Talk:Family Ties/Fresh meat.

From All The Fallen Stories
Jump to navigation Jump to search

For some reason this doesn't "feel" too much like an ending, more like an interlude. You even introduced new characters. One thing I would have loved is that he managed to get his mom pregnant, that way she would have more of him to remember in her cell. --Tod Naturlich (talk) 08:17, 3 September 2017 (CEST)