Talk:A Close Shave/Shock/Shave/DIY

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What's her ethnicity? When you first described her you called it a permanent tan, so I was picturing Greek, or maybe Middle Eastern. Here she has "milk chocolate" skin which would be more East Indian or African. Just trying to get a clear picture in my head lol --Notsooldpervert (talk) 17:46, 18 March 2023 (UTC)

Yeah... I was thinking mixed race. Milk chocolate is not right. I need a better simile. Hope (talk) 22:31, 18 March 2023 (UTC)

Caramel? Toffee? --Notsooldpervert (talk) 23:03, 18 March 2023 (UTC)

Caramel is good. I added a lot more detail too. Hope (talk) 12:10, 19 March 2023 (UTC)