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I see you started to put a category on your pages, but replaced it with a link. Every story page has to have a category. Categories and links are not mutually exclusive. They can both be on the same page. Please go over your pages, and make sure each one has a category definition. --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] ([[User talk:Elerneron|talk]]) 00:08, 9 July 2021 (UTC) | I see you started to put a category on your pages, but replaced it with a link. Every story page has to have a category. Categories and links are not mutually exclusive. They can both be on the same page. Please go over your pages, and make sure each one has a category definition. --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] ([[User talk:Elerneron|talk]]) 00:08, 9 July 2021 (UTC) | ||
Just wanted to say I like the premise of your story. Hopefully his wife will get turned on by the crush and eagerly watch/encourage him to fill her quim with as much cum as possible (at least as one of the options lol). I did point out a wrong link for chapter 1.5b. On the second option of looking away, it goes directly to telling her she's grown up instead of her talking about her swimsuit first. I mentioned it in the discussion page for it (though I neglected to mention ''which'' link was incorrect), but it might get lost in the "recent changes" page before you come back to it. I'll try a link for you, though I'm not practiced with it and will probably screw it up lol [[Talk:Summer_Crushed/Chapter_1.5b|hopefully this works]] Anyway, keep up the good work, and I can't wait to see June grow addicted to having her womb filled with potent semen (or the wife I can't seem to find a name for to grow addicted to watching it). Hmm.... possible plot line... they wanted a baby and can't have one, the neighbor girl gets knocked up by some "unknown" boy, MC and wife offer to adopt it! Maybe get June in on it and eager to help "them" have a baby! --[[User:Notsooldpervert|Notsooldpervert]] ([[User talk:Notsooldpervert|talk]]) 15:58, 10 July 2021 (UTC) | |||
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You have been given Contributor Status. Please consult the Format Rules to learn how to format content for the story wiki. Thanks, and welcome to the site. --Elerneron (talk) 14:19, 8 July 2021 (UTC)
I see you started to put a category on your pages, but replaced it with a link. Every story page has to have a category. Categories and links are not mutually exclusive. They can both be on the same page. Please go over your pages, and make sure each one has a category definition. --Elerneron (talk) 00:08, 9 July 2021 (UTC)
Just wanted to say I like the premise of your story. Hopefully his wife will get turned on by the crush and eagerly watch/encourage him to fill her quim with as much cum as possible (at least as one of the options lol). I did point out a wrong link for chapter 1.5b. On the second option of looking away, it goes directly to telling her she's grown up instead of her talking about her swimsuit first. I mentioned it in the discussion page for it (though I neglected to mention which link was incorrect), but it might get lost in the "recent changes" page before you come back to it. I'll try a link for you, though I'm not practiced with it and will probably screw it up lol hopefully this works Anyway, keep up the good work, and I can't wait to see June grow addicted to having her womb filled with potent semen (or the wife I can't seem to find a name for to grow addicted to watching it). Hmm.... possible plot line... they wanted a baby and can't have one, the neighbor girl gets knocked up by some "unknown" boy, MC and wife offer to adopt it! Maybe get June in on it and eager to help "them" have a baby! --Notsooldpervert (talk) 15:58, 10 July 2021 (UTC)