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That would work, too. Once she's pregnant with her brother's kid, (making her parents kick her out) she becomes the bedwarmer for whoever wants her that night lol Sad lot in life. Shoulda stayed on Earth. I like it being ignored by the masses because she's "just an anachronism" or something. They get her stripped down, and maybe a few strangers cop some feels (or fuck her eventually). --[[User:Notsooldpervert|Notsooldpervert]] ([[User talk:Notsooldpervert|talk]]) 01:32, 13 February 2020 (CET)
That would work, too. Once she's pregnant with her brother's kid, (making her parents kick her out) she becomes the bedwarmer for whoever wants her that night lol Sad lot in life. Shoulda stayed on Earth. I like it being ignored by the masses because she's "just an anachronism" or something. They get her stripped down, and maybe a few strangers cop some feels (or fuck her eventually). --[[User:Notsooldpervert|Notsooldpervert]] ([[User talk:Notsooldpervert|talk]]) 01:32, 13 February 2020 (CET)
I don't think I'll go all the way to pregnancy, that's just one of my personal limits, but I'm glad you like it. --[[User:NoGo45|NoGo45]] ([[User talk:NoGo45|talk]]) 01:38, 13 February 2020 (CET)
That's a shame, impregnation is right up there with loli and incest for me lol --[[User:Notsooldpervert|Notsooldpervert]] ([[User talk:Notsooldpervert|talk]]) 01:53, 13 February 2020 (CET)
For me if pregnancy is featured I prefer it as something that happens near the end of a story or after it as a sort of "where are they now" segment, just not to the point of ruining the girl's life completely, then it sucks the fun out of it for me. The humiliation genre as a whole is something I'm very particular about. Loli and incest I'm all for though, obviously lol --[[User:NoGo45|NoGo45]] ([[User talk:NoGo45|talk]]) 02:07, 13 February 2020 (CET)

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We discussed a possible... development in human culture for the future setting, and you liked it, but are leaning toward an entirely new girl just for that plot bunny. How about...

Hannah - 13 years old, blonde haired girl. Rather petite, and late bloomer (so she has lower self esteem to start with). One younger brother named Link (age 9). Mother (Michelle "Shelley") works full time as a nurse (often with overtime), Dad (Brian) has a traveling job with the power company, and is only home a few days a month. She's quite gullible, and desperate for friends in her new home, so she's quite willing to go along with their suggestions. The idea was that it was a colony in another star system, and their ship had been lost for a long time. Morals had changed by the time they were thawed and taboos were much more relaxed (public exposure wasn't considered bad, and full nudity was common on tv?). Her "friends" think it's funny to push her into things that only the very much older kids do, but she doesn't realize that. Hence lots of exposure, and sex, even in public. Perhaps a lot of her shame comes from her family's reactions since they have the Old World values still? --Notsooldpervert (talk) 19:26, 12 February 2020 (CET)

I like what you've come up with, but what if instead of taboos and morals being more relaxed in the outer reaches of space it main difference is a class divide. What if after the first colony ships take off in the 2100s-2200s a boom in interstellar space travel technology allows those same planets the colony ships are heading to to be reached and colonized before they arrive. When they do show up in the 2400s there's already a settlement that's been established for a few decades and while they are allowed to inhabit the planet alongside them a class divide forms between the two peoples. None of the 22nd century humans know how to work this new technology so the 24th century humans look down on them as inferior and take advantage of them for their own gain/amusement.

This brings us back to Hannah. Seeing this gullible girl desperate for friends either a group of boys or girls (or a mix of both) decided to use her for their own amusement. They trick her into believing there are more lax cultural norms on taboos in the future and coerce her into trying things like exposure and casual groping. They never get caught because they only force her into this when in the 24th century areas and all the 24th century humans are either in on it or get a twisted pleasure from seeing the "lower class" get humiliated. Eventually they could push her into going naked in the 22nd century areas, to start pleasuring herself for the amusement of others, or convince her that engaging in sexual relations with family isn't just permitted, but it's expected of older siblings to teach and demonstrate their younger siblings on sexual matters. Whatever happens they'll eventually tell her the truth once she's in position for maximum humiliation, whether that means after the entire population's seen her naked, she's had sex multiple times with her brother, or they make her their personal plaything with all that entails.

The only concession I'd have to make for either of our ideas is to create a fifth category on the first page for girls whose stories are more intense and overtly sexual than the erotic titillation of all the other options. --NoGo45 (talk) 21:11, 12 February 2020 (CET)

That would work, too. Once she's pregnant with her brother's kid, (making her parents kick her out) she becomes the bedwarmer for whoever wants her that night lol Sad lot in life. Shoulda stayed on Earth. I like it being ignored by the masses because she's "just an anachronism" or something. They get her stripped down, and maybe a few strangers cop some feels (or fuck her eventually). --Notsooldpervert (talk) 01:32, 13 February 2020 (CET)

I don't think I'll go all the way to pregnancy, that's just one of my personal limits, but I'm glad you like it. --NoGo45 (talk) 01:38, 13 February 2020 (CET)

That's a shame, impregnation is right up there with loli and incest for me lol --Notsooldpervert (talk) 01:53, 13 February 2020 (CET)

For me if pregnancy is featured I prefer it as something that happens near the end of a story or after it as a sort of "where are they now" segment, just not to the point of ruining the girl's life completely, then it sucks the fun out of it for me. The humiliation genre as a whole is something I'm very particular about. Loli and incest I'm all for though, obviously lol --NoGo45 (talk) 02:07, 13 February 2020 (CET)