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I wrote up the history for the Wells/O'Connell family.  Feel free to adjust it if you feel it needs to be changed or amended in any areas. --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] ([[User talk:Elerneron|talk]]) 22:46, 21 October 2016 (CEST)
I wrote up the history for the Wells/O'Connell family.  Feel free to adjust it if you feel it needs to be changed or amended in any areas. --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] ([[User talk:Elerneron|talk]]) 22:46, 21 October 2016 (CEST)
I guess I need to make cards for Billy (actually Billie, I suppose), and Billie's dad then.  Especially since Billie's dad definitely reached enemy status (as you awarded the points for it).  I'm starting to wonder if we may have taken Billie's dad beyond the point of maintaining suspension of disbelief as there is a psychological test to become a police officer.  I suppose he could have had a break after joining the force though, since he is obviously not intelligent enough to circumvent the test.  --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] ([[User talk:Elerneron|talk]]) 06:11, 22 October 2016 (CEST)


==[[User:TerryAce|TerryAce]]==
==[[User:TerryAce|TerryAce]]==

Revision as of 04:11, 22 October 2016

So, since I have opened this up to be a place to make requests to my stories, I am going to implement a system of placing all conversations with a specific person under the same heading with their name. I will request that you put up your material under your own heading witch can be done by placing two equals signs "==" to either side of your name witch you username after writing that in. If you forget to do so, it is Ok, I ought to be able to correct that myself. However, it will be helpful if you can either sign your name to your comments or put the heading in yourself.

Update to the policy on making requests

There is no actual rule restricting the number of requests you can make at any one time, but the priority with witch I will get to filling requests is the inverse of the number of requests being made by the same person. In other words, if you make less requests I will get to you sooner. I will recommend 3 as the go-to default, with 2, 3, and 4 being treated essentially the same if it is a one-odd thing, but it will affect the priority if you make a habit of always requesting 2 or 4 every round. If you make only 1 request, I will probably move you to the front of the line. If you make 5 or more, you will probably be back-burnered until I feel like processing you sometime a fair bit later.

Also, multiple people requesting the same option is another thing that raises priority.

Stories I will accept requests for

I am currently accepting requests for Hot Summer Job, witch was started by Villenia. It should be noted that Villenia is still the primary on this story, and I may very well reject requests for this story if I do not feel I can complete it to Villenia's standards.

I am also accepting requests for God's Compensation. This is a story I started myself. It is currently a closed story until it reaches the conclusion of the introductory portion of the story is reached. Despite being a chose-your-own-adventure format, this story has a semi chapter format where each chapter has different rules for contributing. The rules for the introductory chapter is that I am the only one allowed to write for it. (NOTE: I am currently placing requests for this story on a back-burner until I write up a lore section for the story. The lore section will be the primary focus with story requests being a lower priority.)

2T4U is the first story I started seriously writing for on this site, but I have suffered from a little bit of burn-out on that story. I have now recovered somewhat and will accept requests for it again, but they will be placed at a lower priority than requests for other stories.

I just recently opened up a new story I will accept requests for, Universal Acceptance. However, I will only accept requests for Jerry, the 12 year old male character.

I am currently obsessed with writing for Elerneron's new story Life Hacks. I will probably wind up spending too much energy writing for that story to get to any other requests, but might look back here if I get burned out. If you would like to make a request in life hacks, please follow Elerneron's request policy witch includes making the request on the page with the option you want. Requests for Life Hacks on this page will be ignored.

Elerneron

To make a category page into a subcategory, instead of giving it the story type as the category [[Category:Meta Stories]] use the category that you want it to be a subcategory of [[Category:God's Compensation]] --Elerneron (talk) 06:53, 10 April 2016 (CEST)

Okay, if you want to make a page part of more than one category just type in more than one category on that page. For instance if a page is in the story God's Compensation but also part of chapter one you would put something like this when you put the category on the page [[Category:God's Compensation]][[Category:God's Compensation/Chapter One]]. Now when you go to that page it will show two categories. Now for the category page for God's Compensation you have:


You can always check out how I made the subcategories for Generations Here is the Category Page Category:Generations If you go into one of the subcategories, you can see how I made them into subcategories. --Elerneron (talk) 10:56, 10 April 2016 (CEST)

You did it in the exact opposite way from how you need to do it. You need to put the name of the Main Category as the Category of the Sub-Category. I fixed the category pages, so you can see how I did it. --Elerneron (talk) 00:04, 13 April 2016 (CEST)

There is a page in the format rules telling you how to upload and use image files Format Rules/Pictures. --Elerneron (talk) 15:02, 18 April 2016 (CEST)

I fixed the problem you had with your template display. You had just closed the template after P1, so it didn't include P2. I just move the closing brackets to after the P2 entry. It's usually little things like that which trip one up . . . happens to me all the time. Putting the closing brackets on their own line will probably help, so I did that. --Elerneron (talk) 11:42, 15 September 2016 (CEST)

Okay, the new tally property is in. If nothing changes on a page make sure that the tally property ISN'T EVEN PRESENT. If the points change use the format I've used to display the changes. The initial <br> allows the bullets to form properly. One bullet for each act that receives points. The Act is in bold, followed by the point base in parentheses, followed by modifiers in italics and their values in parentheses, followed by an equals sign and the total for that act. At the bottom is a running tally of the previous points and each act in bold and parentheses. (See one of the pages I edited for an example.) Does that work for you? --Elerneron (talk) 13:15, 16 October 2016 (CEST)

Wow, things are getting quite complex. I might need to expand the character cards again at this rate. LOL --Elerneron (talk) 16:51, 19 October 2016 (CEST)


I'm fine with your version of Charity's background. It's not at all uncommon to have that kind of sexual exploration as children. I had similar experiences in my own childhood. It's also not uncommon for parents to overreact, though that did not happen in my case as the occurrence of incidents were not prolonged or sustained; and we never got "caught". --Elerneron (talk) 13:51, 20 October 2016 (CEST)


I'm a little torn on an element of your most recent addition. I wasn't planning on using analogs for place names, so "Occupy Weststreet" might not be a needed analog as Wall Street would still be Wall Street, but making an analog of the actual event makes sense for the way I have been constructing the story. Perhaps changing Occupy to something else and leaving Wall Street as Wall Street would be more appropriate? --Elerneron (talk) 14:23, 20 October 2016 (CEST)


I actually see Kizzie as the easiest target of Xander's affections simply because she will ignorantly accept anything that he wants to do with her due to her age, levels of trust, friendship, submission, and familial love. I don't see her being upset with anything Xander wants to do as long as it doesn't hurt too much. --Elerneron (talk) 21:57, 20 October 2016 (CEST)


Oh also, I'm planning to start working on the Wells (Patricia and Dante) branch of the story a bit, so I started working up the family a bit more, in case you're interested. --Elerneron (talk) 21:59, 20 October 2016 (CEST)


I saw you went Catholic for Patricia's upbringing (make sense). With the name Patricia, and a Catholic background, I decided to go full Irish for herself and her sister. I absolutely LOVE Irish names. Of course Wells is an English name, and she likely discarded all other Irish traditions when she discarded her religion, so I'm not giving the kids Irish names. --Elerneron (talk) 21:27, 21 October 2016 (CEST)


With her obsessive compulsive cleaning and mysophobia (fear of germs), I see definite resistances to urine and feces play, bestiality, and to a lesser extent food-play . . . basically anything too literally dirty. Other than that, I can't think of anything off the top of my head. --Elerneron (talk) 21:38, 21 October 2016 (CEST)


I wrote up the history for the Wells/O'Connell family. Feel free to adjust it if you feel it needs to be changed or amended in any areas. --Elerneron (talk) 22:46, 21 October 2016 (CEST)


I guess I need to make cards for Billy (actually Billie, I suppose), and Billie's dad then. Especially since Billie's dad definitely reached enemy status (as you awarded the points for it). I'm starting to wonder if we may have taken Billie's dad beyond the point of maintaining suspension of disbelief as there is a psychological test to become a police officer. I suppose he could have had a break after joining the force though, since he is obviously not intelligent enough to circumvent the test. --Elerneron (talk) 06:11, 22 October 2016 (CEST)

TerryAce

Time to advance more plots.

https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Stop_and_find_some_excuse_to_remove_your_cloths (pounce back on her and continuing wrestling)

https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Come_to_Larissa%27s_rescue_and_gang_up_on_Kylie (have your own bit of fun with Kylie)

Suspended:Not planning to work on these any time in the near future

COMPLETED

https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Point_out_that_she%27s_not_naked (grab her and toss her on the bed) Hot Summer Job request: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Check_on_Larissa_in_the_living_room (Go see what Kylie the Nudist is doing) https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Slip_your_finger_inside_your_sister (Be bold (Ask if she likes that) https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Remain_seated_and_keep_staring (it would be a shame to waste such an amazing erection) https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Bust_a_nut_on_these_girls (offer Rissa an orgasm) https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Offer_Rissa_an_orgasm (fuck her properly as soon as you get hard again) https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Get_yourself_into_a_more_comfortable_position_so_you_can_enjoy_this (Bree’s been literally begging for it, go give her what she wants) https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Go_see_what_Kylie_is_doing (Hold her up: apologize to her) https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Do_something_with_this_erection (wait here for a bit,who cares if the girls catch you now) https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Grab_her_from_behind_and_toss_her_on_her_bed (stop and find some reason to remove your clothes) https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Take_a_moment_to_adjust_yourself (take Bree's dress all the way off) https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Let_Larissa_have_her_fun_with_Kylie (slide down between Kylie's legs and give her a tasre of her own medicine) https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Tell_Bree_to_go_have_Kiley_help_her (This is all Kiley’s fault, throw her over the table and nail her hard)

Additional completed requests

Notsooldpervert

--Notsooldpervert (talk) 21:29, 24 August 2016 (CEST)

FYI I list my requests first by the date I've requested them, then in order of my preference of story lines. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 00:13, 19 July 2016 (CEST)

Life Hacks Discussion I'll keep making requests the way Elerneron prefers and using the discussion pages for suggestions/claeifications.

Which request got deleted? I've made a few already lol --Notsooldpervert (talk) 21:08, 16 October 2016 (CEST) Edit: Nevermind, I found it. No worries on waiting for the "no panties" to catch up first. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 21:17, 16 October 2016 (CEST)

Lol it's like watching you develop an RPG! --Notsooldpervert (talk) 20:15, 19 October 2016 (CEST)

I like where you're going with Ronnie's backstory. I suggest that Brittany be the one to tattle to mom. It makes more sense than absentee mom doing it, and leaves it open for Xander to play (which wouldn't make sense if he ratted them out). If Angel comes across as younger, is that a choice on her part or a developmental issue? If it's just the way she is, wouldn't her stats be more in line with Bastion's? --Notsooldpervert (talk) 16:59, 20 October 2016 (CEST)

I can see how Ronnie would be hard to approach sexually with her being a tomboy and all, but her brother has an "in" so he could slip right in there (pun intended).

2T4U Requests New story line!

HSJ Requests If you want me to do this differently, let me know.

God's Compensation Interesting premise.

Universal Acceptance That would be a fun power!

Suspended:Not planning to work on these any time in the near future

COMPLETED 2T4U

HSJ

God's Compensation

Universal Acceptance


Additional completed requests

BakaG

BakaG's Talk Page

How's it going? I just added a page to 2T4U. Please tell me what you think of it. Especially whether it fits the characters properly.

https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Tell_him_why_he_can%27t_pee

10/15 - Thanks for looking it over. I plan to add a few more pages to one of the "find some clothes" path in the next few days, inspiration willing.

Also, yeah. I did get a bit ahead of myself there. I was in a groove and couldn't stop. Thanks also for dividing the page up. Lots of interesting options just waiting to be filled out now. :P

10/23 - This was both easier and harder than the last one. Enjoy my latest addition! I was going to do more but I figured that was a fine place to stop for a choice.

https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Aaron_Sissy/Attic

1/5/16 - Sorry for acting more like an editor than a writer. I keep asking my muse for inspiration but every time she throws a keyboard at me, yells "PTFO YOU FUCKING NOOB!", then slams the door in my face. :P

1/22/16 - And it's done. Went in a slightly different direction than I planned but I'm satisfied with it for now. Hopefully the next part won't take as long.

5/30/16 - Even as another project has distracted me, I find myself bored with Aaron/Anna. Perhaps another character would be more interesting. Perhaps Jack's girlfriend, and how Jack stumbled into their incestuous carpet munching, or perhaps a teammate of Jack's who has a younger brother he can sissy up. Any suggestions?

Fallen-King

Thank you for filling out my requests so far and thanks in advance for any more you do.

Suspended:Not planning to work on these any time in the near future

COMPLETED

Additional completed requests

Doggod

2T4U

HSJ

Suspended:Not planning to work on these any time in the near future

COMPLETED

Additional completed requests

SA

I do have my heart set on making something happen between Missy and Bandit but I am not that good of a writer. Also sorry if this isn't how Im meant to use the talk feature I've never used a system like it before so yeah.

26/11/15: Ok i will get round to that at some point. Sorry for any inconvenience

19/12/15: Sorry it took me so long. Life hit hard but I changed it a bit. I hope the changes are ok. I just wanted to get bandit involved with the action and I SHOULD have made it so he can get involved with any of the other characters.

22/12/15: I suck at writing so sorry for that. Any advice on changes for the better and how I could write future chapters without fucking up?

I'll agree with that. I eventually want to see all the girls become cum hungry sluts eagerly spreading their legs for cock: Man or boy's, human or not. ~~Notsooldpervert


Villenia

Feel free to contribute however you like. I find collaborative writing inspiring. No sense stifling anyone's creativity. But I'll try to inch that branch along if that will help you out.

Feel free to go nuts. It's a totally blank slate story-wise. Feel free to add options as well, don't feel restricted to what I've laid down. I envision Kylie as bi although leaning towards girls. She's just fallen into that hormone avalanche making her obsess about sex, but she's still a virgin making her inexperienced and basically lying/faking her confidence.

Been busy lately, but I'm still around. That exact scene I hadn't planned out at all. I know you thought this of Kylie before, but I had pegged Larissa as the one with the proper crush on Riley. Rissa is trying to get Riley to like her, to be interested in her. She's a bit of a smart aleck but equally as bubbly. Getting Riley alone in her room would be an excuse to show off how cool she is and get closer to him, both touchy-feelie and pushy-shovie.

SkankWriter

I want to do something else, but it should have the option of matching up, how would you word it?

You can go ahead and change it, no problem. I guess it just didn't come off to me as how the curse worked, from previous entries, but change what ever you need to. Hopefully, the Ellen/Tiffany bit isn't too bad though

Define touch...is the licking okay if that is all it is? --SkankWriter (talk) 11:12, 15 January 2016 (CET)

Crimsonlion

COMPLETED

  • I really like the work you've done for Hot Summer Job. Could you continue with Bree and give her what she wants? Standing and on the couch are both good, but I'd also like to go up into her room and take her on her bed. Thanks!
https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Keep_playing_ignorant,_you_want_to_actually_hear_her_say_it (Hot Summer Job/Take Bree to the couch)

Gisèle de Rais

Alexander's lack of interest in that scene is not so much an important character point as it is an excuse for me to diverge the characters from each other a little bit. I will probably end up doing some of the same scenes with Alexander as I have set up for Alexis in that situation, just at a different stage.

I will say that Alexander/Alexis do not have the same files on their devices. The file that Lacey is listening to at the moment is a different one in Alexander's branch. The explosion is important, though probably not for any reason anybody could have guessed at this point.

Also, Alexander's alone time is a more important point than it seems, and points like it will be found throughout the story on both sides. I don't care if that makes the story more widespread and varied than I have any right to make it when combined with the main plot threads, I have ideas and I'd like to explore them. This will all make more sense to you once I've actually implemented one of those branches.

Feel free to send me your theories, however. You may trick me into revealing more than I plan to. That being said, this story may progress much more slowly than I would prefer due to a lot of real life factors, so I apologize in advance for any lingering suspense that may cause. Gisèle de Rais (talk) 07:28, 5 June 2016 (CEST)

Privitude

In order of preference:

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