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Also, it could be interesting and appropriate to set this entire story up into chapters based not on time but on the MC's progress on getting from beta to alpha. Make him really pathetic near the start and in need of a lot of encouragement to do anything with the girl and then have him get more confident and domineering later down the road. [[User:Jemini|Jemini]] ([[User talk:Jemini|talk]]) 01:33, 4 March 2020 (CET) | Also, it could be interesting and appropriate to set this entire story up into chapters based not on time but on the MC's progress on getting from beta to alpha. Make him really pathetic near the start and in need of a lot of encouragement to do anything with the girl and then have him get more confident and domineering later down the road. [[User:Jemini|Jemini]] ([[User talk:Jemini|talk]]) 01:33, 4 March 2020 (CET) | ||
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Yeah I agree with the need for development, Girls like Sarah Harper are going bro be hard for a Beta like Jack is now. Having to first help her deal with her issues, then after that, get into the seduction. Or women of strong conviction like Tammy Garfield. [[User:Telgar|Telgar]] ([[User talk:Telgar|talk]]) 16:40 3 March 2020 (PST) | |||
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Looks like it's going to be an interesting story. Might I suggest links to the characters' bios on this page, so you can know who you're choosing? --Notsooldpervert (talk) 00:06, 4 March 2020 (CET)
Give the premise, I think it needs some more generalized options. Like, maybe a kink and the picture only of a person who fits the kink. Jemini (talk) 00:41, 4 March 2020 (CET)
My suggestions for categories. Age based
- Older/experienced
- Girlfriend material (Highschool girls)
- Barely pubescent (middle school)
- Extremely young (Elementary school)
Kink based
- Mind control
- Naive/innocent girl
- Spunky/resistant girl
- Problemed girl
Also, it could be interesting and appropriate to set this entire story up into chapters based not on time but on the MC's progress on getting from beta to alpha. Make him really pathetic near the start and in need of a lot of encouragement to do anything with the girl and then have him get more confident and domineering later down the road. Jemini (talk) 01:33, 4 March 2020 (CET)
Yeah I agree with the need for development, Girls like Sarah Harper are going bro be hard for a Beta like Jack is now. Having to first help her deal with her issues, then after that, get into the seduction. Or women of strong conviction like Tammy Garfield. Telgar (talk) 16:40 3 March 2020 (PST)