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Gag her, otherwise she'll tall all over you as you describe what they did, and why it's wrong. With both of them gagged, Sylvia will need to watch lol --[[User:Notsooldpervert|Notsooldpervert]] ([[User talk:Notsooldpervert|talk]]) 13:03, 1 February 2024 (UTC)
Gag her, otherwise she'll tall all over you as you describe what they did, and why it's wrong. With both of them gagged, Sylvia will need to watch lol --[[User:Notsooldpervert|Notsooldpervert]] ([[User talk:Notsooldpervert|talk]]) 13:03, 1 February 2024 (UTC)
I disagree. We need to ask them some questions first and discover how their lesbian activities started; leading up to how they were discovered and Sylvia's molestation.
This cements to the reader what was already stated in the opening page. The town doesn't give a fuck about girls getting raped. The town is more worried about their homosexual behavior.
This page needs to also act as setup for further passages involving Sylvia's family. (Both the [[Disciplinary Action/Disciplinary Office/First Quarter/Mean girls|Mean Girls]] and the [[Disciplinary Action/Disciplinary Office/First Quarter/Letter/Manga|Manga incident]].)
For the first one, we need to be made aware of Victor's proclivities.
The manga incident in week 8 would be heavily influenced on how much Lucinda and Lenore trust the MC.
Potential outcomes:
* their punishment is that they have to now live with the MC, albeit temporarily until a more suitable place can be found.
* Lucinda is in the waiting room, she had no idea Sylvia was here. She did not approve of the punishment (It was all Victor. Further cementing the idea that women are inferior to men)
She greets John Gardner by name with a friendly demeanor and we explain what's going on. She doesn't have any issues with John being a pedophile, since she was groomed from such a young age by Victor but she'd appreciate it he were gentle, while thinking about how rough/abusive her own sex life has been.
Lucinda could comment, asking if John would ever consider fucking a woman, instead of a child (she's referring to her [[Disciplinary Action/Characters/Brothel/Veronica|Daughter]].) John takes a look over the woman before him, she looks to be in her late 30's and he replies "Hmm, honestly I'd consider it if your breasts were a bit smaller." (Lucinda blushes.) Wrap up this arc
* Then there's the "Mean Girls" arc in week 2. We know about Victor, gotta get him in a belt so he's not fucking either girl. Then call in the girl's mother's and further gain their trust.
* Then there's another potential entry, that could take place between the [[Disciplinary Action/Disciplinary Office/First Quarter/Diya/Accept|brothel introductions]] in week 2 and [[Disciplinary Action/Disciplinary Office/First Quarter/Janne/Yes+|Diya's Confession]] in week 4.
The ladies at the brothel don't quite trust you yet, would a practical demonstration of your love for children help gain their trust? Go to the parlor/living room and fuck Sylvia with your face buried in Tatiana's cunny.
(If Veronica is brave enough) You feel Sylvia slide off of your dick and the coldness of the air. However, before you have time to question her, you feel the warmth of her pussy again. '''Wait a minute!''' This definitely isn't the pussy of a third-grader! Who ever she is, she doesn't last long, as you feel her vaginal muscle constrict as she orgasms. The mystery woman removes herself and your dick is once again met with the tightness of Sylvia's pussy.
(Regardless of whether we've fucked Veronica) We could ask if the girls could stay at the brothel.
* The manga incident: we've gained the women's trust. (The matron of the brothel can even inform Lucinda of what happened) inform the women that these manga would result in, at minimum, a "severe" punishment for the two students. Lucinda, thinking of her [[Disciplinary Action/Characters/Owen/Lina|virgin daughter]] "''What about the person who hand-translated the comic books, what would she get?''" For sure an extreme punishment.
Wanting to lessen the blow for her own daughters and as a callback to what John said earlier, Lenore can say "Remember how you said you would consider having sex with my big sister, if her breasts were smaller" as she opens her top, exposing her chest. "If you lower my girl's punishments down to a medium infraction and place my husband in a chastity belt, you could ''force'' me to receive an extreme infraction."
I Know that I'm thinking ''way'' ahead but I'm just thinking of how the interactions would mesh for the future. --[[User:MrPib|MrPib]] ([[User talk:MrPib|talk]]) 19:41, 1 February 2024 (UTC)

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Gag her, otherwise she'll tall all over you as you describe what they did, and why it's wrong. With both of them gagged, Sylvia will need to watch lol --Notsooldpervert (talk) 13:03, 1 February 2024 (UTC)

I disagree. We need to ask them some questions first and discover how their lesbian activities started; leading up to how they were discovered and Sylvia's molestation.

This cements to the reader what was already stated in the opening page. The town doesn't give a fuck about girls getting raped. The town is more worried about their homosexual behavior.

This page needs to also act as setup for further passages involving Sylvia's family. (Both the Mean Girls and the Manga incident.)

For the first one, we need to be made aware of Victor's proclivities.

The manga incident in week 8 would be heavily influenced on how much Lucinda and Lenore trust the MC.

Potential outcomes:

  • their punishment is that they have to now live with the MC, albeit temporarily until a more suitable place can be found.
  • Lucinda is in the waiting room, she had no idea Sylvia was here. She did not approve of the punishment (It was all Victor. Further cementing the idea that women are inferior to men)

She greets John Gardner by name with a friendly demeanor and we explain what's going on. She doesn't have any issues with John being a pedophile, since she was groomed from such a young age by Victor but she'd appreciate it he were gentle, while thinking about how rough/abusive her own sex life has been.

Lucinda could comment, asking if John would ever consider fucking a woman, instead of a child (she's referring to her Daughter.) John takes a look over the woman before him, she looks to be in her late 30's and he replies "Hmm, honestly I'd consider it if your breasts were a bit smaller." (Lucinda blushes.) Wrap up this arc

  • Then there's the "Mean Girls" arc in week 2. We know about Victor, gotta get him in a belt so he's not fucking either girl. Then call in the girl's mother's and further gain their trust.

The ladies at the brothel don't quite trust you yet, would a practical demonstration of your love for children help gain their trust? Go to the parlor/living room and fuck Sylvia with your face buried in Tatiana's cunny.

(If Veronica is brave enough) You feel Sylvia slide off of your dick and the coldness of the air. However, before you have time to question her, you feel the warmth of her pussy again. Wait a minute! This definitely isn't the pussy of a third-grader! Who ever she is, she doesn't last long, as you feel her vaginal muscle constrict as she orgasms. The mystery woman removes herself and your dick is once again met with the tightness of Sylvia's pussy.

(Regardless of whether we've fucked Veronica) We could ask if the girls could stay at the brothel.

  • The manga incident: we've gained the women's trust. (The matron of the brothel can even inform Lucinda of what happened) inform the women that these manga would result in, at minimum, a "severe" punishment for the two students. Lucinda, thinking of her virgin daughter "What about the person who hand-translated the comic books, what would she get?" For sure an extreme punishment.

Wanting to lessen the blow for her own daughters and as a callback to what John said earlier, Lenore can say "Remember how you said you would consider having sex with my big sister, if her breasts were smaller" as she opens her top, exposing her chest. "If you lower my girl's punishments down to a medium infraction and place my husband in a chastity belt, you could force me to receive an extreme infraction."

I Know that I'm thinking way ahead but I'm just thinking of how the interactions would mesh for the future. --MrPib (talk) 19:41, 1 February 2024 (UTC)