Talk:Step daughters/Asexual/1st Wednesday/Masha Watches Sex

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For the follow up to make sense (her starting to rub herself) there needs to be more foreplay in the video. I was thinking at the start of some cam video where the kids chat with strangers and get convinced to start new things starting with spreading, touching each other and eventually having sex. The video can remain as is as long as you insist on the foreplay and both kids touching each other first. Her questions would also include "Why" they do that so you could answer with how enjoyable it is, how it is a fun game and so on. Also you should not be able to go back to Sandra unless she already had a great time (one step further than current version). Here were instructions from the scene

(to be written) (you surprise Masha watching kids having sex. You explain to her it is a fun way to play since genitals are extra sensitive. She hesitantly rubs herself a little but quickly stops. You convince her to have a go at her sister. Her sister is still on the bed without her panty. Masha looks at you suspicious but starts to brush softly her sister's vagina. Sandra just loved the feeling with you but is hesitant at first. Masha reassures her gently and rubs her while watching you for times to times to be reassured herself. --Enzo (talk) 16:49, 6 July 2020 (CEST)

Ok, I was wondering a little about that. The scene didn't quite feel right to me after I wrote it, so that's why I really didn't do anything else with this since writing this scene. I was waiting for some kind of feedback. Glad I did, some more specific instructions on what the kids are doing makes a lot of sense.

Also, yeah, makes sense not being able to go back with Sandra at this stage. I only really included those options because it was in the original instructions, but those ones didn't really feel right to me either. So, those options would only be available then if Sandra's brought to a certain point. I'll make that fix too.

(Might be a little bit though, I gotta set the scene planning in my mind.) Jemini (talk) 20:28, 6 July 2020 (CEST)

Ok no problem. I'll try do some other scenes in the meantime. --Enzo (talk) 22:17, 6 July 2020 (CEST)

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