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I ask that if you go with the path that skips the story of how she saw her dad's penis, that at some point you return to it. I feel it is important information that's needed to progress Ava and Ema, as with that knowledge, his mother or Helen can help temporarily mitigate the effect of the trauma.
I ask that if you go with the path that skips the story of how she saw her dad's penis, that at some point you return to it. I feel it is important information that's needed to progress Ava and Ema, as with that knowledge, his mother or Helen can help temporarily mitigate the effect of the trauma.
--[[User:Telgar|Telgar]] ([[User talk:Telgar|talk]]) 19:18, 13 March 2020 (CET)
--[[User:Telgar|Telgar]] ([[User talk:Telgar|talk]]) 19:18, 13 March 2020 (CET)
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I commented earlier, but for some reason I can't find where it posted. Anyway, that's kinda how I saw that happening here. He and Dannie are lying there naked, enjoying their first... everything... together. Mom and the secretary are standing there getting off on watching the cum ooze from her tiny slit, and Mom questions her about her dad while teaching her how to help Jack recover for round 2. --[[User:Notsooldpervert|Notsooldpervert]] ([[User talk:Notsooldpervert|talk]]) 02:15, 14 March 2020 (CET)
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Oh yes, don't worry, I did not miss the significance of the part where she talks about how she saw her dad's penis. I definitely plan for all routes to have it come up at some point during the discussion, I just felt that it was something that broke the momentum of the sex part of the scene so the mother would hold off on talking about it on most routes since it can always be asked about later. [[User:Jemini|Jemini]] ([[User talk:Jemini|talk]]) 04:05, 14 March 2020 (CET)

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This is a version of what I had in mind, the one I felt allowed for the greatest amount of straight-up copy-paste work. I am thinking this version even might need a few more modifications. (Even if you decide you like this, please do not make any changes to the Ass path yet. I am still using it for reference.) Jemini (talk) 06:18, 13 March 2020 (CET)


A very nice variation. However I think I'll keep the Ass path as it is, that way, the two paths are similar but different. telgar (talk) 04:05, 12 March 2020 (PST)


I ask that if you go with the path that skips the story of how she saw her dad's penis, that at some point you return to it. I feel it is important information that's needed to progress Ava and Ema, as with that knowledge, his mother or Helen can help temporarily mitigate the effect of the trauma. --Telgar (talk) 19:18, 13 March 2020 (CET)


I commented earlier, but for some reason I can't find where it posted. Anyway, that's kinda how I saw that happening here. He and Dannie are lying there naked, enjoying their first... everything... together. Mom and the secretary are standing there getting off on watching the cum ooze from her tiny slit, and Mom questions her about her dad while teaching her how to help Jack recover for round 2. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 02:15, 14 March 2020 (CET)


Oh yes, don't worry, I did not miss the significance of the part where she talks about how she saw her dad's penis. I definitely plan for all routes to have it come up at some point during the discussion, I just felt that it was something that broke the momentum of the sex part of the scene so the mother would hold off on talking about it on most routes since it can always be asked about later. Jemini (talk) 04:05, 14 March 2020 (CET)