Talk:Public Nudity / Beach / Cops Knotted

Interesting. I was almost expecting suicide with all the cleaning chems. Going right back to public nudity is a nice touch. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 18:46, 2 January 2020 (UTC)

Heh. I know that I tend to lean toward the dark stuff, but I'm not trapped in it.-- Nondoody (talk) 18:54, 2 January 2020 (UTC)

I backed up to where the party started, and chose hugging Jay Jay instead of going to Eli. Wondering if it might be less brutal but still end with a gang bang lol --Notsooldpervert (talk) 19:00, 2 January 2020 (UTC)

I'm feeling pretty done with this story at this point. I got what I wanted out of it and hopefully did not put you off too much. I am thinking of starting a new story, fresh, all my own (probably in a couple of days.) This has been a great toes-in-the-water experience for me and I am thankful for your support and your feedback. I hope you will be willing to be as involved my own story when I start it. Out of deference to you, I will try to make it less brutal (or at least be sure there are less brutal branches.) As to branching off of this one...it is still an open story. I encourage you or anyone else to go to town.-- Nondoody (talk) 19:31, 2 January 2020 (UTC)