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That sounds great.  It's good that we're on the same project at the same time.  I was already burned out on [[2T4U]] when you started working on it.  I think this will go a LOT better.  Also, taking into account your concerns about the speed of the sexual content, I changed the "fake" options to further exploration as opposed to sexually charged options . . . except for masturbation.  Hopefully that lightens thing up sexually quite a bit.  --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] ([[User talk:Elerneron|talk]]) 20:48, 8 October 2016 (CEST)
That sounds great.  It's good that we're on the same project at the same time.  I was already burned out on [[2T4U]] when you started working on it.  I think this will go a LOT better.  Also, taking into account your concerns about the speed of the sexual content, I changed the "fake" options to further exploration as opposed to sexually charged options . . . except for masturbation.  Hopefully that lightens thing up sexually quite a bit.  --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] ([[User talk:Elerneron|talk]]) 20:48, 8 October 2016 (CEST)
I wasn't really trying to get into politics with Xander by referencing Trump, just using the most misogynistic person that I was aware of as a reference.  Trump is a Republican in name only, so I figured I was relatively safe.  And . . . I really wasn't concerned about pissing off the Republicans who would support a racist, misogynistic bag of crap for president.  I'm usually good with Republicans for the most part even though the majority of my views fall in line with the Democratic party.  I actually changed from a Hillary supporter to a Sanders supporter early in the primary race, and am convinced that if Bernie had won the primary the fight for president would be all but over.  Trump is a bad joke on the Republican Party and American Citizens as a whole.  I didn't plan on expanding on Xander's political views, but I see him as more of a Libertarian.  I'm fine with the reference going away, though.  If I wanted to comment on Donald Trump, it would probably be more effective through Inga (who would definitely be a Republican), and her frustration with only having Trump to represent her interests in the Executive Branch of government . . . but I really don't want to get all preachy-political.  --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] ([[User talk:Elerneron|talk]]) 11:19, 9 October 2016 (CEST)


==[[User:TerryAce|TerryAce]]==
==[[User:TerryAce|TerryAce]]==

Revision as of 09:19, 9 October 2016

So, since I have opened this up to be a place to make requests to my stories, I am going to implement a system of placing all conversations with a specific person under the same heading with their name. I will request that you put up your material under your own heading witch can be done by placing two equals signs "==" to either side of your name witch you username after writing that in. If you forget to do so, it is Ok, I ought to be able to correct that myself. However, it will be helpful if you can either sign your name to your comments or put the heading in yourself.

Update to the policy on making requests

There is no actual rule restricting the number of requests you can make at any one time, but the priority with witch I will get to filling requests is the inverse of the number of requests being made by the same person. In other words, if you make less requests I will get to you sooner. I will recommend 3 as the go-to default, with 2, 3, and 4 being treated essentially the same if it is a one-odd thing, but it will affect the priority if you make a habit of always requesting 2 or 4 every round. If you make only 1 request, I will probably move you to the front of the line. If you make 5 or more, you will probably be back-burnered until I feel like processing you sometime a fair bit later.

Also, multiple people requesting the same option is another thing that raises priority.

Stories I will accept requests for

I am currently accepting requests for Hot Summer Job, witch was started by Villenia. It should be noted that Villenia is still the primary on this story, and I may very well reject requests for this story if I do not feel I can complete it to Villenia's standards.

I am also accepting requests for God's Compensation. This is a story I started myself. It is currently a closed story until it reaches the conclusion of the introductory portion of the story is reached. Despite being a chose-your-own-adventure format, this story has a semi chapter format where each chapter has different rules for contributing. The rules for the introductory chapter is that I am the only one allowed to write for it. (NOTE: I am currently placing requests for this story on a back-burner until I write up a lore section for the story. The lore section will be the primary focus with story requests being a lower priority.)

2T4U is the first story I started seriously writing for on this site, but I have suffered from a little bit of burn-out on that story. I have now recovered somewhat and will accept requests for it again, but they will be placed at a lower priority than requests for other stories.

I just recently opened up a new story I will accept requests for, Universal Acceptance. However, I will only accept requests for Jerry, the 12 year old male character.

EDIT: In all 3 of these stories, I will prioritize the entries I want to write in order to stave off the same kind of burn out that I experienced wit 2T4U. I will refer to requested items when I am feeling the bug to write but feel no particular self-motivated inspiration for a particular entry. (Witch, considering writing is a favorite pass-time of mine, happens several times a week, so don't feel that this means you will be ignored completely for long periods of time.)

Update

I have somewhat recovered from the extreme burn-out I was experiencing from 2T4U, but I still am having a hard time bringing myself to writing the contents of the "suspended" boxes. I suspect this might have to do with me having forced myself too much to write for entries that did not entirely appeal to me, witch roughly 30% of those requests do not. I will now accept new requests for 2T4U, but the suspended items will remain as they are for now.

I have just started a new story I am accepting requests for, Universal Acceptance. Since this is the newest story I am participating in, it is the one the creative juices are freshest on. As such, requests on this story will receive a higher priority for a while until it starts to turn stale for me.

Elerneron

I didn't have any specific ideas on Jack's sexual experience. I was going to let storytelling decide most of that. So whatever you want to do is fine with me. --Elerneron (talk) 07:11, 16 October 2015 (CEST)

Thanks for the compliment on Fairly OddParents: Timmy's Awakening. I'm a pretty big fan of the show, and the potential for sexual mayhem is through the roof with the base concept. I was torn between it and a few other cartoons I know really well like Phineas and Ferb, American Dragon Jake Long, Jimmy Neutron, and Ben 10 (Original). The freedom of the setting won me over even though some of the others would probably be more popular. American Dragon and Ben 10 in particular have much more inciting graphics, but I hate how Jake and his friends talk, and Ben 10 has been done to death ... and cousin incest isn't as appealing to me as immediate family incest. I would have gone for Danny Phantom, but I'm not as familiar with the toon as I'd like to be before I would start writing for it. I almost did it anyway just because of Dani (Danny's hot younger female clone, rowr)and Jazz and Maddie didn't hurt either. Maybe I should find more episodes and bone-up . . . there are a LOT of hotties in that show. Anyway, thanks again. --Elerneron (talk) 05:11, 6 January 2016 (CET)

To make a category page into a subcategory, instead of giving it the story type as the category [[Category:Meta Stories]] use the category that you want it to be a subcategory of [[Category:God's Compensation]] --Elerneron (talk) 06:53, 10 April 2016 (CEST)

Okay, if you want to make a page part of more than one category just type in more than one category on that page. For instance if a page is in the story God's Compensation but also part of chapter one you would put something like this when you put the category on the page [[Category:God's Compensation]][[Category:God's Compensation/Chapter One]]. Now when you go to that page it will show two categories. Now for the category page for God's Compensation you have: 

An index of the pages in the story [[God's Compensation]].

[[Category:Meta Stories]]

When you create the category page for God's Compensation/Chapter One, instead of of making the page like that, do something like this: 

An index of the pages in chapter one of the story [[God's Compensation]].

[[Category:God's Compensation]]

You can always check out how I made the subcategories for Generations Here is the Category Page Category:Generations If you go into one of the subcategories, you can see how I made them into subcategories. --Elerneron (talk) 10:56, 10 April 2016 (CEST)

You did it in the exact opposite way from how you need to do it. You need to put the name of the Main Category as the Category of the Sub-Category. I fixed the category pages, so you can see how I did it. --Elerneron (talk) 00:04, 13 April 2016 (CEST)

There is a page in the format rules telling you how to upload and use image files Format Rules/Pictures. --Elerneron (talk) 15:02, 18 April 2016 (CEST)

I fixed the problem you had with your template display. You had just closed the template after P1, so it didn't include P2. I just move the closing brackets to after the P2 entry. It's usually little things like that which trip one up . . . happens to me all the time. Putting the closing brackets on their own line will probably help, so I did that. --Elerneron (talk) 11:42, 15 September 2016 (CEST)

I'm glad you're interested in Life Hacks a lot of the reason I bounce one story to the next is that I get bored of writing for a story by myself after some time. It seems to be less and less time that a story can keep my interest as time goes by. If you're working on the story too it might be able to hold my interest a bit longer . . . unless I start getting too concerned about messing up where you're going with a particular part of the story. That usually makes me hesitant to contribute. --Elerneron (talk) 06:46, 26 September 2016 (CEST)

Since you're interested in possibly writing for Life Hacks I'd be interested in your input on what kind of family makeup to give Xander/Lexie to start off. Any character types you'd like to see in his family?

I'd like your input on what I have up for the characters so far. To explain the meters, since I haven't done so in the story yet: The top is like/dislike (mutually exclusive). The middle is dominance/submission (mutually exclusive). The bottom is familial/romantic love (romantic overwriting familial if they end up intersecting). Let me know if you feel any of the values should change, or if you feel that changing them could improve the story prospects. Also, if you think I should add (or remove) any characters let me know. I'll work on the writer's guide to the story characters next, but I wore myself out for the day.

Also if you would like to/be willing to flesh out the ambiance of the story so far that would be awesome. You are much better at that than am I. --Elerneron (talk) 15:16, 7 October 2016 (CEST)

Yeah, I just would like the actual story part fleshed out. I'll deal with the technical part. I just want a little more meat to some of those pages, to get a better sense of how Xander feels and stuff. I'm so focused on the technical aspect that I'm having a hard time giving a nice visceral experience. I think I should add a passage to explain the relationship meter on the Familiarize page though (I intend Xander to be able to see it when he has selected himself) . . . don't know when I'll get to it though so if you want to add that I'd be fine with it. That would also mean that he has already experienced selecting himself before he starts making changes . . . so I will have to change that as well.

As far as Charity is concerned, I figured some sexual attraction could explain a lot of her hostility. I also chose the name Charity as a form of irony.

I like the idea of him being walked in on. I figured the main story would be staying as a male. I just haven't written that entry yet. --Elerneron (talk) 16:53, 7 October 2016 (CEST)


I redid the options for the last row of actions to say one thing, but lead to a sibling interrupting the character. I randomly chose who showed up for what option separately for each entry, Xander, Lexi, and Herm Lexi . . . so it's different every time. All the siblings have an option. A clever reader can see what's going to actually happen before they click, but it will be a surprise for most. I figure the mom is likely at work, so I didn't include her. --Elerneron (talk) 15:01, 8 October 2016 (CEST)


Thanks for the addition to the story. Even that little bit makes it much better IMO. I suppose I am strange, as the reactions that I gave the character are pretty much the ones I would expect from myself. It may be partly due to my Borderline Avoidant Personality Disorder (borderline because I don't have the over-sensitivity to criticism), or some other aspect of my personality; but if something is the way it is, and I cannot (or don't want to) change it, I simply accept it almost immediately. I don't worry over things that I can do nothing about. I know this is not the case for most people, but it's hard for me to put myself in that headspace when I don't share it. The level of freaking out that I would have was pretty accurately displayed in the first page of the story in Xander's actions. This is not to say that I want Xander to parallel myself if that makes him feel less real; just the reason why he is currently written the way that he is.

The talk about his interest in children was directly related to his decision to forgo making himself more endowed and is not intended to reflect him thinking of using the new powers to get sex easier. That is the very first thing that I would think of using them for . . . which goes for pretty much ANY power for me. My first thought is 'How can I use this to get sex?' I think pretty much any 15 year old boy would have much the same initial reaction. (Damn, I'm only as emotionally mature as a horny teenager . . . ) but like I said, I was simply giving his reasoning for not choosing to be older, younger, or making his dong bigger. Feel free to change it if you feel it would improve the story. Any way, I'll try to finish working up the older, younger, and big dick path starts a bit just to set up the interruptions so they are consistent across the board . . . then I guess I'll jump in on one of the interruptions unless there's something else in the story you would rather that I do to make things easier for you? --Elerneron (talk) 19:49, 8 October 2016 (CEST)


That sounds great. It's good that we're on the same project at the same time. I was already burned out on 2T4U when you started working on it. I think this will go a LOT better. Also, taking into account your concerns about the speed of the sexual content, I changed the "fake" options to further exploration as opposed to sexually charged options . . . except for masturbation. Hopefully that lightens thing up sexually quite a bit. --Elerneron (talk) 20:48, 8 October 2016 (CEST)


I wasn't really trying to get into politics with Xander by referencing Trump, just using the most misogynistic person that I was aware of as a reference. Trump is a Republican in name only, so I figured I was relatively safe. And . . . I really wasn't concerned about pissing off the Republicans who would support a racist, misogynistic bag of crap for president. I'm usually good with Republicans for the most part even though the majority of my views fall in line with the Democratic party. I actually changed from a Hillary supporter to a Sanders supporter early in the primary race, and am convinced that if Bernie had won the primary the fight for president would be all but over. Trump is a bad joke on the Republican Party and American Citizens as a whole. I didn't plan on expanding on Xander's political views, but I see him as more of a Libertarian. I'm fine with the reference going away, though. If I wanted to comment on Donald Trump, it would probably be more effective through Inga (who would definitely be a Republican), and her frustration with only having Trump to represent her interests in the Executive Branch of government . . . but I really don't want to get all preachy-political. --Elerneron (talk) 11:19, 9 October 2016 (CEST)

TerryAce

Time to advance more plots.

https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Stop_and_find_some_excuse_to_remove_your_cloths (pounce back on her and continuing wrestling)

https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Come_to_Larissa%27s_rescue_and_gang_up_on_Kylie (have your own bit of fun with Kylie)

Suspended:Not planning to work on these any time in the near future

COMPLETED

https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Point_out_that_she%27s_not_naked (grab her and toss her on the bed) Hot Summer Job request: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Check_on_Larissa_in_the_living_room (Go see what Kylie the Nudist is doing) https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Slip_your_finger_inside_your_sister (Be bold (Ask if she likes that) https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Remain_seated_and_keep_staring (it would be a shame to waste such an amazing erection) https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Bust_a_nut_on_these_girls (offer Rissa an orgasm) https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Offer_Rissa_an_orgasm (fuck her properly as soon as you get hard again) https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Get_yourself_into_a_more_comfortable_position_so_you_can_enjoy_this (Bree’s been literally begging for it, go give her what she wants) https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Go_see_what_Kylie_is_doing (Hold her up: apologize to her) https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Do_something_with_this_erection (wait here for a bit,who cares if the girls catch you now) https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Grab_her_from_behind_and_toss_her_on_her_bed (stop and find some reason to remove your clothes) https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Take_a_moment_to_adjust_yourself (take Bree's dress all the way off) https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Let_Larissa_have_her_fun_with_Kylie (slide down between Kylie's legs and give her a tasre of her own medicine) https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Tell_Bree_to_go_have_Kiley_help_her (This is all Kiley’s fault, throw her over the table and nail her hard)

Additional completed requests

Notsooldpervert

--Notsooldpervert (talk) 21:29, 24 August 2016 (CEST)

FYI I list my requests first by the date I've requested them, then in order of my preference of story lines. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 00:13, 19 July 2016 (CEST)

2T4U Requests New story line!

HSJ Requests If you want me to do this differently, let me know.

God's Compensation Interesting premise.

Universal Acceptance That would be a fun power!

Suspended:Not planning to work on these any time in the near future

COMPLETED 2T4U

HSJ

God's Compensation

Universal Acceptance


Additional completed requests

BakaG

BakaG's Talk Page

How's it going? I just added a page to 2T4U. Please tell me what you think of it. Especially whether it fits the characters properly.

https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Tell_him_why_he_can%27t_pee

10/15 - Thanks for looking it over. I plan to add a few more pages to one of the "find some clothes" path in the next few days, inspiration willing.

Also, yeah. I did get a bit ahead of myself there. I was in a groove and couldn't stop. Thanks also for dividing the page up. Lots of interesting options just waiting to be filled out now. :P

10/23 - This was both easier and harder than the last one. Enjoy my latest addition! I was going to do more but I figured that was a fine place to stop for a choice.

https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Aaron_Sissy/Attic

1/5/16 - Sorry for acting more like an editor than a writer. I keep asking my muse for inspiration but every time she throws a keyboard at me, yells "PTFO YOU FUCKING NOOB!", then slams the door in my face. :P

1/22/16 - And it's done. Went in a slightly different direction than I planned but I'm satisfied with it for now. Hopefully the next part won't take as long.

5/30/16 - Even as another project has distracted me, I find myself bored with Aaron/Anna. Perhaps another character would be more interesting. Perhaps Jack's girlfriend, and how Jack stumbled into their incestuous carpet munching, or perhaps a teammate of Jack's who has a younger brother he can sissy up. Any suggestions?

Fallen-King

Thank you for filling out my requests so far and thanks in advance for any more you do.

Suspended:Not planning to work on these any time in the near future

COMPLETED

Additional completed requests

Doggod

2T4U

HSJ

Suspended:Not planning to work on these any time in the near future

COMPLETED

Additional completed requests

SA

I do have my heart set on making something happen between Missy and Bandit but I am not that good of a writer. Also sorry if this isn't how Im meant to use the talk feature I've never used a system like it before so yeah.

26/11/15: Ok i will get round to that at some point. Sorry for any inconvenience

19/12/15: Sorry it took me so long. Life hit hard but I changed it a bit. I hope the changes are ok. I just wanted to get bandit involved with the action and I SHOULD have made it so he can get involved with any of the other characters.

22/12/15: I suck at writing so sorry for that. Any advice on changes for the better and how I could write future chapters without fucking up?

I'll agree with that. I eventually want to see all the girls become cum hungry sluts eagerly spreading their legs for cock: Man or boy's, human or not. ~~Notsooldpervert


Villenia

Feel free to contribute however you like. I find collaborative writing inspiring. No sense stifling anyone's creativity. But I'll try to inch that branch along if that will help you out.

Feel free to go nuts. It's a totally blank slate story-wise. Feel free to add options as well, don't feel restricted to what I've laid down. I envision Kylie as bi although leaning towards girls. She's just fallen into that hormone avalanche making her obsess about sex, but she's still a virgin making her inexperienced and basically lying/faking her confidence.

Been busy lately, but I'm still around. That exact scene I hadn't planned out at all. I know you thought this of Kylie before, but I had pegged Larissa as the one with the proper crush on Riley. Rissa is trying to get Riley to like her, to be interested in her. She's a bit of a smart aleck but equally as bubbly. Getting Riley alone in her room would be an excuse to show off how cool she is and get closer to him, both touchy-feelie and pushy-shovie.

SkankWriter

I want to do something else, but it should have the option of matching up, how would you word it?

You can go ahead and change it, no problem. I guess it just didn't come off to me as how the curse worked, from previous entries, but change what ever you need to. Hopefully, the Ellen/Tiffany bit isn't too bad though

Define touch...is the licking okay if that is all it is? --SkankWriter (talk) 11:12, 15 January 2016 (CET)

Crimsonlion

COMPLETED

  • I really like the work you've done for Hot Summer Job. Could you continue with Bree and give her what she wants? Standing and on the couch are both good, but I'd also like to go up into her room and take her on her bed. Thanks!
https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Keep_playing_ignorant,_you_want_to_actually_hear_her_say_it (Hot Summer Job/Take Bree to the couch)

Gisèle de Rais

Alexander's lack of interest in that scene is not so much an important character point as it is an excuse for me to diverge the characters from each other a little bit. I will probably end up doing some of the same scenes with Alexander as I have set up for Alexis in that situation, just at a different stage.

I will say that Alexander/Alexis do not have the same files on their devices. The file that Lacey is listening to at the moment is a different one in Alexander's branch. The explosion is important, though probably not for any reason anybody could have guessed at this point.

Also, Alexander's alone time is a more important point than it seems, and points like it will be found throughout the story on both sides. I don't care if that makes the story more widespread and varied than I have any right to make it when combined with the main plot threads, I have ideas and I'd like to explore them. This will all make more sense to you once I've actually implemented one of those branches.

Feel free to send me your theories, however. You may trick me into revealing more than I plan to. That being said, this story may progress much more slowly than I would prefer due to a lot of real life factors, so I apologize in advance for any lingering suspense that may cause. Gisèle de Rais (talk) 07:28, 5 June 2016 (CEST)

Privitude

In order of preference:

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