Talk:Dirty Talk/Three Brats/June 26th, 2021/Mommy's Mark - An unexpected visitor/Emilia shows her friends/Heidi makes a distraction for Emilia/Emilia goes home

love it Emilia loving her spade and i mean im surprised in no moment there she mentioned or think about the dog licking her when she was getting excited on the bed? before goinf to the bathtub when she was thinking of what happened that day or when they saw the dog being too excited when they got back since that would make emilia get worried of her mom realizing that she didnt walk the dog or that the dog licked her, it would have been funny if the dog in the excitement did one of those hump jump dogs do when they are excited to Emilia in front of Laura. ok about the options i think 1 and 3 are the ones i would like the most since as good as 2 would be i dont think it would make sense in this path where Emilia has been a sub and never a dom. so i think she would sacrifice again not for their friend this time but more for the carnal pleasure of what happened before. Great work as always love it --Xephion (talk) 03:05, 27 October 2022 (CEST)

I'll hide my uncensored opinion because I don't want to come across as angry towards you as an author. I'm only angry at Laura as a character. Like seriously, good job in writing content that draws emotion out of me, especially towards a fictional character. That's a rare thing indeed, so props to that.

But just out of interest... Is Laura doing this on purpose and being a child-abuser, a "domestic abuser" consciously, or is your version of Laura really too much of a moron to realize Emilia's corruption IS her fault from start to freaking finish? Like seriously, this is what I meant when I said she's so strict and even abusive. What a soul-crushingly evil woman. Laura marked her own daughter with black, using fear and guilt as a weapon, gaslit her, manipulated her, broke one of the strictest rules in the game and got away with it on technicality... And now she is acting like Heidi is the bad guy? What an evil, evil cunt. I pray she gets her comeuppance somewhere down the line because she seriously deserves it. I'll even allow rape and murder if she will! (joking 🤣) -- Innocent Ruin (talk) 04:46, 27 October 2022 (CEST)

Oh, and please don't do the first option. Heidi isn't a kind of character to just lay down and take shit from an abuser. The third and second option make much more sense. -- Innocent Ruin (talk) 04:50, 27 October 2022 (CEST)

I understand that you don't like this version of Laura but technically Emilia was the one who put herself in this path of corruption Emilia always had the choice in the beginning, this is a path of Emilia rebelling every single time, from the very first choice Emilia decided to lie to her friends about the warning and just ignore her mother, then she gets punish and ends up loving it so she decides to get more risky to keep getting punish, yes Laura did manipulate this after realizing that Emilia was loving breaking rules but the fact is Laura only becomes like this after Emilia chooses this path and getting punish is what Emilia wants so badly, Laura approach is very maniipulative but is because she knows that what Emilia wants now letting Emilia do what she wants but under HER direction and control in this path she has become more like a mistress than a mother but this entire path was made by Emilia since in this path SHE LOVE BEING PUNISH, to be honest thats what i love of this path is more like we the player wanted to be super pervertes and always we choose the option of breaking the rules so it makes sense for Laura to evolve from a mother to a mistress. --Xephion (talk) 05:27, 27 October 2022 (CEST)

Good points, and hence why I said Laura is getting away with it on "technicality". As long as Emilia likes it, it's in accordance to the all the rules. But why try to manipulate and lie to Heidi then? She hasn't done anything wrong! And Laura has not taken any accountability for HER own mistakes either, namely getting discovered in the first place! That's why I dislike her personality here so much. I appreciate the kinky scenes with bondage and all that jazz and will gladly self-insert myself into Emilia's shoes (I'm a degenerate, I know) and wouldn't change a thing in that regard, but the build-up and the lack of honesty on Laura's part makes it feel too much like child abuse to me. Personal demons and all that, but I digress. -- Innocent Ruin (talk) 05:51, 27 October 2022 (CEST)