Talk:Mother's Helping Hand/School

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I have some of my own ideas for directions to bring this based on behaviors I've seen from the mother, especially given the words from the mother on the "Random" route that do a lot more than just hint that there's a dark side to this whole upper-class school system, but I think I will give a chance for Telgar to write it up just in case there's a particular vision. (If not, I think I've seen enough from each of the start routes to come up with something myself.) Jemini (talk) 11:02, 4 March 2020 (CET)


Mother was just a stereo typically tyrannical school Headmistress. But the decision to help her son suddenly awoke some dark desires in her, Princess may have had some influence on the Headmistress sudden dark Awakening. Her reference to, making girls disappear, was her thinking of using obscure methods to turn girls or women who showed to much resistance into Jack's personal sex toys.

I would also point out that at first, his Mother threatened to kill him if he even thought of raping a girl, then less than an hour later she is taking about making resistant girls disappear. So no prior to tonight, nothing sinister was going on at the school.

Currently the only path I'm interested in is Emily Johnson. Just please no suddenly all powerful MC.

Telgar (talk) 03:29, 4 March 2020 (PST)

Yeah, I'm probably going to portray him as even weaker of character than you will. The only route he's got any real apparent power on is the Mind controll route (which I'm currently writing up,) and for that route the reason he goes mind-control is because he's actually extra weak and pathetic and so the mother calls in the real powerful person. So, the only reason he has any power is powerful backing, but the MC himself will still be pretty darn weak and the mind control route will not do anywhere near as much to gradually work him out of that weakness as the other routes. (Planning to bring in the Moon family for the mind control. Thanks for the note about them corrupting her, definitely going to work that into the mind control route.) Jemini (talk) 12:52, 4 March 2020 (CET)


Thing's to keep in mind about the moons, Helen is into all aspects of sex but more of a broad overview. Princess is into the darker corruption paths but hates to see people really hurt, thus her avoidance of the rape victims, Sky is about loving and redemption, thus her wanting to help the rape victims. Telgar (talk) 03:57, 4 March 2020 (PST)


Interesting. That adds a whole new possible dynamic to the mind control route. I had planned on having that route go very different directions depending on how cruel or kind a lover the MC proves himself to be once given a sex partner completely under his control. I planned for the cruel route to kinda stall and limit him, but it might give him a chance with a non mind-controlled Princess (who might sneakily turn the tables on him.) Meanwhile, the loving route would give him a chance with a non mind-controlled Sky. Both routes can give him a chance with the mother. Things might develop from there depending on how it all plays out. Jemini (talk) 13:18, 4 March 2020 (CET)