Talk:A Loli's ENF Adventure/Sally/School/Barely/After/Shriek/Protest/Talk/Nurse

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Whew! It looks like I got carried away, this was almost double the length most of these have been. But I had an idea for how to get in a nice ENF scene and simultaneously set up more, so I had to run with it! --BraveNudeWorld (talk) 07:16, 19 July 2021 (UTC)

Nicely done! I wonder if the other Sarah is going to have an even worse day, and find out that the last spare uniform her size just went to the wrong girl? Will she get a size too small, or a size too big? Will the "almost a doctor" wonder why our Sally let him see her naked and feel her up when there was nothing wrong with her? lol And of course the shorts are loose enough she can keep flashing Mr. Vice all afternoon. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 15:52, 19 July 2021 (UTC)

Thanks! Just out of curiosity, I know I sledge-hammered the point at the end, but how far did you read before you knew what happened? I hoped it wasn't super obvious to the reader right away, but I don't know how well I pulled it off. I'm not a mystery author, haha. --BraveNudeWorld (talk) 18:25, 19 July 2021 (UTC)
When he started examining her I suspected. Pretty much had it figured when the clothes were too big lol --Notsooldpervert (talk) 18:34, 19 July 2021 (UTC)