one of us to work on, edit the page and after the link you would like worked on put '''(Request)''' --~~~~ (if you are looking at this in the history or edit view ignore the code and nowiki tags). This will put the word Request in bold followed by your signature. This will let us know that you want us to work on a particular passage. Commenting on the direction of the story is great too, I just wanted to make sure you knew how we were taking requests on the story, just in case. --Elerneron (talk) 13:42, 26 October 2016 (CEST)
You guys told me that before, and I got confused. Thanks.