Talk:A Loli's ENF Adventure/Larissa/Luminia

I'm not a huge fan of the vampire thing; is that a constant for this character? Perhaps a fairy was upset about mining the Mana Stones and decided to curse her so that her clothing always shrinks, or something? They're supposedly mischievous creatures, and I could see them finding it hilarious that she becomes more and more exposed, and perhaps experiences confusion/makes poor choices at times, like the asking for her nightgown to be left in her room. Now she's got to make the trip there in a towel, well that's ok, these things are huge. Puts it on, and it shrinks to like the one in the vampire plotline so it shows half her nipples while barely covering her pussy. The halls are clear to her room? The curse kicks in and suddenly people are diverted to her area, or she gets called to her parents room "immediately", or for some reason she turned right instead of left and now she's on the wrong floor. Lots of ways to play that. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 01:49, 1 September 2020 (CEST)

You know that does sound like a good idea you have going there. I do have a tendency to add in more "generic" situations when there's a general theme I try to aim for, so I do think I could split this page's options off into separate plot line; one where she becomes a vampire, one where she's cursed, etc. In fact I've been thinking about giving the entire story an overhaul from the very beginning and turning it from a "premade girl in a given situation" set up to a "build your own girl and what trouble she winds up in" one (as evident by the CYOA route), and have the links to girls with current paths (Sally, Emma, Luna, Opal, Larissa) moved to the end of the appropriate creation routes. So yeah, I'm wholly on board with your thoughts for Larissa. --NoGo45 (talk) 02:09, 1 September 2020 (CEST)

Pre-made girls work just fine. After all, in a normal CYOA there would be a main character already decided. It's a story, not a game, so it's not really necessary to build from the ground up. That would just put way more work on the writer. Poor Larissa, middle of town and a stray wind blows her skirt all the way over her head (where it gets tangled). What's going on? She knows for certain she put on knickers this morning, and now they're gone! Not sure which would be funnier, she has no idea what's happening, or she's told straight out what's going on, but can't get out of her social obligations anyway. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 02:26, 1 September 2020 (CEST)