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This was my first attempt at writing masturbation/orgasm scene, any thoughts, comments, or opinions? --[[User:NoGo45|NoGo45]] ([[User talk:NoGo45|talk]]) 07:09, 20 January 2020 (CET) | This was my first attempt at writing masturbation/orgasm scene, any thoughts, comments, or opinions? --[[User:NoGo45|NoGo45]] ([[User talk:NoGo45|talk]]) 07:09, 20 January 2020 (CET) | ||
I thought it flowed quite well. I didn't realize it was your first scene of that nature, which is rather telling in and of itself. Well done. I do like watching pre-teens have orgasms lol --[[User:Notsooldpervert|Notsooldpervert]] ([[User talk:Notsooldpervert|talk]]) 07:10, 20 January 2020 (CET) | |||
I guess now I can say I know how to bring girls to orgasm lol. Seriously though thank you for the complement, as an aspiring writer it's good to know I have some talent to work with, even if that talent's writing smut, I guess. --[[User:NoGo45|NoGo45]] ([[User talk:NoGo45|talk]]) 07:19, 20 January 2020 (CET) | |||
Well, I, for one, look forward to much more smut from you lol --[[User:Notsooldpervert|Notsooldpervert]] ([[User talk:Notsooldpervert|talk]]) 07:21, 20 January 2020 (CET) | |||
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She's out of it enough to forget to get dressed, and the kitchen puts her farther away from clothes if someone comes in or the doorbell rings lol --Notsooldpervert (talk) 06:59, 20 January 2020 (CET)
This was my first attempt at writing masturbation/orgasm scene, any thoughts, comments, or opinions? --NoGo45 (talk) 07:09, 20 January 2020 (CET)
I thought it flowed quite well. I didn't realize it was your first scene of that nature, which is rather telling in and of itself. Well done. I do like watching pre-teens have orgasms lol --Notsooldpervert (talk) 07:10, 20 January 2020 (CET)
I guess now I can say I know how to bring girls to orgasm lol. Seriously though thank you for the complement, as an aspiring writer it's good to know I have some talent to work with, even if that talent's writing smut, I guess. --NoGo45 (talk) 07:19, 20 January 2020 (CET)
Well, I, for one, look forward to much more smut from you lol --Notsooldpervert (talk) 07:21, 20 January 2020 (CET)