Talk:Yes/Tom & Tash/D-1/Go to Registration

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I've got ideas for all three of these options, so just need to know which one to go for :) also, if anyone wants to make any edits to this page in particular, feel free to do so; Something doesn't quite feel right about it, but I'm not sure what. --Jackmaster (talk) 10:29, 26 January 2017 (CET)

Interesting way to do things, using second person and switching characters . . . I'm not confident of how well it will work, but I'll reserve my opinion until I see how well things go. My instinct says that it may be a bit confusing though. --Elerneron (talk) 19:59, 26 January 2017 (CET)