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Aaaaand, now that I was just about to do the write-ups, I realized there is actually an alternate explanation that could have the exact opposite results. He could very well just as easily be one of Leopold's "connections" that are allowing him to keep this thing running. Oi... that's a tough one. I might have to put off writing this one until some more of the town is fleshed out a bit. I CAN, however, write up the daughter since either of the two profiles I have in mind for the parents will have her wind up the same either way. [[User:Jemini|Jemini]] ([[User talk:Jemini|talk]]) 08:34, 10 May 2018 (CEST) | Aaaaand, now that I was just about to do the write-ups, I realized there is actually an alternate explanation that could have the exact opposite results. He could very well just as easily be one of Leopold's "connections" that are allowing him to keep this thing running. Oi... that's a tough one. I might have to put off writing this one until some more of the town is fleshed out a bit. I CAN, however, write up the daughter since either of the two profiles I have in mind for the parents will have her wind up the same either way. [[User:Jemini|Jemini]] ([[User talk:Jemini|talk]]) 08:34, 10 May 2018 (CEST) | ||
EDIT: Just saw you added a son for the family. THAT actually does throw off what I was thinking of for the daughter. It can still go either way, but if you happen to add one or two more children to the family it increases the likelihood he's actually from the town instead. Still gonna make him someone with pull in the factory. | |||
Also, I just thought of having him be the mayor or someone in city hall, but he seems a little too young for that one. A position in the factory seems more likely. However, that does bring to mind that we need a profile for the mayor and his family. [[User:Jemini|Jemini]] ([[User talk:Jemini|talk]]) 08:38, 10 May 2018 (CEST) | |||
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Oh dear, husband's in a suit and wife most certainly looks like someone who comes from money as well. There's only one job in town that would grant any form of serious affluence. This guy, if he's not the general manager of the factory, then he is at least high up in it. Also, with them having only one child, they are probably not part of the religious majority of the town either. Most likely outsiders. That's gonna certainly spice things up and make things difficult for the program. Jemini (talk) 02:09, 10 May 2018 (CEST)
Conflict is excellent for the story. The program needs to be challenged somehow. --Tod Naturlich (talk) 02:43, 10 May 2018 (CEST)
Aaaaand, now that I was just about to do the write-ups, I realized there is actually an alternate explanation that could have the exact opposite results. He could very well just as easily be one of Leopold's "connections" that are allowing him to keep this thing running. Oi... that's a tough one. I might have to put off writing this one until some more of the town is fleshed out a bit. I CAN, however, write up the daughter since either of the two profiles I have in mind for the parents will have her wind up the same either way. Jemini (talk) 08:34, 10 May 2018 (CEST)
EDIT: Just saw you added a son for the family. THAT actually does throw off what I was thinking of for the daughter. It can still go either way, but if you happen to add one or two more children to the family it increases the likelihood he's actually from the town instead. Still gonna make him someone with pull in the factory.
Also, I just thought of having him be the mayor or someone in city hall, but he seems a little too young for that one. A position in the factory seems more likely. However, that does bring to mind that we need a profile for the mayor and his family. Jemini (talk) 08:38, 10 May 2018 (CEST)