Talk:Life Hacks/Optimized 1/all really F/4 public/game/14(bf)/This kid was acting arrogant, don't try to give her privacy when you fuck her

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I've just re read the first bit and something about it just seems off

What is written: "I think you don't deserve to go back to my lair." vs. "I don't think you deserve to go back to my lair."

I'm aware that when a person is speaking, it's okay for these kinds of grammatical errors, but still, it just seems a bit weird

went ahead, and added a pause, and emphasis to the part where Xander informs her thathe's going to be doing her in public "I'm going to do you, out here."