Talk:Fun with Naomi/Part 4

Nice! About the only thing I'd change would be to add more of the wives playing with her. Maybe rubbing her body (especially her clit) trying to make her cum with their husband's cock fucking her? Maybe add the waiter back in sooner to show he's still there, like refilling the water glass she knocked over while inches away from where she's getting her pussy filled with cum while the guys wife strums her clit. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 15:38, 10 December 2021 (CET)

Cool, I pretty much forgot about the waiter and most of the wives until I was nearly finished and I had to go back and add them in. So that makes sense. I’m pretty excited to write about her upcoming weekend. I’m thinking she’ll end up liking her one-on-one time with the CEO but then he has some kink he likes to satisfy with her that she’s not into. And of course she’s passed off to the other businessmen for more fun. This story can go in so many crazy directions now and I think I’ll probably end up adding a lot of strange scenarios I’ve never written about before. I added a few story codes yesterday in anticipation. I don’t want things to get too dark, but this story is shaping up for her to have some fun and then suddenly find herself hauled off with a group of foreign businessmen who take her back to their hotel suite to fulfill their weird fantasies. --Hgcollins (talk) 18:47, 10 December 2021 (CET)