Talk:Dirty Talk/Three Brats/June 21st, 2021/Caught Off Guard/Emilia listens to Sven and goes to his room
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I tweaked a couple small things. It's the first time Laura has met these other girls, let alone the reader (depending on the branches they've followed). But it's hard to believe Emilia would risk getting caught with her brother by a stranger who is in her house, so I added a throwaway line about Milka putting on a voice. If Emilia actually thinks it's her friends in the hall then she might be more inclined to force herself on Sven looking for more game-related clout with her besties. But if it's a stranger I would think she'd stop regardless of whether she thinks the door is locked. --Villenia (talk) 19:49, 22 November 2022 (CET)