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Oh dear, husband's in a suit and wife most certainly looks like someone who comes from money as well. There's only one job in town that would grant any form of serious affluence. This guy, if he's not the general manager of the factory, then he is at least high up in it. Also, with them having only one child, they are probably not part of the religious majority of the town either. Most likely outsiders. That's gonna certainly spice things up and make things difficult for the program. [[User:Jemini|Jemini]] ([[User talk:Jemini|talk]]) 02:09, 10 May 2018 (CEST)
Oh dear, husband's in a suit and wife most certainly looks like someone who comes from money as well. There's only one job in town that would grant any form of serious affluence. This guy, if he's not the general manager of the factory, then he is at least high up in it. Also, with them having only one child, they are probably not part of the religious majority of the town either. Most likely outsiders. That's gonna certainly spice things up and make things difficult for the program. [[User:Jemini|Jemini]] ([[User talk:Jemini|talk]]) 02:09, 10 May 2018 (CEST)
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Conflict is excellent for the story. The program needs to be challenged somehow. --[[User:Tod Naturlich|Tod Naturlich]] ([[User talk:Tod Naturlich|talk]]) 02:43, 10 May 2018 (CEST)

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Oh dear, husband's in a suit and wife most certainly looks like someone who comes from money as well. There's only one job in town that would grant any form of serious affluence. This guy, if he's not the general manager of the factory, then he is at least high up in it. Also, with them having only one child, they are probably not part of the religious majority of the town either. Most likely outsiders. That's gonna certainly spice things up and make things difficult for the program. Jemini (talk) 02:09, 10 May 2018 (CEST)


Conflict is excellent for the story. The program needs to be challenged somehow. --Tod Naturlich (talk) 02:43, 10 May 2018 (CEST)