Talk:Hot Summer Job/Clean yourself up then head over to the Callahan's

I'm a little confused. He's concerned that she might call it rape, but he's going to take the time to send multiple texts bragging about fucking her, including pictures of her panties? I thought he was far more discreet than that. Not gonna get to fuck the neighborhood if you go around texting all your friends about it. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 16:23, 21 January 2018 (CET)

He doesn't start thinking about that until later. In the other branch he doesn't intend to go anywhere and he gets inside his own head much faster. In this one he's stuck fantasizing and doesn't fully consider Kylie's side of it until later. But you're right, rereading it that didn't come across as well as I'd hoped so I expanded it a little. In his defense, he is still an impulsive and not-too-bright teenager. Villenia (talk) 01:06, 22 January 2018 (CET)

That reads much better. Still a dick, not a complete ass lol --Notsooldpervert (talk) 01:33, 22 January 2018 (CET)