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1. I have already used that one. 2. Doesn't fit Julia's character as written in the bio. She wanted to move out of town when she first heard about the sexual punishments, and the reason she decided not to be so concerned was because all her kids were "good kids" who she thought wouldn't get in trouble enough to be subject to this punishment. I like ignorant impregnation, but I really don't see a good route to it with this one. [[User:Jemini|Jemini]] ([[User talk:Jemini|talk]]) 02:41, 26 November 2019 (UTC)
1. I have already used that one. 2. Doesn't fit Julia's character as written in the bio. She wanted to move out of town when she first heard about the sexual punishments, and the reason she decided not to be so concerned was because all her kids were "good kids" who she thought wouldn't get in trouble enough to be subject to this punishment. I like ignorant impregnation, but I really don't see a good route to it with this one. [[User:Jemini|Jemini]] ([[User talk:Jemini|talk]]) 02:41, 26 November 2019 (UTC)
Well... to get the ball rolling, how about a dress code violation? Catrina likes her ethnic clothing, so she gets sent to the MC for it. When she gets to the office, Liliana or Tihana are coming out of his office and she overhears that the girl in question is or will be pregnant in no time. When she's in there, she asks, quite innocently, about why the girl is getting pregnant and how can ''she'' do the same? --[[User:Notsooldpervert|Notsooldpervert]] ([[User talk:Notsooldpervert|talk]]) 02:56, 27 November 2019 (UTC)
The dress code only applies to middle school and older, I made a mistake with an elementary aged girl having a school uniform skirt but that needs to be corrected. (Problem is, I forget who that was.) Anyway, since Catrina is in 4th grade, she is still in elementary school. [[User:Jemini|Jemini]] ([[User talk:Jemini|talk]]) 11:19, 27 November 2019 (UTC)
There's still the option of her being sent to the office for something minor, like talking in class or something, then overhearing a conversation she's not supposed to hear. Perhaps one of the Curtis sisters is sitting in on the punishment for one of the forced impreg girls, and he's discussing things with the teacher as the student leaves. With the door open, Catrina hears about the student getting pregnant with this punishment soon. Needs a fair bit of other threads to fill in for that. Of course the staff interviews are taking place in the first couple of weeks, so, timeline wise it wouldn't be that long. Perhaps there's another teacher who would enjoy helping and/or talking about it afterward. Oooh! Mrs. Eckles! She and Alycia are there for their daily dose, and Catrina could overhear something, or Alycia can happily call out something to them as she leaves the room (since she's so eager to get knocked up). --[[User:Notsooldpervert|Notsooldpervert]] ([[User talk:Notsooldpervert|talk]]) 19:29, 27 November 2019 (UTC)

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You know what, reading these bio's gets me thinking of potential story arcs.

If her daughter Catrina accidentally let's it slip that her mom Julia can't get pregnant, Mr. Gardener could offer her Dr. Hartnell's treatment in exchange for sex with Catrina.

Would the treatment help in this situation? --MrPib (talk) 04:08, 25 November 2019 (UTC)


Dr. Hartnell's treatment triggers early puberty and increases fertility, it sounds more like the mom's condition has to do with a damaged reproductive system which would not be fixed by the treatment. However, Catrina has already thought of getting pregnant for her mother. She could very easily get in trouble intentionally in order to get herself pregnant if she happens to find out about that being the punishment. I have actually already thought of that potential story line I just described and am just trying to find a scenario for Julia to find out. It's not as easy as it sounds on it's face since the current policy is that the students should not know about the sexual punishments until it's basically too late for them, and it's even implied that they shouldn't be made aware sex makes babies even when they are receiving one pregnancy risk punishment after another and the language is supposed to be wrapped around damages to their purity. Jemini (talk) 07:27, 25 November 2019 (UTC)


Possibilities I have thought of include hearing it from her friends, which happen to include Diya and also your nieces/daughters. She could find out from any of them quite easily. She could also find out from her teacher if she starts asking too many questions about how babies are made. The 4th grade teacher seems especially skittish about the subject, so she seems likely to try to shut the kid up by letting slip that getting into trouble and recieving a pregnancy risk punishment is something that can get her pregnant at her age. Jemini (talk) 07:46, 25 November 2019 (UTC)


Another possibility would be her aunt Daniela. --MrPib (talk) 07:53, 25 November 2019 (UTC) (had originally said cousin)

Could also be a tad more... sinister. Julia wants another baby bad enough that she gets Catrina in trouble on purpose (perhaps making her consistently late for school?) so that she "earns" a pregnancy risk or purposeful impregnation punishment. That way, Catrina doesn't even need to know. She doesn't figure it out until Julia is so happy that Catrina is going to have a baby then she starts getting in trouble on purpose to "help" her mother have more babies. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 21:35, 25 November 2019 (UTC)

1. I have already used that one. 2. Doesn't fit Julia's character as written in the bio. She wanted to move out of town when she first heard about the sexual punishments, and the reason she decided not to be so concerned was because all her kids were "good kids" who she thought wouldn't get in trouble enough to be subject to this punishment. I like ignorant impregnation, but I really don't see a good route to it with this one. Jemini (talk) 02:41, 26 November 2019 (UTC)

Well... to get the ball rolling, how about a dress code violation? Catrina likes her ethnic clothing, so she gets sent to the MC for it. When she gets to the office, Liliana or Tihana are coming out of his office and she overhears that the girl in question is or will be pregnant in no time. When she's in there, she asks, quite innocently, about why the girl is getting pregnant and how can she do the same? --Notsooldpervert (talk) 02:56, 27 November 2019 (UTC)

The dress code only applies to middle school and older, I made a mistake with an elementary aged girl having a school uniform skirt but that needs to be corrected. (Problem is, I forget who that was.) Anyway, since Catrina is in 4th grade, she is still in elementary school. Jemini (talk) 11:19, 27 November 2019 (UTC)

There's still the option of her being sent to the office for something minor, like talking in class or something, then overhearing a conversation she's not supposed to hear. Perhaps one of the Curtis sisters is sitting in on the punishment for one of the forced impreg girls, and he's discussing things with the teacher as the student leaves. With the door open, Catrina hears about the student getting pregnant with this punishment soon. Needs a fair bit of other threads to fill in for that. Of course the staff interviews are taking place in the first couple of weeks, so, timeline wise it wouldn't be that long. Perhaps there's another teacher who would enjoy helping and/or talking about it afterward. Oooh! Mrs. Eckles! She and Alycia are there for their daily dose, and Catrina could overhear something, or Alycia can happily call out something to them as she leaves the room (since she's so eager to get knocked up). --Notsooldpervert (talk) 19:29, 27 November 2019 (UTC)