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I'm aware that when a person is speaking, it's okay for these kinds of grammatical errors, but still, it just seems a bit weird | I'm aware that when a person is speaking, it's okay for these kinds of grammatical errors, but still, it just seems a bit weird | ||
I went ahead, and added a pause, ''and emphasis'' to the part where Xander informs her thathe's going to be doing her in public "I'm going to do you, ''out here''." |
Revision as of 00:44, 22 April 2019
I've just re read the first bit and something about it just seems off
What is written: "I think you don't deserve to go back to my lair." vs. "I don't think you deserve to go back to my lair."
I'm aware that when a person is speaking, it's okay for these kinds of grammatical errors, but still, it just seems a bit weird
I went ahead, and added a pause, and emphasis to the part where Xander informs her thathe's going to be doing her in public "I'm going to do you, out here."