User talk:Villenia
Welcome to the site. I hope you enjoy your stay. If you have any questions, or need any help please feel free to contact me on my Talk Page. Feel free to remove this welcome notice if it bothers you. --Elerneron (talk) 18:11, 4 October 2015 (CEST)
Congratulations, you're story Hot Summer Job is the first story here that isn't mine; and the first story that started right here. A couple of notes: We use Open here instead of Public. Since the field is called Editing Permissions it feels more correct. It's probably my fault for leaving Public in all the open slots. Sorry about that. Also, if your story is set as Rules, then it is Open so, there is no reason to combine it with Open, otherwise it is set as Ask Rules. Since you copied Generations rules, I guessing that was an accident, so I set it to Open. If I was in error, you can set it back to Rules by putting a link to the page you create with the editing rules you want with the alternate text Rules. Again, congratulations on the first native story! --Elerneron (talk) 01:30, 5 October 2015 (CEST)
Notsooldpervert
Is there a way to request story options for Hot Summer Job? ~~Notsooldpervert
I'm really enjoying Hot Summer Job. While I'm not creative enough to contribute well, I was wondering if there was a way to influence which story lines get added next? I'm glad I started the story over, because my last walk through the option for giving the sister a dare wasn't available (I'd like to see the dress come off, btw). I've been reloading the page where Kylie had joined you in the living room (and in looking for her name I just saw the next option is available now... Bonus!)
Anyway, keep up the great work. I look forward to see Riley become the neighborhood horn-dog squirting his cum into every pussy he can. ;-p ~~Notsooldpervert
I'm really liking the new additions to Hot Summer Job. Keep it up! --Notsooldpervert (talk) 03:39, 10 January 2016 (CET)
I really like where you're going with Incest Seductions' Kimberly story line. I'm kinda hoping to see her turn into a submissive little fuck toy for the whole family to use at their pleasure lol --Notsooldpervert (talk) 21:48, 24 August 2016 (CEST)
Hmmm, all three of those options are appealing. If you quit, mom gets to claim her two forfeits, if you go back to cooking breakfast then things just get hotter before they boil over (I'm hoping mom's phone call was to get the brother to come over), or you can get a handful of batter and rub it on your tits (and maybe your pussy) and beg to be licked clean again. I like them all! lol --Notsooldpervert (talk) 23:56, 27 August 2016 (CEST)
I'm not sure which story I like better, Hot Summer Job, or Incest Seductions. I think little Kim is in enough trouble and should stay right where she is lol --Notsooldpervert (talk) 12:54, 31 October 2016 (CET)
Kimberly should finish cleaning up her lustful mess --Notsooldpervert (talk) 19:00, 6 November 2016 (CET)
Hmm... if the kids weren't quite so young going to "play" with them might be the more interesting option. I kinda like the more submissive/passive version of Kim just doing what she's told and just accepting and enjoying it whenever someone plays with her body whenever/however they please lol. Have her clean the counters in front of the adults until told to do something else. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 14:32, 11 November 2016 (CET)
Send the little ones off to watch tv, or something. She might be a submissive little fuck toy for anyone old enough to actually fuck her, but she's not completely hopeless --Notsooldpervert (talk) 06:09, 15 November 2016 (CET)
Mmmm, delicious. Wait and see what Dadd does Kimmy. You like being on display as your family takes their pleasure wtih your body. If Zack catches on, maybe he'll just want a turn. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 16:26, 24 November 2016 (CET)
Hmmm... I'm torn. If she lays there and basks, there's a chance big brother will come back and take a turn, but there's a bigger chance of making mom and/or dad upset. I guess set the table and take every chance to show off her swollen wet pussy so everyone will know she's so horny that anyone can play with or fuck her. Only mom and dad will know it was his cock practically raping her in "public" that got her that hot. Then again, mom did say if she needs relief she has to ask: if she tells daddy he was her first and beg him to finish, maybe he will. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 06:47, 29 November 2016 (CET)
I'm at a loss with so many good options. I really want to see her practically beg to be fucked and for everyone to shknow it, I'm just not sure which option would do that faster. Should she tell her brother about Daddy taking her virginity right in front of him and how it made her so hot she's desperate for more? Should she tell him how she caught mom and dad fucking in the kitchen and how mom stripped her and displayed her to your father's approving eyes and the resulting bet? Should she tell him how horny he makes her and ask him to touch her? Or should we go back to lying spread eagle on the counter and beg daddy to finish, even if Zack comes back in (or your sister for that matter). Mom did seem awfully disappointed when she didn't ask for relief after getting down. I gotta admit, I very much want to see daddy fill her full of cum in front of the whole family while she cries out in extasy for him not to stop. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 15:38, 16 December 2016 (CET)
I did a little work on one of the pages. I hope you don't mind.~~TerryAce
Very cool to see someone else adding something to my Story "Making the Team" and especially a page that is this sexy and well written, a joy to read. I would love to see more from you. By the way, I also love "Hot Summer Job", awesome piece of work. Keep up the good work.--Wassersaeufer (talk) 02:31, 12 December 2015 (CET)
You are doing some amazing work with Hot Summer Job. It is a work I would sort of like to contribute to, but I do not feel I have a good enough finger on the mood of it yet. I would really like to see you fill out the route where Riley goes to apologize to Carrie after turning her down, I think I will have a better feeling about how this thing is stitched together after I see however that goes. Jemini (talk) 03:45, 31 December 2015 (CET)
I appreciate it. I completely agree, I love it when other writers get in on the story. I am primarily writing for 2 Taboo 4 You witch was started by Elerneron right now. He has kind of handed the project over to me though, so I guess I can speak as the author and invite you over to contribute anywhere you would like as well. Your stuff is great. Anyway, my main thing is I am trying to figure out the general mood of the story and the characters before putting my stuff in, and I felt that line would yeald the last missing information I would need to start contributing. Jemini (talk) 14:48, 2 January 2016 (CET)
Well, Hot Summer Job just became rather interesting with the parents out for the weekend. I am rather interested to see what Bree was wanting to tell Riley now with the other one of the two options listed there. Jemini (talk) 08:28, 6 April 2016 (CEST)
Awesome direction you are taking it with the story now. I am caught between writing some of the sex scenes that you were leading up to or seeing the way you write them, I am thinking the latter on the subject of Kelly for sure. The way she has been played so far, I can't really tell if she is supposed to be a lesbian or if she has a huge crush on Rilly and is just getting nervous. If the latter, the sex scene with Risa could also be a bit interesting in terms of how Kelly would react to it. I would definitely like to see both of those, once I have seen you write them I am sure I will have a better idea of the characters moving forward in case I want to write something involving them. Jemini (talk) 17:27, 20 April 2016 (CEST)
Are you still around and contributing? I got a request a while back to fill out an option in Hot Summer Job, but I don't quite know the characters well enough to write it. https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Wait_for_Carrie_to_come_back (take Larissa upstairs) Larissa specifically is one character who I do not even have the slightest clue what she would do in this situation. Jemini (talk) 11:50, 9 June 2016 (CEST)
I was sort of starting to pick that up. More to the point though, some other things I have picked up about Risa is that she is, relatively speaking (and I REALLY do mean relatively speaking,) the most modest character in the story. That is part of the issue, because she doesn't strike me as someone who would self-initiate anything all that sexual without something like the scene where she witnessed Riley in her mother's room to give her ideas. She hasn't had anything like that to prompt her on this route, so my interpretation is that she would be a lot more modest in her room and Riley seems to be probably the second most modest character in the story. (again, relatively speaking. These two are only modest if you compare them to the likes of Kiley) So, I was thinking something more chaste, but I don't know much of what they would do in a chaste direction other than pokemon, and that stuff's down stairs. If I have this all correct, I think I might be able to come up with something. If not, then I would like for you to tell me your take and I might try to go from there. Or, maybe you could write that one if you were up for it. Jemini (talk) 05:22, 10 June 2016 (CEST)
TerryAce's suggestions
So, I want to work on the first day, when you check on Kylie upstairs, but I'm coming up blank. You got any plans for it