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The only thing I'm doubtful about here is if Luana would allow things to go that far. While the boys would not know about sex and rape, both Luana and Diya would, and Diya would have no reason to keep quiet at home about it. And I'm quite sure after the first time Luana would go and kick August's ass so hard there would be no repeat. What I think is thing were not so bad, with August and followers just calling her nasty names and trying to flip her skirt, the same things Luana had endured, so she would not react so violently. Also, Luana is aware she won't always be around to protect her sister, and has tried to help her form some kind of support group, rewarding those that help her sister, besides punishing those that harm her. | The only thing I'm doubtful about here is if Luana would allow things to go that far. While the boys would not know about sex and rape, both Luana and Diya would, and Diya would have no reason to keep quiet at home about it. And I'm quite sure after the first time Luana would go and kick August's ass so hard there would be no repeat. What I think is thing were not so bad, with August and followers just calling her nasty names and trying to flip her skirt, the same things Luana had endured, so she would not react so violently. Also, Luana is aware she won't always be around to protect her sister, and has tried to help her form some kind of support group, rewarding those that help her sister, besides punishing those that harm her. | ||
Perhaps things started getting worse this school year, after August started molesting his sister, and indeed tried to do something to Diya, which is what triggered the threat that landed Luana in the office. --[[User:Tod Naturlich|Tod Naturlich]] ([[User talk:Tod Naturlich|talk]]) 01:03, 3 October 2017 (CEST) | |||
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Yeah, that makes sense. Glad we talked it out on this one. [[User:Jemini|Jemini]] ([[User talk:Jemini|talk]]) 01:30, 3 October 2017 (CEST) | |||
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I’m extremely happy with the way you treated Luana here. I was afraid you would take things too far, but you nailed her personality, so either I made a good job of establishing that in the few paragraphs she has, or you’re really psychic. --Tod Naturlich (talk) 16:35, 2 October 2017 (CEST)
I always put in quite the effort to understanding a character somebody else established before utilizing them, it's kinda one of my talents.
EDIT: By the way, I was also thinking of having a route here that discusses exactly what they're doing with her sister. I'm thinking the worst bullies are August Fine and Freddy Lefort, and if August pulls off his sister's pants and molests her, I'm thinking there's going to be something quite a bit worse and certainly of a sexual nature he's doing with Diya. Not outright rape, but definitely very severe sexual assault that comes just shy of rape. (The only thing likely keeping it from being rape is that he doesn't actually know what sex is.) And of course, the school's turning a deliberate blind eye to it despite the fact they've reported it. (In fact, her abuse by these bullies may even be the reason the guidelines are written to punish girls more severely for sexual activity than boys, so if a teacher ever saw them assaulting her, her case would be brought one step further to where she'd be the only one getting punished.) Jemini (talk) 17:31, 2 October 2017 (CEST)
The only thing I'm doubtful about here is if Luana would allow things to go that far. While the boys would not know about sex and rape, both Luana and Diya would, and Diya would have no reason to keep quiet at home about it. And I'm quite sure after the first time Luana would go and kick August's ass so hard there would be no repeat. What I think is thing were not so bad, with August and followers just calling her nasty names and trying to flip her skirt, the same things Luana had endured, so she would not react so violently. Also, Luana is aware she won't always be around to protect her sister, and has tried to help her form some kind of support group, rewarding those that help her sister, besides punishing those that harm her.
Perhaps things started getting worse this school year, after August started molesting his sister, and indeed tried to do something to Diya, which is what triggered the threat that landed Luana in the office. --Tod Naturlich (talk) 01:03, 3 October 2017 (CEST)
Yeah, that makes sense. Glad we talked it out on this one. Jemini (talk) 01:30, 3 October 2017 (CEST)