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Here's the map of this section after the refactoring.
<pre>
(*) Smoking
(*) |-- Film them
    |-- Join
(*) `-- Burst In
(*)    |-- Grab Everyone
(1)    |-- Matt and Lili
(1)    |-- August
(*)    `-- Thiana
            |-- Mattress
            |-- Interrogate
(*)        `-- Office
(*)            |-- Other staff
(2)            |  |-- Secretary
(2)            |  |-- Headmaster
                |  |-- Janitor
(2)            |  `-- All
(*)            |-- Diaper
(3)            |  `-- Nurse
(*)            |-- Rape
                |  |-- Oral
                |  |-- Anal
                |  |-- Diaper
(3)            |  `-- Nurse
(*)            |-- Clean up
(*)            |  |-- Explain
                |  |-- Embarrass
                |  |-- Expose
(*)            |  `-- Interrogate
(*)            `-- Interrogate
(*)                |-- Clean up
(*)                |-- Confer
(*)                |  |-- Names
(*)                |  |-- Lighter
(*)                |  `-- Harder
(*)                `-- Options
(*)                    |-- 4 times
(4)                    |-- 4 days
(4)                    |-- Diaper whore
(4)                    |-- Choice
(*)                    `-- Impregnate
(*) - Parts already written.
(1) - What happens when the other students are detained in-situ.
(2) - Can be called to help for sex or for interrogation, so must cover both.
(3) - End of scene, after leaving Tihana with the nurse.
(4) - Description of other decided punishments.
</pre>
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I'd like to add an option. Burst in with your phone out recording video of the encounter. That can be used to identify them later, and add to their infractions by showing they disobeyed a teacher. --[[User:Notsooldpervert|Notsooldpervert]] ([[User talk:Notsooldpervert|talk]]) 03:58, 7 September 2017 (CEST)
I'd like to add an option. Burst in with your phone out recording video of the encounter. That can be used to identify them later, and add to their infractions by showing they disobeyed a teacher. --[[User:Notsooldpervert|Notsooldpervert]] ([[User talk:Notsooldpervert|talk]]) 03:58, 7 September 2017 (CEST)


I added the option. In the future feel free to add the option yourself (and likely request it as well), I'm more than willing to accept more involvement in the story. --[[User:Tod Naturlich|Tod Naturlich]] ([[User talk:Tod Naturlich|talk]]) 04:50, 7 September 2017 (CEST)
I added the option. In the future feel free to add the option yourself (and likely request it as well), I'm more than willing to accept more involvement in the story. --[[User:Tod Naturlich|Tod Naturlich]] ([[User talk:Tod Naturlich|talk]]) 04:50, 7 September 2017 (CEST)

Latest revision as of 06:59, 21 December 2017

Here's the map of this section after the refactoring.

(*) Smoking
(*) |-- Film them
    |-- Join
(*) `-- Burst In
(*)     |-- Grab Everyone
(1)     |-- Matt and Lili
(1)     |-- August
(*)     `-- Thiana
            |-- Mattress
            |-- Interrogate
(*)         `-- Office
(*)             |-- Other staff
(2)             |   |-- Secretary
(2)             |   |-- Headmaster
                |   |-- Janitor
(2)             |   `-- All
(*)             |-- Diaper
(3)             |   `-- Nurse
(*)             |-- Rape
                |   |-- Oral
                |   |-- Anal
                |   |-- Diaper
(3)             |   `-- Nurse
(*)             |-- Clean up
(*)             |   |-- Explain
                |   |-- Embarrass
                |   |-- Expose
(*)             |   `-- Interrogate
(*)             `-- Interrogate
(*)                 |-- Clean up
(*)                 |-- Confer
(*)                 |   |-- Names
(*)                 |   |-- Lighter
(*)                 |   `-- Harder
(*)                 `-- Options
(*)                     |-- 4 times
(4)                     |-- 4 days 
(4)                     |-- Diaper whore 
(4)                     |-- Choice
(*)                     `-- Impregnate


(*) - Parts already written.
(1) - What happens when the other students are detained in-situ.
(2) - Can be called to help for sex or for interrogation, so must cover both.
(3) - End of scene, after leaving Tihana with the nurse.
(4) - Description of other decided punishments.

I'd like to add an option. Burst in with your phone out recording video of the encounter. That can be used to identify them later, and add to their infractions by showing they disobeyed a teacher. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 03:58, 7 September 2017 (CEST)

I added the option. In the future feel free to add the option yourself (and likely request it as well), I'm more than willing to accept more involvement in the story. --Tod Naturlich (talk) 04:50, 7 September 2017 (CEST)