Talk:Disciplinary Action/Disciplinary Office

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Should we add an option here for the second week at work? A few minor instances, and the continuing impregnation of the drinkers, and further corruption of Pearl and/or other girls who like the attention? --Notsooldpervert (talk) 22:40, 30 December 2017 (CET)


Sure I see no reason why not. --Telgar (talk) 13:53, 30 December 2017 (CET)


Since I don't want to drag the story too much, I decided to divide the school year into three separate segments, each one longer than the last. The first is the first week, which by now it's almost full and I'm working on streamlining it for ease of completion down the road. This segment comprises the first week of september.

The second part of the story encompasses everything that happens during the rest of that first school quarter, so everything from the second week of work until the end of the year, including the holiday break.

The third and final part will be the rest of the school year, beginning in january and ending with a bang during the summer break, where Dr. Hartell publishes her successful trial, and all hell descends upon town. The fate of John and those he cares about will be decided by the authors at that point.--Tod Naturlich (talk) 06:00, 2 January 2018 (CET)