Talk:A Loli's ENF Adventure/Sally/ClothingOptional/Devin/Friends/Cajole/Randall/1on1

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I'm glad I pushed myself a little and wrote that, but man I'm bad it writing the more explicit scenes. You see how long that took? lol. --BraveNudeWorld (talk) 11:01, 23 August 2021 (UTC)

You did well! It did seem to take a while though lol. I picked the last option, because whether Devin is fine or not isn't the issue, and you don't want to be more explicit and the first option leads to either the parents getting upset and hitting the breaks, or turned on and encouraging her to do it more lol. I could just see Dad treating it like a joke, "Really? Let's see it then, show us how you do it" while Mom is both scandalized and turned on, and Devin freaks between wanting to play with her, and wanting to hide lol --Notsooldpervert (talk) 13:46, 23 August 2021 (UTC)

Yeah, actually either of the first two could lead to more explicit stuff (which I do need a break from), the first one for obvious reasons, though I think she'd have enough sense not to show her parents—Devin is certainly a possibility—but I was more thinking she would show other kids. Didn't really have too much planned for how that would go though. The second one would mean she has a heart-to-heart talk with her brother, which could turn into a sex scene pretty fast if either of them admit what they're feeling. I don't think either of those are bad paths to explore, but not what I want to work on now (so thanks) :) the one you picked should take us back into semi-innocent nudity territory for a while. Although in some sense it's probably fair to say Sally will never be quite as innocent again. She's much more likely to be aware of becoming aroused in some of this situations now I think. --BraveNudeWorld (talk) 14:16, 23 August 2021 (UTC)

True, now that she knows how to recognize it. However, becoming aroused when she shouldn't be is fuel for further embarrassment, right? She knows she flashed someone and is embarrassed, gets turned on by it and is even more embarrassed. I was thinking more along the lines of blurting it out when the parents asked what Devin and his friends did all afternoon lol --Notsooldpervert (talk) 14:31, 23 August 2021 (UTC)

In all honesty, this route is going to close itself off pretty soon. Or get too sexual for the original intent of the story. There is not much you can do to embarrass someone who is already nude once they get used to it. So while it will be interesting getting Sally to that point, I don't see much to keep the route moving. DrAlithe (talk) 21:43, 23 August 2021 (UTC)