Talk:Disciplinary Action/Disciplinary Office/First Week/Beatriz/Next Day

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For a note, this is the sort of thing that there really is no smooth way to deliver it. About the best way you can go about it is to make her awkward, otherwise it's going to sound psycho as you observed. Jemini (talk) 16:26, 28 September 2017 (CEST)

Thanks for your suggestion. It really helped in giving the chapter a proper ending without it feeling out of place. I'm happy that this is the first spot I've had a problem in the story, usually I bump into problem much sooner in a story. I ended up using your suggestion almost verbatim, and just added a little more at the end to tie it with the return to school. --Tod Naturlich (talk) 00:02, 29 September 2017 (CEST)

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