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*I can take a look before dressing her: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Universal_Acceptance/Good,_she%E2%80%99s_gone._Now_you_can_keep_having_sex_with_Katie (Look at her vagina with your semen in it) | *I can take a look before dressing her: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Universal_Acceptance/Good,_she%E2%80%99s_gone._Now_you_can_keep_having_sex_with_Katie (Look at her vagina with your semen in it) | ||
*Thanks, Mom: | *Thanks, Mom: [[Universal Acceptance/Oh well, just let it happen. You will learn more about sex that way.|Oh well, just let it happen. You will learn more about sex that way.]] (Remain quiet and let your mom keep coaching Megan to have sex with you) | ||
*Stay, damnit!: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Universal_Acceptance/Then_does_this_mean_we_can_keep_having_sex%3F ('''Address this issue''' (Tell her she has to stay here till you are finished)) | *Stay, damnit!: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Universal_Acceptance/Then_does_this_mean_we_can_keep_having_sex%3F ('''Address this issue''' (Tell her she has to stay here till you are finished)) |
Revision as of 11:32, 22 September 2016
So, since I have opened this up to be a place to make requests to my stories, I am going to implement a system of placing all conversations with a specific person under the same heading with their name. I will request that you put up your material under your own heading witch can be done by placing two equals signs "==" to either side of your name witch you username after writing that in. If you forget to do so, it is Ok, I ought to be able to correct that myself. However, it will be helpful if you can either sign your name to your comments or put the heading in yourself.
Update to the policy on making requests
There is no actual rule restricting the number of requests you can make at any one time, but the priority with witch I will get to filling requests is the inverse of the number of requests being made by the same person. In other words, if you make less requests I will get to you sooner. I will recommend 3 as the go-to default, with 2, 3, and 4 being treated essentially the same if it is a one-odd thing, but it will affect the priority if you make a habit of always requesting 2 or 4 every round. If you make only 1 request, I will probably move you to the front of the line. If you make 5 or more, you will probably be back-burnered until I feel like processing you sometime a fair bit later.
Also, multiple people requesting the same option is another thing that raises priority.
Stories I will accept requests for
I am currently accepting requests for Hot Summer Job, witch was started by Villenia. It should be noted that Villenia is still the primary on this story, and I may very well reject requests for this story if I do not feel I can complete it to Villenia's standards.
I am also accepting requests for God's Compensation. This is a story I started myself. It is currently a closed story until it reaches the conclusion of the introductory portion of the story is reached. Despite being a chose-your-own-adventure format, this story has a semi chapter format where each chapter has different rules for contributing. The rules for the introductory chapter is that I am the only one allowed to write for it. (NOTE: I am currently placing requests for this story on a back-burner until I write up a lore section for the story. The lore section will be the primary focus with story requests being a lower priority.)
2T4U is the first story I started seriously writing for on this site, but I have suffered from a little bit of burn-out on that story. I have now recovered somewhat and will accept requests for it again, but they will be placed at a lower priority than requests for other stories.
I just recently opened up a new story I will accept requests for, Universal Acceptance. However, I will only accept requests for Jerry, the 12 year old male character.
EDIT: In all 3 of these stories, I will prioritize the entries I want to write in order to stave off the same kind of burn out that I experienced wit 2T4U. I will refer to requested items when I am feeling the bug to write but feel no particular self-motivated inspiration for a particular entry. (Witch, considering writing is a favorite pass-time of mine, happens several times a week, so don't feel that this means you will be ignored completely for long periods of time.)
Update
I have somewhat recovered from the extreme burn-out I was experiencing from 2T4U, but I still am having a hard time bringing myself to writing the contents of the "suspended" boxes. I suspect this might have to do with me having forced myself too much to write for entries that did not entirely appeal to me, witch roughly 30% of those requests do not. I will now accept new requests for 2T4U, but the suspended items will remain as they are for now.
I have just started a new story I am accepting requests for, Universal Acceptance. Since this is the newest story I am participating in, it is the one the creative juices are freshest on. As such, requests on this story will receive a higher priority for a while until it starts to turn stale for me.
Elerneron
I didn't have any specific ideas on Jack's sexual experience. I was going to let storytelling decide most of that. So whatever you want to do is fine with me. --Elerneron (talk) 07:11, 16 October 2015 (CEST)
Thanks for the compliment on Fairly OddParents: Timmy's Awakening. I'm a pretty big fan of the show, and the potential for sexual mayhem is through the roof with the base concept. I was torn between it and a few other cartoons I know really well like Phineas and Ferb, American Dragon Jake Long, Jimmy Neutron, and Ben 10 (Original). The freedom of the setting won me over even though some of the others would probably be more popular. American Dragon and Ben 10 in particular have much more inciting graphics, but I hate how Jake and his friends talk, and Ben 10 has been done to death ... and cousin incest isn't as appealing to me as immediate family incest. I would have gone for Danny Phantom, but I'm not as familiar with the toon as I'd like to be before I would start writing for it. I almost did it anyway just because of Dani (Danny's hot younger female clone, rowr)and Jazz and Maddie didn't hurt either. Maybe I should find more episodes and bone-up . . . there are a LOT of hotties in that show. Anyway, thanks again. --Elerneron (talk) 05:11, 6 January 2016 (CET)
To make a category page into a subcategory, instead of giving it the story type as the category [[Category:Meta Stories]]
use the category that you want it to be a subcategory of [[Category:God's Compensation]]
--Elerneron (talk) 06:53, 10 April 2016 (CEST)
Okay, if you want to make a page part of more than one category just type in more than one category on that page. For instance if a page is in the story God's Compensation but also part of chapter one you would put something like this when you put the category on the page [[Category:God's Compensation]][[Category:God's Compensation/Chapter One]]
. Now when you go to that page it will show two categories. Now for the category page for God's Compensation you have:
An index of the pages in the story [[God's Compensation]]. [[Category:Meta Stories]]
When you create the category page for God's Compensation/Chapter One, instead of of making the page like that, do something like this:
An index of the pages in chapter one of the story [[God's Compensation]]. [[Category:God's Compensation]]
You can always check out how I made the subcategories for Generations Here is the Category Page Category:Generations If you go into one of the subcategories, you can see how I made them into subcategories. --Elerneron (talk) 10:56, 10 April 2016 (CEST)
You did it in the exact opposite way from how you need to do it. You need to put the name of the Main Category as the Category of the Sub-Category. I fixed the category pages, so you can see how I did it. --Elerneron (talk) 00:04, 13 April 2016 (CEST)
There is a page in the format rules telling you how to upload and use image files Format Rules/Pictures. --Elerneron (talk) 15:02, 18 April 2016 (CEST)
I fixed the problem you had with your template display. You had just closed the template after P1, so it didn't include P2. I just move the closing brackets to after the P2 entry. It's usually little things like that which trip one up . . . happens to me all the time. Putting the closing brackets on their own line will probably help, so I did that. --Elerneron (talk) 11:42, 15 September 2016 (CEST)
TerryAce
Time to advance more plots.
https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Stop_and_find_some_excuse_to_remove_your_cloths (pounce back on her and continuing wrestling)
https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Let_Larissa_have_her_fun_with_Kylie (slide down between Kylie's legs and give her a tasre of her own medicine)
https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Take_a_moment_to_adjust_yourself (take Bree's dress all the way off)
Suspended:Not planning to work on these any time in the near future
COMPLETED
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/nature_trail/%E2%80%9Cfort%E2%80%9D/Get_her_attention_and_scare_the_shit_out_of_her (ask her who she is and what she's doing)
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Morning/Fiona%27s/Hell,_after_that_exchange,_you_bet_you_actually_COULD_just_rape_her_and_even_get_away_with_it (find something to gag her with first)
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Matthew/Morning/Brittany/You_need_some_light (go get a flashlight)
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Morning/Fiona%27s/Rape_Samantha/Find_something_to_gag_her_with_first (Not joking, now put the gag in and get on with it)
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Matthew/Morning/Brittany/Go_get_a_flash_light (stick with the story. It's all that's keeping you sane)
https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Point_out_that_she%27s_not_naked (grab her and toss her on the bed) Hot Summer Job request: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Check_on_Larissa_in_the_living_room (Go see what Kylie the Nudist is doing) https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Slip_your_finger_inside_your_sister (Be bold (Ask if she likes that) https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Remain_seated_and_keep_staring (it would be a shame to waste such an amazing erection) https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Bust_a_nut_on_these_girls (offer Rissa an orgasm) https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Offer_Rissa_an_orgasm (fuck her properly as soon as you get hard again) https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Get_yourself_into_a_more_comfortable_position_so_you_can_enjoy_this (Bree’s been literally begging for it, go give her what she wants) https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Go_see_what_Kylie_is_doing (Hold her up: apologize to her) https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Do_something_with_this_erection (wait here for a bit,who cares if the girls catch you now) https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Grab_her_from_behind_and_toss_her_on_her_bed (stop and find some reason to remove your clothes)
Notsooldpervert
--Notsooldpervert (talk) 21:29, 24 August 2016 (CEST)
FYI I list my requests first by the date I've requested them, then in order of my preference of story lines. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 00:13, 19 July 2016 (CEST)
2T4U Requests New story line!
- Then again, the hard to get angle might make her a little more forgiving on the marriage thing: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Morning/Blakes/Tell_her_you_will_keep_her_company (Refuse, you can’t do this with a kid!)
- Taste that puss and get it wet-n-ready: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Morning/Blakes/Accept,_go_bring_her_to_her_room (Engage in a little fore-play with her)
- Hmm... tough choice: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Ellen/Morning/Jack/from_bed/Ask_him_what%27s_wrong (Tell him you need your pussy satisfied)
HSJ Requests If you want me to do this differently, let me know.
- Slipping her some dick might be moving a little too fast for her: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Ask_if_she_likes_that (Milk your dare a little harder as you do more with her pussy)
- Hmmm... maybe I can re-charge a bit, then slip out to see Carie: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Take_her_to_her_own_room,_that_seems_more_appropriate Stop this and sober up (Take a shower, clean up and sober up)
- She don't bleed, she can't breed: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/You_ought_to_complete_her_education,_including_periods_pregnancy_and_all_the_important_things Keep her like this (Calm her down and tell her you won’t put a baby in her and talk about how sex can be fun)
- Then again, maybe she wants it: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Tell_her_it_comes_out_of_boys_when_they_feel_good (Convince her to let you put it inside her pussy)
- Maybe Kylie is just jealous: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Keep_allowing_yourself_to_be_%E2%80%9Ctoo_weak%E2%80%9D_to_stop_it (This is an unjustifiable position, but try to find some way to justify your role in this)
God's Compensation Interesting premise.
- There's gotta be a down side: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=God%E2%80%99s_Compensation/A_strange_visitor/Ask_what_it_would_mean_for_you_to_be_a_vassal (Express concern over what other gods will think of this and if you will get in trouble)
Universal Acceptance That would be a fun power!
- I can take a look before dressing her: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Universal_Acceptance/Good,_she%E2%80%99s_gone._Now_you_can_keep_having_sex_with_Katie (Look at her vagina with your semen in it)
- Thanks, Mom: Oh well, just let it happen. You will learn more about sex that way. (Remain quiet and let your mom keep coaching Megan to have sex with you)
- Stay, damnit!: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Universal_Acceptance/Then_does_this_mean_we_can_keep_having_sex%3F (Address this issue (Tell her she has to stay here till you are finished))
- Calm down: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Universal_Acceptance/Maybe_this_is_what_sex_is_supposed_to_feel_like,_keep_moving (Use your power to calm her down)
- Nothing they haven't seen: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Universal_Acceptance/Persuade_Trish_that_it_will_be_fun_to_have_sex (Take your cloths off and get ready for sex)
Suspended:Not planning to work on these any time in the near future
- Gotta go with: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Melony/Jack_intrudes/En-Cons/Complain_you_haven%27t_gotten_off_yet_and_have_him_help_you_his_way (Just accept that you are going to get caught and enjoy the sensation while it lasts)
- Easy now, I want to fuck her not just stick it in and cum: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Morning/Missy/Fuck_it!_See_if_you_can_actually_penetrate_her_without_waking_her_up (Stop here for a second and calm it down)
- Almost there: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Morning/Fiona%27s/Keep_talking_to_her_a_little_longer_to_convince_her_she_wants_it (Not quite enough to count as permission, keep working on her: Assure her you'll teach her)
COMPLETED 2T4U
- Let's see what he does: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Ellen/Morning/Jack/Call_out_and_stop_him_and_have_him_come_in_%28Leave_yourself_exposed%29 (Ask him what's wrong) Standing or laying in bed?Jemini (talk) 23:14, 2 February 2016 (CET) Laying down, sorry. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 00:44, 4 February 2016 (CET)
HSJ
- Wow! Don't have to do anything to move forward: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Have_her_rub_it_on_her_slit (Keep allowing yourself to be “too weak” to stop it)
God's Compensation
- I can do this!: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=God%E2%80%99s_Compensation/6D_explanation/You_want_to_try_getting_yourself_back_into_the_time-stream_in_your_own_body Try something from here (Another try at 4D travel)
- What do I need to do?: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=God%E2%80%99s_Compensation/Another_try_at_4D_travel (Ask for more details about this “6D trick”)
Universal Acceptance
- I can always make them forget later: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Universal_Acceptance/Why_do_you_have_to_get_married%3F (Oh well, just let it happen. You will learn more about sex that way.)
- The "twin" thing is kinda kinky: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Universal_Acceptance/You_want_to_have_sex_with_Sarah (Just stay like this and wait, they will be back soon)
- I know it's wrong, but having mom watch is just so much fun: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Universal_Acceptance/Just_stay_like_this_and_wait,_they_will_be_back_soon (Make your mom stay and show you how to do it.)
- I'm gonna see her in a minute anyway: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Universal_Acceptance/Stop_her_and_have_her_help_you_have_sex_with_Trish (Use your powers to tell her it’s Ok for you to look)
- She really wants to, she's just shy: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Universal_Acceptance/Use_your_powers_to_tell_her_it%E2%80%99s_Ok_for_you_to_look (You know you can “persuade” Trish (Persuade Trish that it will be fun to have sex))
- If it's an unfair rule, we should change it: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Universal_Acceptance/You_think_she_is_lying_to_you (Well, you already know how to deal with rules like that)
- I like it: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Universal_Acceptance/Just_try_to_put_it_in_slimy_like_this_with_her_asleep But you still sort of like it (Maybe this is what sex is supposed to feel like, keep moving)
- So we can still do this?: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Universal_Acceptance/Make_your_mom_stay_and_show_you_how_to_do_it (Then does this mean we can keep having sex?)
BakaG
How's it going? I just added a page to 2T4U. Please tell me what you think of it. Especially whether it fits the characters properly.
https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Tell_him_why_he_can%27t_pee
10/15 - Thanks for looking it over. I plan to add a few more pages to one of the "find some clothes" path in the next few days, inspiration willing.
Also, yeah. I did get a bit ahead of myself there. I was in a groove and couldn't stop. Thanks also for dividing the page up. Lots of interesting options just waiting to be filled out now. :P
10/23 - This was both easier and harder than the last one. Enjoy my latest addition! I was going to do more but I figured that was a fine place to stop for a choice.
https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Aaron_Sissy/Attic
1/5/16 - Sorry for acting more like an editor than a writer. I keep asking my muse for inspiration but every time she throws a keyboard at me, yells "PTFO YOU FUCKING NOOB!", then slams the door in my face. :P
1/22/16 - And it's done. Went in a slightly different direction than I planned but I'm satisfied with it for now. Hopefully the next part won't take as long.
5/30/16 - Even as another project has distracted me, I find myself bored with Aaron/Anna. Perhaps another character would be more interesting. Perhaps Jack's girlfriend, and how Jack stumbled into their incestuous carpet munching, or perhaps a teammate of Jack's who has a younger brother he can sissy up. Any suggestions?
Fallen-King
Thank you for filling out my requests so far and thanks in advance for any more you do.
Suspended:Not planning to work on these any time in the near future
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Shower/Confront_both/shower/You_want_to_enjoy_them_both (Demand that he get more involved)
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Maybe_the_hospital_could_hold_some_fun_times%3F (You could start curing the terminal patients)
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Tiffany%27s_room/Ass/Command_her_to_stop_clinching (Throw her over your knee and spank her for disobeying you)
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Blake/Tiffany/Pull_out_before_you_finish_and_cum_on_her_body (Grab her head and put it in her mouth)
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Raping_Melony/Can%27t_seem_to_pull_out._Tell_her_you_will_be_done_in_a_minute (Make him clean your cock and Melony's cunt)
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Morning/Melony%27s_room/F-Mel-Missy(r)/Change_pussies (Like hell he's going to be the first to tap that pussy)
COMPLETED
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Shower/Confront_both/Drop_your_towel_and_show_them_both_what_you_think_Aaron_probably_wanted_to_show_Missy (Invite them to shower with you)
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Shower/Confront_both/Mentor/Invite_them_to_shower_with_you (You want to enjoy them both)
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Walk_Bandit_on_the_nature_trail (Command Bandit to keep moving)
Doggod
2T4U
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Try_to_possess_your_dog_Bandit (Go upstairs and see your family)
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Run_into_second_floor_hallway (Run past. You need something in the immediate area and going in would waste time you don't have)
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Blake/Tiffany/Try_to_fuck_your_little_baby_girl (You have to stop because someone else comes in)
HSJ
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/You_are_supposed_to_be_demonstrating_for_Bree,_wait_for_her_to_be_ready (Ignore Larissa. There are a couple of free orifices you could just as easily sink your dick into right here)
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Don%27t_push_it_for_now,_but_enjoy_having_your_dick_inside_her_like_this_for_as_long_as_you_can_get_away_with (To hell with the pretense, fuck your sister on the couch)
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Just_keep_watching_the_movie (Let Bree watch the movie on your lap)
Suspended:Not planning to work on these any time in the near future
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Tiffany%27s_room/After_bite_and_kiss/doubts/talk/Stick_a_finger_inside (Assure her you will be careful)
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Morning/Beating_off/Change_to_Tiffany%27s_room (She is probably asleep, creep in quietly)
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Bandit_on_the_nature_trail/Command_Bandit_to_keep_moving (Go off the trail and just butt-fuck Bandit)
COMPLETED
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Shower/Confront_both/Order_them_both_to_strip_naked_right_here (Drop your towel and show them both what you think Aaron probably wanted to show Missy)
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Tiffany%27s_room/After_bite_and_kiss/doubts/Tell_her_if_she_sucks_your_dick,_you_will_make_her_pussy_feel_good_too (Proceed while talking, stick a finger inside)
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Shower/Confront_both/Drop_your_towel_and_show_them_both_what_you_think_Aaron_probably_wanted_to_show_Missy (Pounce on him and strip him)
SA
I do have my heart set on making something happen between Missy and Bandit but I am not that good of a writer. Also sorry if this isn't how Im meant to use the talk feature I've never used a system like it before so yeah.
26/11/15: Ok i will get round to that at some point. Sorry for any inconvenience
19/12/15: Sorry it took me so long. Life hit hard but I changed it a bit. I hope the changes are ok. I just wanted to get bandit involved with the action and I SHOULD have made it so he can get involved with any of the other characters.
22/12/15: I suck at writing so sorry for that. Any advice on changes for the better and how I could write future chapters without fucking up?
I'll agree with that. I eventually want to see all the girls become cum hungry sluts eagerly spreading their legs for cock: Man or boy's, human or not. ~~Notsooldpervert
Villenia
Feel free to contribute however you like. I find collaborative writing inspiring. No sense stifling anyone's creativity. But I'll try to inch that branch along if that will help you out.
Feel free to go nuts. It's a totally blank slate story-wise. Feel free to add options as well, don't feel restricted to what I've laid down. I envision Kylie as bi although leaning towards girls. She's just fallen into that hormone avalanche making her obsess about sex, but she's still a virgin making her inexperienced and basically lying/faking her confidence.
Been busy lately, but I'm still around. That exact scene I hadn't planned out at all. I know you thought this of Kylie before, but I had pegged Larissa as the one with the proper crush on Riley. Rissa is trying to get Riley to like her, to be interested in her. She's a bit of a smart aleck but equally as bubbly. Getting Riley alone in her room would be an excuse to show off how cool she is and get closer to him, both touchy-feelie and pushy-shovie.
SkankWriter
I want to do something else, but it should have the option of matching up, how would you word it?
You can go ahead and change it, no problem. I guess it just didn't come off to me as how the curse worked, from previous entries, but change what ever you need to. Hopefully, the Ellen/Tiffany bit isn't too bad though
Define touch...is the licking okay if that is all it is? --SkankWriter (talk) 11:12, 15 January 2016 (CET)
Crimsonlion
COMPLETED
- I really like the work you've done for Hot Summer Job. Could you continue with Bree and give her what she wants? Standing and on the couch are both good, but I'd also like to go up into her room and take her on her bed. Thanks!
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Keep_playing_ignorant,_you_want_to_actually_hear_her_say_it (Hot Summer Job/Take Bree to the couch)
Gisèle de Rais
Alexander's lack of interest in that scene is not so much an important character point as it is an excuse for me to diverge the characters from each other a little bit. I will probably end up doing some of the same scenes with Alexander as I have set up for Alexis in that situation, just at a different stage.
I will say that Alexander/Alexis do not have the same files on their devices. The file that Lacey is listening to at the moment is a different one in Alexander's branch. The explosion is important, though probably not for any reason anybody could have guessed at this point.
Also, Alexander's alone time is a more important point than it seems, and points like it will be found throughout the story on both sides. I don't care if that makes the story more widespread and varied than I have any right to make it when combined with the main plot threads, I have ideas and I'd like to explore them. This will all make more sense to you once I've actually implemented one of those branches.
Feel free to send me your theories, however. You may trick me into revealing more than I plan to. That being said, this story may progress much more slowly than I would prefer due to a lot of real life factors, so I apologize in advance for any lingering suspense that may cause. Gisèle de Rais (talk) 07:28, 5 June 2016 (CEST)
Privitude
In order of preference:
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Keep_stripping_Larissa (Turn your focus to Kylie)
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Ask_Larissa_how_it_feels_to_be_as_naked_as_you_are (Mention to Carrie that they are now the ones overdressed)
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Push_Carrie_away._You_can%27t_cum_yet. (Keep teasing her and slide your cock against her panties) - there's a period at the end of the link that doesn't seem to get entered when you click it...