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For those who wish to read or write such stories, a lolicon/shotacon website has created a similar wiki story system catering to underage stories. Please feel free to vist [https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Main_Page All the Fallen Stories].</pre> | For those who wish to read or write such stories, a lolicon/shotacon website has created a similar wiki story system catering to underage stories. Please feel free to vist [https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Main_Page All the Fallen Stories].</pre> | ||
Probably best with a space between the two. --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] ([[User talk:Elerneron|talk]]) 21:50, 13 October 2015 (CEST) | Probably best with a space between the two. --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] ([[User talk:Elerneron|talk]]) 21:50, 13 October 2015 (CEST) | ||
==[[User:Jemini|Jemini]]== | |||
I just checked out your additions, so far as Jack goes, he seems perfectly in character. As for Aaron, there is just one minor point. Me and Elerneron have both been playing him on the sexually ignorant side, and it looks like you mostly kept to that, but there was one line out of place. The one where he says "Do I-do I have to . . . have sex to make it go away?" The only time a line like that would ever work from any character ever is if they were talking to someone who had just explained to them what sex was, witch Jack didn't. I might or might not work out something from that, but I would be more likely to over-exaggerate sexual ignorance because I like the concept and think it is cute. We will see how I feel in a few hours assuming you haven't edited it yourself in that time. --[[User:Jemini|Jemini]] ([[User talk:Jemini|talk]]) | I just checked out your additions, so far as Jack goes, he seems perfectly in character. As for Aaron, there is just one minor point. Me and Elerneron have both been playing him on the sexually ignorant side, and it looks like you mostly kept to that, but there was one line out of place. The one where he says "Do I-do I have to . . . have sex to make it go away?" The only time a line like that would ever work from any character ever is if they were talking to someone who had just explained to them what sex was, witch Jack didn't. I might or might not work out something from that, but I would be more likely to over-exaggerate sexual ignorance because I like the concept and think it is cute. We will see how I feel in a few hours assuming you haven't edited it yourself in that time. --[[User:Jemini|Jemini]] ([[User talk:Jemini|talk]]) | ||
Anyway, glad to see you contributing. I was getting a little bored being the only one since Elerneron took a back-seat to focus on world development while I was the one making most of the story entries. Working together on something like this can be rather fun. I work better when my ideas are bouncing between myself and other people. --[[User:Jemini|Jemini]] ([[User talk:Jemini|talk]]) | |||
Revision as of 11:24, 14 October 2015
Welcome
Welcome to the site. I hope you enjoy yourself here. Feel free to start contributing whenever you like. I'm trying to avoid some of the issues over at Create Your Own Story, so the rules are slightly different. Hopefully I've made them a bit more clear, though. Again, it's good to see that you've made it. --Elerneron (talk) 16:07, 3 October 2015 (CEST)
Well, here's hoping you get your muse back. Cheers! --Elerneron (talk) 01:46, 5 October 2015 (CEST)
No worries. I'm sure if you get things too out of character either myself or Jemini will pop in to make suggestions. All of 2 Taboo 4 You should be transferred at this point, except for some contradictory material, so have at it. BTW Jemini is the lead on 2 Taboo 4 You now, as he has put a lot more into it than have I.--Elerneron (talk) 11:22, 12 October 2015 (CEST)
Your addition seems in character to me. I seem to remember starting a similar story arc . . . not sure where that went. BTW, I moved some of your messages on my talk page to the 2T4U feedback section. That's really where anything related to the story should go. --Elerneron (talk) 20:18, 13 October 2015 (CEST)
I have just received permission from Platypus to advertise All the Fallen Stories at the top of the All Adult Stories section of the Create Your Own Story site. I'm still having problems making posts with external links, so I was wondering if you'd do me a favor and add thisunder the pedo disclaimer there:
For those who wish to read or write such stories, a lolicon/shotacon website has created a similar wiki story system catering to underage stories. Please feel free to vist [https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Main_Page All the Fallen Stories].
Probably best with a space between the two. --Elerneron (talk) 21:50, 13 October 2015 (CEST)
Jemini
I just checked out your additions, so far as Jack goes, he seems perfectly in character. As for Aaron, there is just one minor point. Me and Elerneron have both been playing him on the sexually ignorant side, and it looks like you mostly kept to that, but there was one line out of place. The one where he says "Do I-do I have to . . . have sex to make it go away?" The only time a line like that would ever work from any character ever is if they were talking to someone who had just explained to them what sex was, witch Jack didn't. I might or might not work out something from that, but I would be more likely to over-exaggerate sexual ignorance because I like the concept and think it is cute. We will see how I feel in a few hours assuming you haven't edited it yourself in that time. --Jemini (talk)
Anyway, glad to see you contributing. I was getting a little bored being the only one since Elerneron took a back-seat to focus on world development while I was the one making most of the story entries. Working together on something like this can be rather fun. I work better when my ideas are bouncing between myself and other people. --Jemini (talk)