Talk:A Loli's ENF Adventure/Sally/Pleasure: Difference between revisions
Created page with "She's out of it enough to forget to get dressed, and the kitchen puts her farther away from clothes if someone comes in or the doorbell rings lol --~~~~" |
No edit summary |
||
| (3 intermediate revisions by 2 users not shown) | |||
| Line 1: | Line 1: | ||
She's out of it enough to forget to get dressed, and the kitchen puts her farther away from clothes if someone comes in or the doorbell rings lol --[[User:Notsooldpervert|Notsooldpervert]] ([[User talk:Notsooldpervert|talk]]) 06:59, 20 January 2020 (CET) | She's out of it enough to forget to get dressed, and the kitchen puts her farther away from clothes if someone comes in or the doorbell rings lol --[[User:Notsooldpervert|Notsooldpervert]] ([[User talk:Notsooldpervert|talk]]) 06:59, 20 January 2020 (CET) | ||
This was my first attempt at writing masturbation/orgasm scene, any thoughts, comments, or opinions? --[[User:NoGo45|NoGo45]] ([[User talk:NoGo45|talk]]) 07:09, 20 January 2020 (CET) | |||
I thought it flowed quite well. I didn't realize it was your first scene of that nature, which is rather telling in and of itself. Well done. I do like watching pre-teens have orgasms lol --[[User:Notsooldpervert|Notsooldpervert]] ([[User talk:Notsooldpervert|talk]]) 07:10, 20 January 2020 (CET) | |||
I guess now I can say I know how to bring girls to orgasm lol. Seriously though thank you for the complement, as an aspiring writer it's good to know I have some talent to work with, even if that talent's writing smut, I guess. --[[User:NoGo45|NoGo45]] ([[User talk:NoGo45|talk]]) 07:19, 20 January 2020 (CET) | |||
Well, I, for one, look forward to much more smut from you lol --[[User:Notsooldpervert|Notsooldpervert]] ([[User talk:Notsooldpervert|talk]]) 07:21, 20 January 2020 (CET) | |||
Latest revision as of 06:21, 20 January 2020
She's out of it enough to forget to get dressed, and the kitchen puts her farther away from clothes if someone comes in or the doorbell rings lol --Notsooldpervert (talk) 06:59, 20 January 2020 (CET)
This was my first attempt at writing masturbation/orgasm scene, any thoughts, comments, or opinions? --NoGo45 (talk) 07:09, 20 January 2020 (CET)
I thought it flowed quite well. I didn't realize it was your first scene of that nature, which is rather telling in and of itself. Well done. I do like watching pre-teens have orgasms lol --Notsooldpervert (talk) 07:10, 20 January 2020 (CET)
I guess now I can say I know how to bring girls to orgasm lol. Seriously though thank you for the complement, as an aspiring writer it's good to know I have some talent to work with, even if that talent's writing smut, I guess. --NoGo45 (talk) 07:19, 20 January 2020 (CET)
Well, I, for one, look forward to much more smut from you lol --Notsooldpervert (talk) 07:21, 20 January 2020 (CET)