Talk:April's Punishment/Part 11

The initial plan was making April and Tiffany really mad at each other because April was supposed to keep getting in trouble for stuff that Tiffany did. But I can’t do it. They have such great chemistry together. I can’t imagine them ever getting mad at one another. The story was always called April’s Punishment so I was always wrote it to be more April-centric. But they’re too cute together to split them up and write the other off. Plus, it keeps the story fresh and different that way. No, they’re stuck together for good. --Hgcollins (talk) 01:18, 11 December 2021 (CET)

Actually that works even better. I loved the way Tiffany tried to come to her defense but they were both ignored anyway. Poor girls are in for a rough couple of weeks lol --Notsooldpervert (talk) 01:44, 11 December 2021 (CET)

April was originally going to go to the bathroom to find unknown vandals had ransacked the place, but too busy to bother, she starts cleaning herself and gets caught and blamed for it. When I decided Tiffany was going to be sent to look for her, I decided to ditch the whole thing and get them both in trouble for something completely innocent. Now the rowdy middle school boys have two girls to enjoy!

I’m really glad they can come to each other’s aid when things get rough. They’ve already shown their willing to lie for each other, who knows what they’ll do now that the stakes are higher? --Hgcollins (talk) 01:59, 11 December 2021 (CET)