Talk:A Close Shave/Shock/Shave/DIY

What's her ethnicity? When you first described her you called it a permanent tan, so I was picturing Greek, or maybe Middle Eastern. Here she has "milk chocolate" skin which would be more East Indian or African. Just trying to get a clear picture in my head lol --Notsooldpervert (talk) 17:46, 18 March 2023 (UTC)

Yeah... I was thinking mixed race. Milk chocolate is not right. I need a better simile. Hope (talk) 22:31, 18 March 2023 (UTC)

Caramel? Toffee? --Notsooldpervert (talk) 23:03, 18 March 2023 (UTC)

Caramel is good. I added a lot more detail too. And thank you for the feedback - it is most welcomeHope (talk) 12:10, 19 March 2023 (UTC)

No problem. What was her reaction to Dad pulling his dick out? She should have some say in the loss of her virginity. Maybe she wants to watch him wank, or do it herself, or try giving a BJ. Or is that what you had planned for the leaving option? He tries to leave and she "stops" him? --Notsooldpervert (talk) 16:04, 19 March 2023 (UTC)