Talk:LHLS/TalkPravatesLanaL
NOTE: I am really not satisfied with this one at all. I very well may be giving it a complete overhaul from scratch at some point. Jemini (talk) 02:28, 12 September 2017 (CEST)
Without knowing too much about the before and after of this scene, it's hard to give opinions, but what about something like this:
Lincoln: "Umm... well... Yeah! Yeah, I like looking at them, though. I don't really get to see what a girl looks like down there all that much since I'm a boy and all."
Lana: "Really? I have to look at Lola's whenever we take a bath."
Lincoln "You don't take baths."
Lana: "I DO too! Mud baths count!"
Lincoln: "And you see Lola naked how?"
Lana: "I have to make sure the water is good for her before I can go out and take my own bath."
Addressing the audience: Lola is like that, I have to taste <dish> for her before she agrees to eat it.
Lincoln: "Do you like looking at my privates?"
Lana: "I like how you can aim as you pee!"
--Tod Naturlich (talk) 04:17, 21 September 2017 (CEST)