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*Oh yes, that Ellen - Tiffany one works fine in concept. In fact, I have no idea why I didn't think of it first. It only makes perfect sense to go that direction. (I might have to look again at the set-up for Jack and Mel once I get the energy up for it though. I had an idea in my head about how to set that up that might require a few little tweaks.) [[User:Jemini|Jemini]] ([[User talk:Jemini|talk]]) 07:20, 14 January 2016 (CET)
*Oh yes, that Ellen - Tiffany one works fine in concept. In fact, I have no idea why I didn't think of it first. It only makes perfect sense to go that direction. (I might have to look again at the set-up for Jack and Mel once I get the energy up for it though. I had an idea in my head about how to set that up that might require a few little tweaks.) [[User:Jemini|Jemini]] ([[User talk:Jemini|talk]]) 07:20, 14 January 2016 (CET)


*Anyway, since you have taken an interest in writing for Ellen, I have not mentioned this in-story yet but I was actually running it that she is currently possessed by Maria. It is supposed to be that she was sexually assaulted by Maria's ghost the previous night, leading to some of the best sex she has ever had, and then ending in a complete domination. Currently, she still has her own mind, but she is being subtly manipulated by Maria. (This also means she will avoid touching any of her daughters if they have not lost their virginities yet, and will not intentionally go into the same room where one of them are if they are still virgin. This is due to the geas placed on Maria.) I have been subtly hinting at this by not having her refer to any of her children in tender or famillial terms, and also by having her speak in a slightly more archaic manner of speech. (please delete this once you have read it.) [[User:Jemini|Jemini]] ([[User talk:Jemini|talk]]) 07:20, 14 January 2016 (CET)
*For Maria, her geas was against touching or approaching a virgin girl. Touching is defined as any physical contact, approaching is defined as her seeing and then intentionally moving towards her. (So, if the girl comes to her, she has to get away to prevent coming into physical contact.) And a virgin is a girl who has not has semen shot from a penis (of their same species) and then into her womb. (so scooping up a puddle of semen and then pushing it in does not count.) [[User:Jemini|Jemini]] ([[User talk:Jemini|talk]]) 19:18, 15 January 2016 (CET)
 
*So far as Tiffany goes, if you are having her after her father's ghost raped her in her sleep, then he did stick his penis in during that encounter. Therefore, it counts to her no longer being a virgin. (The presence or absence of a hymen is irrelevant to this definition of virginity.)

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Welcome to the site. I hope you enjoy your stay. If you have any questions, or need any help please feel free to contact me on my Talk Page. Feel free to remove this welcome notice if it bothers you. --Elerneron (talk) 08:39, 12 January 2016 (CET) ``

About your recent addition to 2T4U, 2T4U/Jack/Morning/Melony's room/Gang rape Missy(Mom)/Kill Missy. While the curse MAY be strong enough to make Ellen, Jack, & Melony murder their loved one for the naughtiness of it; there is no chance that they would feel no remorse afterwards, let alone be content. They would likely hate themselves and the others for such an act. The curse modifies their personality, it doesn't overwrite them. Maybe add some soul-shattering remorse . . . and maybe even a suicide attempt and I would find it more believable. --Elerneron (talk) 08:58, 12 January 2016 (CET)

Been reading what you have so far of The Family Cox. I was wondering if you take requests on which thread you'll work on next. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 21:44, 13 January 2016 (CET)

Jemini

  • Hey, just saw the modification you put in to Ellen's story. Since I am trying to keep each route consistent with each other, I just wanted to know what direction you were going with that option. Is it to link up with what is supposed to be going on with Jack and Melony? Or did you have your own thing you were wanting to do? If the latter, that's fine, (although I am curious.) If the former though, I might have phrased it a bit differently. Jemini (talk) 03:31, 12 January 2016 (CET)
  • Seconding Elerneron's comment there. I actually did have a planned route in witch Missy could wind up dying as a result of this, but in that case it would not be intentional and the reaction afterwards would be very different. That route was meant to appeal to a suffocation fetish, not a necrophilia fetish. Her dying would just be the suffocation route going too far and would likely involve around 5 more decision points before getting to the one route that would lead to her death. The intention would be to avoid actually talking about death for as long as possible, but instead dance around the term and avoid actually calling it for what it is. As someone who has actually experienced a family death first hand, that is far more true to reality and is a portrayal that would have a more meaningful impact on the reader. (I should probably have claimed the route due to how sensitive that route could be. I will probably modify it later, since we have both the creator of the story and the person who is currently primary on it in agreement here.) Jemini (talk) 00:19, 14 January 2016 (CET)
  • Ok, the one where Jack picks up the pace on fucking Missy has been modded now. The "Kill Missy" link though was eliminated, so the link Elerneron made on this page is now the only link to it until the route that leads up to the events is eventually re-implemented. Jemini (talk) 01:31, 14 January 2016 (CET)
  • Oh yes, that Ellen - Tiffany one works fine in concept. In fact, I have no idea why I didn't think of it first. It only makes perfect sense to go that direction. (I might have to look again at the set-up for Jack and Mel once I get the energy up for it though. I had an idea in my head about how to set that up that might require a few little tweaks.) Jemini (talk) 07:20, 14 January 2016 (CET)
  • For Maria, her geas was against touching or approaching a virgin girl. Touching is defined as any physical contact, approaching is defined as her seeing and then intentionally moving towards her. (So, if the girl comes to her, she has to get away to prevent coming into physical contact.) And a virgin is a girl who has not has semen shot from a penis (of their same species) and then into her womb. (so scooping up a puddle of semen and then pushing it in does not count.) Jemini (talk) 19:18, 15 January 2016 (CET)
  • So far as Tiffany goes, if you are having her after her father's ghost raped her in her sleep, then he did stick his penis in during that encounter. Therefore, it counts to her no longer being a virgin. (The presence or absence of a hymen is irrelevant to this definition of virginity.)
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