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I thought this was the timeline where the bath was already drawn, based on my line of requests --[[User:Foalpoots|Foalpoots]] ([[User talk:Foalpoots|talk]]) 07:29, 2 December 2022 (CET)
I thought this was the timeline where the bath was already drawn, based on my line of requests --[[User:Foalpoots|Foalpoots]] ([[User talk:Foalpoots|talk]]) 07:29, 2 December 2022 (CET)


Oh, you're right. I filled both legs but I forgot the fact that you progressed from the one where the bath was started. I'm going to have to re-work this quite a bit. (Probably also fill in the line where the bath isn't started in order to properly accommodate this passage.) [[User:Jemini|Jemini]] ([[User talk:Jemini|talk]]) 10:10, 2 December 2022 (CET)
Oh, you're right. I filled both legs but I forgot the fact that you progressed from the one where the bath was started. I guess, since you originally chose the one where he took her straight to the toilet and started progressing the other one after I filled both, it just skipped my mind that you'd changed tracks. I'm going to have to re-work this quite a bit. (Probably also fill in the line where the bath isn't started in order to properly accommodate this passage.) [[User:Jemini|Jemini]] ([[User talk:Jemini|talk]]) 10:10, 2 December 2022 (CET)

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This is exactly why I love letting others pick the route before I write it. When I make the options, I always have a result in my mind where every single route succeeds in the character's intentions. However, when I get some time separated from the writing and someone else picks it, I can easily envision which ones are likely to actually work and which ones will have unexpected consequences consistent with the characters and lore I've set up. This would be an example of that. Jemini (talk) 15:05, 1 December 2022 (CET)

I thought this was the timeline where the bath was already drawn, based on my line of requests --Foalpoots (talk) 07:29, 2 December 2022 (CET)

Oh, you're right. I filled both legs but I forgot the fact that you progressed from the one where the bath was started. I guess, since you originally chose the one where he took her straight to the toilet and started progressing the other one after I filled both, it just skipped my mind that you'd changed tracks. I'm going to have to re-work this quite a bit. (Probably also fill in the line where the bath isn't started in order to properly accommodate this passage.) Jemini (talk) 10:10, 2 December 2022 (CET)