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*She should at least know what she's getting in for: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Avoid_the_question_and_just_ask_her_to_tell_you_what_was_in_the_book (You ought to complete her education, including periods pregnancy and all the important things.) | *She should at least know what she's getting in for: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Avoid_the_question_and_just_ask_her_to_tell_you_what_was_in_the_book (You ought to complete her education, including periods pregnancy and all the important things.) | ||
*I have a write in for this one, since I'm not fond of the given options: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Chase_her_downstairs (Tell him you're not 18 yet so this might be your only shot at something like this, then let him leave) | *I have a write in for this one, since I'm not fond of the given options: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Chase_her_downstairs (Tell him you're not 18 yet so this might be your only shot at something like this, then let him leave) | ||
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*Haven't fucked Bree yet in this path: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Fuck_Rissa_in_front_of_the_other_girls_while_they_eat (Tell Bree to go have Kiley help her) | *Haven't fucked Bree yet in this path: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Fuck_Rissa_in_front_of_the_other_girls_while_they_eat (Tell Bree to go have Kiley help her) | ||
*Finish here first, then deal with Bree: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Tell_Bree_to_go_have_Kiley_help_her (Try and focus your mind back on fucking Risa) | *Finish here first, then deal with Bree: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Tell_Bree_to_go_have_Kiley_help_her (Try and focus your mind back on fucking Risa) | ||
*Saw another thread that looks fun: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Slip_your_finger_inside_your_sister (Be bold (Ask if she likes that)) | |||
*This is gonna be a little harder than I thought: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=God%27s_Compensation/Get_to_some_practical_lessons (At least try) | *This is gonna be a little harder than I thought: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=God%27s_Compensation/Get_to_some_practical_lessons (At least try) | ||
Revision as of 23:33, 9 June 2016
So, since I have opened this up to be a place to make requests to my stories, I am going to implement a system of placing all conversations with a specific person under the same heading with their name. I will request that you put up your material under your own heading witch can be done by placing two equals signs "==" to either side of your name witch you username after writing that in. If you forget to do so, it is Ok, I ought to be able to correct that myself. However, it will be helpful if you can either sign your name to your comments or put the heading in yourself.
Update to the policy on making requests
There is no actual rule restricting the number of requests you can make at any one time, but the priority with witch I will get to filling requests is the inverse of the number of requests being made by the same person. In other words, if you make less requests I will get to you sooner. I will recommend 3 as the go-to default, with 2, 3, and 4 being treated essentially the same if it is a one-odd thing, but it will affect the priority if you make a habit of always requesting 2 or 4 every round. If you make only 1 request, I will probably move you to the front of the line. If you make 5 or more, you will probably be back-burnered until I feel like processing you sometime a fair bit later.
Also, multiple people requesting the same option is another thing that raises priority.
Stories I will accept requests for
I am currently accepting requests for Hot Summer Job, witch was started by Villenia. It should be noted that Villenia is still the primary on this story, and I may very well reject requests for this story if I do not feel I can complete it to Villenia's standards.
I am also accepting requests for God's Compensation. This is a story I started myself. It is currently a closed story until it reaches the conclusion of the introductory portion of the story is reached. Despite being a chose-your-own-adventure format, this story has a semi chapter format where each chapter has different rules for contributing. The rules for the introductory chapter is that I am the only one allowed to write for it. (NOTE: I am currently placing requests for this story on a back-burner until I write up a lore section for the story. The lore section will be the primary focus with story requests being a lower priority.)
-No longer accepting requests for 2T4U for the near future due to burn-out.-
EDIT: In all 3 of these stories, I will prioritize the entries I want to write in order to stave off the same kind of burn out that I experienced wit 2T4U. I will refer to requested items when I am feeling the bug to write but feel no particular self-motivated inspiration for a particular entry. (Witch, considering writing is a favorite pass-time of mine, happens several times a week, so don't feel that this means you will be ignored completely for long periods of time.)
Update
The burn out on 2T4U seems to be going long term. I might be accepting more requests for it in the future, but for now I am suspending my writing for that project. I have contributed heavily to it up until this point, but I am feeling burned out on it right now. I will be putting any active requests for that story so far into a box labeled "suspended," witch I might get back to at some point, and any future requests before I announce I am over my burn-out will be dismissed entirely.
Recent unrequested updates from Jemini
Jemini (talk) 07:39, 30 December 2015 (CET)
- Your older brother Aaron
- And he is rousting you out of bed excitedly like he normally does
- Point out that Jack is in the shower
Edits list (edits of posts that already existed)
- Don't give up, you set out to find some child porn and now you want to find it!
- Ask Jack about the white stuff(further editing planned in the future)
- Ellen Gunderson
- Tell your mother that Missy is next (added some options for a perspective change)
Other stories contributed to by Jemini
Elerneron
Welcome to the site. I hope you enjoy your stay. If you have any questions, or need any help please feel free to contact me on my Talk Page. Feel free to remove this welcome notice if it bothers you. So you don't feel left out. ^_^ --Elerneron (talk) 18:54, 4 October 2015 (CEST)
I deleted the page that you marked for deletion. It seems to me that you could have moved the page to the new heading if you had wanted. If you wish to do so in the future, the move option is under More just to the left of the search bar. --Elerneron (talk) 22:12, 11 October 2015 (CEST)
I didn't have any specific ideas on Jack's sexual experience. I was going to let storytelling decide most of that. So whatever you want to do is fine with me. --Elerneron (talk) 07:11, 16 October 2015 (CEST)
I moved your talk page extensions to sub-pages of your talk page for organization (and to keep it clear that it doesn't require a category when I use the site tools to look for uncategorized pages.). You can make sub-pages of any page, including user pages and user talk pages. --Elerneron (talk) 20:43, 30 December 2015 (CET)
Please note that you will not receive notifications of changes to sub-pages of your talk page by default like you would your talk page itself. I don't know if that is a problem for you, but I thought I should mention it. --Elerneron (talk) 15:00, 5 January 2016 (CET)
Thanks for the compliment on Fairly OddParents: Timmy's Awakening. I'm a pretty big fan of the show, and the potential for sexual mayhem is through the roof with the base concept. I was torn between it and a few other cartoons I know really well like Phineas and Ferb, American Dragon Jake Long, Jimmy Neutron, and Ben 10 (Original). The freedom of the setting won me over even though some of the others would probably be more popular. American Dragon and Ben 10 in particular have much more inciting graphics, but I hate how Jake and his friends talk, and Ben 10 has been done to death ... and cousin incest isn't as appealing to me as immediate family incest. I would have gone for Danny Phantom, but I'm not as familiar with the toon as I'd like to be before I would start writing for it. I almost did it anyway just because of Dani (Danny's hot younger female clone, rowr)and Jazz and Maddie didn't hurt either. Maybe I should find more episodes and bone-up . . . there are a LOT of hotties in that show. Anyway, thanks again. --Elerneron (talk) 05:11, 6 January 2016 (CET)
You've been forgetting to add the category to story pages quite frequently recently. Maybe pause before you save a new page, and make sure you've added it to get yourself back in the habit? --Elerneron (talk) 15:53, 8 January 2016 (CET)
To make a category page into a subcategory, instead of giving it the story type as the category [[Category:Meta Stories]] use the category that you want it to be a subcategory of [[Category:God's Compensation]] --Elerneron (talk) 06:53, 10 April 2016 (CEST)
Okay, if you want to make a page part of more than one category just type in more than one category on that page. For instance if a page is in the story God's Compensation but also part of chapter one you would put something like this when you put the category on the page [[Category:God's Compensation]][[Category:God's Compensation/Chapter One]]. Now when you go to that page it will show two categories. Now for the category page for God's Compensation you have:
An index of the pages in the story [[God's Compensation]]. [[Category:Meta Stories]]
When you create the category page for God's Compensation/Chapter One, instead of of making the page like that, do something like this:
An index of the pages in chapter one of the story [[God's Compensation]]. [[Category:God's Compensation]]
You can always check out how I made the subcategories for Generations Here is the Category Page Category:Generations If you go into one of the subcategories, you can see how I made them into subcategories. --Elerneron (talk) 10:56, 10 April 2016 (CEST)
You did it in the exact opposite way from how you need to do it. You need to put the name of the Main Category as the Category of the Sub-Category. I fixed the category pages, so you can see how I did it. --Elerneron (talk) 00:04, 13 April 2016 (CEST)
There is a page in the format rules telling you how to upload and use image files Format Rules/Pictures. --Elerneron (talk) 15:02, 18 April 2016 (CEST)
TerryAce
Alons-Y!
https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Wait_for_Carrie_to_come_back (take Larissa upstairs)
and either: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Remain_seated_and_keep_staring (it would be a shame to waste such an amazing erection)
or: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Bust_a_nut_on_these_girls (offer Rissa an orgasm)
Suspended:Not planning to work on these any time in the near future
COMPLETED
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/nature_trail/%E2%80%9Cfort%E2%80%9D/Get_her_attention_and_scare_the_shit_out_of_her (ask her who she is and what she's doing)
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Morning/Fiona%27s/Hell,_after_that_exchange,_you_bet_you_actually_COULD_just_rape_her_and_even_get_away_with_it (find something to gag her with first)
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Matthew/Morning/Brittany/You_need_some_light (go get a flashlight)
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Morning/Fiona%27s/Rape_Samantha/Find_something_to_gag_her_with_first (Not joking, now put the gag in and get on with it)
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Matthew/Morning/Brittany/Go_get_a_flash_light (stick with the story. It's all that's keeping you sane)
https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Point_out_that_she%27s_not_naked (grab her and toss her on the bed) Hot Summer Job request: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Check_on_Larissa_in_the_living_room (Go see what Kylie the Nudist is doing) https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Slip_your_finger_inside_your_sister (Be bold (Ask if she likes that)
Notsooldpervert
I'm here too ~~Notsooldpervert
2T4U Requests New story line!
- Then again, the hard to get angle might make her a little more forgiving on the marriage thing: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Morning/Blakes/Tell_her_you_will_keep_her_company (Refuse, you can’t do this with a kid!)
- Taste that puss and get it wet-n-ready: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Morning/Blakes/Accept,_go_bring_her_to_her_room (Engage in a little fore-play with her)
HSJ Requests If you want me to do this differently, let me know.
- She should at least know what she's getting in for: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Avoid_the_question_and_just_ask_her_to_tell_you_what_was_in_the_book (You ought to complete her education, including periods pregnancy and all the important things.)
- I have a write in for this one, since I'm not fond of the given options: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Chase_her_downstairs (Tell him you're not 18 yet so this might be your only shot at something like this, then let him leave)
- Everything's fine here. Thanks. How are you?: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Just_answer_the_door_and_try_to_convince_the_pizza_guy_you_are_nudists (Ignore her and keep talking to the pizza guy)
God's Compensation Interesting premise.
- What exactly am I signing up for, here?: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=God%E2%80%99s_Compensation/A_strange_visitor/Ask_about_this_mission_they_are_on (Ask what it would mean for you to be a vassal)
- Nothing wrong with asking for directions: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=God%E2%80%99s_Compensation/At_least_try (Ask some questions to get a better handle on the situation)
Suspended:Not planning to work on these any time in the near future
- Gotta go with: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Melony/Jack_intrudes/En-Cons/Complain_you_haven%27t_gotten_off_yet_and_have_him_help_you_his_way (Just accept that you are going to get caught and enjoy the sensation while it lasts)
- Let's see what he does: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Ellen/Morning/Jack/Call_out_and_stop_him_and_have_him_come_in_%28Leave_yourself_exposed%29 (Ask him what's wrong) Standing or laying in bed?Jemini (talk) 23:14, 2 February 2016 (CET) Laying down, sorry. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 00:44, 4 February 2016 (CET)
- Easy now, I want to fuck her not just stick it in and cum: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Morning/Missy/Fuck_it!_See_if_you_can_actually_penetrate_her_without_waking_her_up (Stop here for a second and calm it down)
- Almost there: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Morning/Fiona%27s/Keep_talking_to_her_a_little_longer_to_convince_her_she_wants_it (Not quite enough to count as permission, keep working on her: Assure her you'll teach her)
- Back up and punt: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Raped_Melony/Missy%27s_room_%28P%29/gentle/Offer_to_show_her_and_lay_her_on_the_bed (Don't care, just get up there and fuck her)
COMPLETED
- Fuck it: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Find_a_way_to_hide_what_is_happening_here (Just answer the door and try to convince the pizza guy you are nudists)
- Haven't fucked Bree yet in this path: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Fuck_Rissa_in_front_of_the_other_girls_while_they_eat (Tell Bree to go have Kiley help her)
- Finish here first, then deal with Bree: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Tell_Bree_to_go_have_Kiley_help_her (Try and focus your mind back on fucking Risa)
- Saw another thread that looks fun: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Slip_your_finger_inside_your_sister (Be bold (Ask if she likes that))
- This is gonna be a little harder than I thought: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=God%27s_Compensation/Get_to_some_practical_lessons (At least try)
BakaG
How's it going? I just added a page to 2T4U. Please tell me what you think of it. Especially whether it fits the characters properly.
https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Tell_him_why_he_can%27t_pee
10/15 - Thanks for looking it over. I plan to add a few more pages to one of the "find some clothes" path in the next few days, inspiration willing.
Also, yeah. I did get a bit ahead of myself there. I was in a groove and couldn't stop. Thanks also for dividing the page up. Lots of interesting options just waiting to be filled out now. :P
10/23 - This was both easier and harder than the last one. Enjoy my latest addition! I was going to do more but I figured that was a fine place to stop for a choice.
https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Aaron_Sissy/Attic
1/5/16 - Sorry for acting more like an editor than a writer. I keep asking my muse for inspiration but every time she throws a keyboard at me, yells "PTFO YOU FUCKING NOOB!", then slams the door in my face. :P
1/22/16 - And it's done. Went in a slightly different direction than I planned but I'm satisfied with it for now. Hopefully the next part won't take as long.
5/30/16 - Even as another project has distracted me, I find myself bored with Aaron/Anna. Perhaps another character would be more interesting. Perhaps Jack's girlfriend, and how Jack stumbled into their incestuous carpet munching, or perhaps a teammate of Jack's who has a younger brother he can sissy up. Any suggestions?
Fallen-King
Thank you for filling out my requests so far and thanks in advance for any more you do.
Suspended:Not planning to work on these any time in the near future
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Shower/Confront_both/shower/You_want_to_enjoy_them_both (Demand that he get more involved)
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Maybe_the_hospital_could_hold_some_fun_times%3F (You could start curing the terminal patients)
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Tiffany%27s_room/Ass/Command_her_to_stop_clinching (Throw her over your knee and spank her for disobeying you)
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Blake/Tiffany/Pull_out_before_you_finish_and_cum_on_her_body (Grab her head and put it in her mouth)
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Raping_Melony/Can%27t_seem_to_pull_out._Tell_her_you_will_be_done_in_a_minute (Make him clean your cock and Melony's cunt)
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Morning/Melony%27s_room/F-Mel-Missy(r)/Change_pussies (Like hell he's going to be the first to tap that pussy)
COMPLETED
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Shower/Confront_both/Drop_your_towel_and_show_them_both_what_you_think_Aaron_probably_wanted_to_show_Missy (Invite them to shower with you)
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Shower/Confront_both/Mentor/Invite_them_to_shower_with_you (You want to enjoy them both)
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Walk_Bandit_on_the_nature_trail (Command Bandit to keep moving)
Doggod
Suspended:Not planning to work on these any time in the near future
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Tiffany%27s_room/After_bite_and_kiss/doubts/talk/Stick_a_finger_inside (Assure her you will be careful)
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Morning/Beating_off/Change_to_Tiffany%27s_room (She is probably asleep, creep in quietly)
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Bandit_on_the_nature_trail/Command_Bandit_to_keep_moving (Go off the trail and just butt-fuck Bandit)
COMPLETED
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Shower/Confront_both/Order_them_both_to_strip_naked_right_here (Drop your towel and show them both what you think Aaron probably wanted to show Missy)
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Tiffany%27s_room/After_bite_and_kiss/doubts/Tell_her_if_she_sucks_your_dick,_you_will_make_her_pussy_feel_good_too (Proceed while talking, stick a finger inside)
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Shower/Confront_both/Drop_your_towel_and_show_them_both_what_you_think_Aaron_probably_wanted_to_show_Missy (Pounce on him and strip him)
SA
I do have my heart set on making something happen between Missy and Bandit but I am not that good of a writer. Also sorry if this isn't how Im meant to use the talk feature I've never used a system like it before so yeah.
26/11/15: Ok i will get round to that at some point. Sorry for any inconvenience
19/12/15: Sorry it took me so long. Life hit hard but I changed it a bit. I hope the changes are ok. I just wanted to get bandit involved with the action and I SHOULD have made it so he can get involved with any of the other characters.
22/12/15: I suck at writing so sorry for that. Any advice on changes for the better and how I could write future chapters without fucking up?
I'll agree with that. I eventually want to see all the girls become cum hungry sluts eagerly spreading their legs for cock: Man or boy's, human or not. ~~Notsooldpervert
Villenia
Feel free to contribute however you like. I find collaborative writing inspiring. No sense stifling anyone's creativity. But I'll try to inch that branch along if that will help you out.
Feel free to go nuts. It's a totally blank slate story-wise. Feel free to add options as well, don't feel restricted to what I've laid down. I envision Kylie as bi although leaning towards girls. She's just fallen into that hormone avalanche making her obsess about sex, but she's still a virgin making her inexperienced and basically lying/faking her confidence.
SkankWriter
I want to do something else, but it should have the option of matching up, how would you word it?
You can go ahead and change it, no problem. I guess it just didn't come off to me as how the curse worked, from previous entries, but change what ever you need to. Hopefully, the Ellen/Tiffany bit isn't too bad though
Define touch...is the licking okay if that is all it is? --SkankWriter (talk) 11:12, 15 January 2016 (CET)
Crimsonlion
COMPLETED
- I really like the work you've done for Hot Summer Job. Could you continue with Bree and give her what she wants? Standing and on the couch are both good, but I'd also like to go up into her room and take her on her bed. Thanks!
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Keep_playing_ignorant,_you_want_to_actually_hear_her_say_it (Hot Summer Job/Take Bree to the couch)
Gisèle de Rais
Alexander's lack of interest in that scene is not so much an important character point as it is an excuse for me to diverge the characters from each other a little bit. I will probably end up doing some of the same scenes with Alexander as I have set up for Alexis in that situation, just at a different stage.
I will say that Alexander/Alexis do not have the same files on their devices. The file that Lacey is listening to at the moment is a different one in Alexander's branch. The explosion is important, though probably not for any reason anybody could have guessed at this point.
Also, Alexander's alone time is a more important point than it seems, and points like it will be found throughout the story on both sides. I don't care if that makes the story more widespread and varied than I have any right to make it when combined with the main plot threads, I have ideas and I'd like to explore them. This will all make more sense to you once I've actually implemented one of those branches.
Feel free to send me your theories, however. You may trick me into revealing more than I plan to. That being said, this story may progress much more slowly than I would prefer due to a lot of real life factors, so I apologize in advance for any lingering suspense that may cause. Gisèle de Rais (talk) 07:28, 5 June 2016 (CEST)