User talk:Wassersaeufer-old
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Making the Team
Would you like us to request which options we want first here on your talk page? I'd like to see the ask Mary first if possible.~~Notsooldpervert
And you're copying stuff from editthis, which is fine, but why not copy it as is/open it up for editing?
would love to see the thread ofSomeone yells, "Let's make this a proper party!" or "... fuck her hard and brutal, you are just too fired up for anything else, mercilessly you pound this hole." oh and thank you for continuing this story. Lucifel (talk) Lucifel (talk) 07:00, 7 December 2017 (CET)
will see what I can do to contirbute but i may not write as good as you but still love this storyLucifel (talk) 15:53, 16 December 2017 (CET)
is there a thread you would like me to try? Lucifel (talk) 16:19, 16 December 2017 (CET) well my first bit is up but i am sure i posted it wrong and i am not really happy with it 11:33, 17 December 2017 (CET)
Fix or change what ever you feel needs to. Like i said i knew it did not sound right, will take a bit more time and try to make it flow better but change any thing you think needs work. Lucifel (talk) 13:55, 17 December 2017 (CET)
once again thanks for cleaning up what i post Lucifel (talk) 13:56, 25 December 2017 (CET)
Yeah, btw I'm the one that added the little twist/spin off story options in there your free to delete/alter them if you want after all it is you story. Yes I've been doing some clean up here and there if I had a higher level of permissions to delete things like invalid redirects I would, I have noticed there is lots of junk floating around I tend to pick it up and fix what I can. Helping fix errors and the like is no problem. Thank you for recognizing my meanderings. Lol! LoganY (talk) 20:40, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
If you read it in depth the 'you don't go at all' option actually fits in with several paths of your story, ie.
1. Mary still being a virgin or so mike thinks anyway but eager to give it a try.
2. When Mary gives a obvious look so as if to say "Am I doing this right?" when he is f--king Stacy.
And you notice the first twist mentioned above by the end he only performs oral there's not even any digital penetration. But if you follow the crazy twist route you find out Marys bat shit crazy anyway. But one doesn't find that stuff out if one doesn't take it. I would have to agree it does throw a wrench in the gears so to speak. I guess I didn't think about that, I was more thinking that sort of explains Marys curious nymph like attitude. LoganY (talk) 22:47, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
I'm glad you like my pages, man! Thanks for letting me know, it's extremely motivating to be encouraged by the original author. If you've had a chance to check out my peek through the windows-page, you might notice that I'm adding some new girls to the story. They'll be more fleshed out as we go along, and if you - at any point- want to add them to the list of characters, go right ahead.
I'm planning to take a pretty hardcore interracial/raceplay route with Jada and her sisters. So there might be some racism from the Football team (and maybe even Mike) in this story route. Is that all right with you? --ArthurKung (talk) 15:56, 4 March 2021 (UTC)
Flattery will get you everywhere! ;) I definitely hope you will add more of your own stuff to it. Your story premise is what got me interested in the first place! No rush though, I know that the will to write is pretty fickle - and that you should let it happen naturally instead of forcing it. Until then I can only hope that my story will be entertaining to read - and you're of course more than welcome to fill out branches to it if anything should spark your inspiration!--ArthurKung (talk) 01:29, 5 March 2021 (UTC)
I think those suggestions are awesome! "The full rainbow" of ethnic chicks, so to speak! Since they already fucked Jada, I think the next black girl should be very different from her. What do you think would be a fun personality or 'stereotype' for her? A bookish nerd? A political activist? Another classmate, or someone even older? I would love to hear your ideas, or what you think would be the most fun! --ArthurKung (talk) 20:31, 15 March 2021 (UTC)
I'd be happy to add "Watch what happens to Yi" when I get the chance! But if you really want to motivate me, I'd be thrilled if you'd like to add a page anywhere else in the "Making the team/Go alone"-story! I think your writing is hot, and I'd love to see what you could do with the premise so far. --ArthurKung (talk) 12:31, 18 March 2021 (UTC)
I love your contribution! As promised, I wrote what happens to Yi! ;) I have an idea for every option in the "Ethnic piece of ass"-selection to more or less offer the same turnout. My idea is that Jesse more or less fucks the girls all on his own, and that the gang eventually gets so fed up that they turn on him and beat him up/lock him up. Only to then decide to have their way with his mom or his sisters. I hope to fill out a page for Gabriela, Hannaneh or Aliyah soon as well! I haven't had the chance to write raceplay/racist porn in a long time, and it's a lot of fun. --ArthurKung (talk) 18:03, 21 March 2021 (UTC)
I'm extremely excited about the direction you've taken "The Gang turns on Jesse"! It's justice well-served, and at the same time so delightfully cruel - because Mike isn't about to cut Yi, Jada or her sisters any slack even after all their brutal rapes. Do you have anything in mind for Jesse's sister in terms of looks/age/personality? --ArthurKung (talk) 15:16, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
I’m a huge fan of this story, I decided to feature it on my writer page as a favorite story. It’s definitely one of my favorite interactive stories. --Hgcollins (talk) 23:30, 9 December 2021 (CET)
Thanks, I’m sure I’ll start adding some ideas from time to time. It’s easily become one of my all time favorites. I especially like the image of the youngest sister sitting there in just her overalls when the football player comes up and she has no idea what’s about to happen. Good stuff.--Hgcollins (talk) 04:03, 12 December 2021 (CET)
Thanks for the feedback! I also really enjoy your contributions, they always seems to inspire -Villenia (talk) 00:23, 22 December 2021 (CET)
Halloween Romp Suggestion
Since part of the rules is not editing preexisting pages I would like to ask if you could add an entry to your story. Have a man in his mid to late 20s who is a bisexual pedophile. I would be glad to write it. --Medici (talk) 05:34, 28 January 2016 (CET)
User Rights
You have been granted rights as a Trusted Contributor. This will allow you to do a bit more on the site, including moving pages without creating redirects and deleting pages among others. I hope this little powerup is helpful. --Elerneron (talk) 07:37, 5 September 2021 (UTC)