Talk:Nymphsaga/The Raid of Fort Hammercliff

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Some feedback for you, just because people hardly ever get any, I really loved the lesbian scenes, especially the Wendy and Angel one, simply because they were both so reluctant but also so horny. I was a little nymph when I was younger, but one that just fantasied because I was really shy. There’s something about shyness and being horny at the same time that drives me crazy. The Lemon and Rain scene was also good, but not quite as exciting as they were both less innocent than Angel and Wendy. I might have to go back to find the Pink scene.


I skipped over the goblin and tentacle bits because it’s not my thing. Have you written more scenes or stories with gay or bi girls in them? Emily (talk) 00:32, 29 January 2023 (CET)


First of all, thanks! I can't fault anyone for not wanting to read these poor girls cry through painful and traumatic experiences, lol.

Still, I love exploring lesbian relations in this story, so happy to know someone's enjoying that stuff. I still have the second half of this page to work on, and I actually kind of want to squeeze out more content from both lesbian scenes on this page, because I feel like they were cut too short, and that they haven't been given the love they deserve. Got lots of ideas for the future as well. Exploring Melody's and Candy's romance (given that they're a couple in real life) and all the complications their "situation" is causing for them is something I really wanna also do, for example.

The only other story I have written girl-on-girl and bi-sexual content for is Three Brats, with Emilia's and Stella's little scene in particular. Want to do more of that there in the future as well. -- Innocent Ruin (talk) 01:02, 29 January 2023 (CET)