Talk:The loli's perspective/I knew Katy wouldn't say anything about it

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Huh... consistent 3 paragraph short posts that are full of character. I think my little exercise with my WBWP story is paying dividends. Jemini (talk) 12:55, 15 July 2017 (UTC)

Before today I considered you one of the most prolific writers I've met, seeing you added to at least one story per day, in average. Now I'm really amazed, since I've followed how you met a new guy, decided to help him with a story, create a setting, and started writing not one, or two, but actually three different paths for the story, and all that in less than a day.

As for this story, I'm liking the setting, specially in this paths, where we are exploring the past, before whatever supernatural thing happened to him, since we have to conform to reality. In stories like Life Hacks, the fact that the protagonist has absolute power makes it a little less interesting, since we know he can just squeeze a duck to get out of any situation. This protagonist, (at least for now) will have to deal with real world consequences, and I'm waiting to see how he does that. --Tod Naturlich (talk) 23:26, 15 July 2017 (UTC)

I'm thinking he can spot some lotion or baby oil. He can "stumble" onto the concept of lube helping. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 03:35, 18 July 2017 (UTC)

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