Talk:Manufactured Misfortune/The next day

I'm leaning toward the cheerleader (seems easiest with the whole tutor thing), and the Drama club girl (they're all about the spotlight, even with the nerves, so nudity seems a perfectly normal step). Doesn't mean she doesn't have better ones prepared, though. If you don't have another group, or don't want to do another group, go with the cheerleader. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 04:32, 29 February 2020 (CET)

Keep in mind that while the exhibitionism comment from the first chapter may seem like it suggests the girls will knowingly get naked, it actually is meant to explain why the girls are dressed certain ways (no bra/panties, partially unbuttoned shirt, etc.) and how X could talk them into certain scenarios for Y to exploit. This story is based on the whole "stealth stripping" idea that I've grown to like, so the girls shouldn't know what the MC is doing. Now if others notice, or she discovers her nudity in an embarrassing way, well, that will have to wait to be seen. And to be honest I was just planning on rolling a die or something for which girl to pick, but if cheerleader is your request I'll happily oblige. --NoGo45 (talk) 05:20, 29 February 2020 (CET)

Just about every American male has a thing for cheerleaders. That and I like short girls. She could have smaller breasts and I would find her hotter, but this will work. Also the tutor thing is the easiest "in" out of the group. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 05:37, 29 February 2020 (CET)

Oddly enough I don't care for cheerleaders that much, they always seem to skinny for my liking and all the make up they wear is a turn off for me. Now fictional cheerleaders, who can have a wider range of body shapes aside from "thin noodle," that's more my style. --NoGo45 (talk) 05:55, 29 February 2020 (CET)

Oh, and believe it or not I make most of this stuff up on the spot and really struggled with writing up those girls aside from the track girl, so I'll start another one's path but, as always, feel free to offer suggestions. --NoGo45 (talk) 05:58, 29 February 2020 (CET)

They seem fairly random to me. Only thing to be mindful of is breast size (and maybe height, though as I said, I like 'em short). Remember it's high school, so they vary greatly. I went to a small town school, so they were limited in their cheerleader choices so quite a few of ours weren't "sticks". I agree with the makeup, although that's not limited to cheerleaders when girls are that young lol --Notsooldpervert (talk) 06:27, 29 February 2020 (CET)

Now that I've thought about it for a bit, perhaps it would be better to have options where the girl is aware of her nudity. After all the goal is for the MC to not get caught, so as long as they don't suspect him things should be fine. And this way I don't write myself into a corner by eliminating my options. --NoGo45 (talk) 14:45, 29 February 2020 (CET)

You haven't worked on this one in a while. I look forward to the naked fun to be had. You mentioned int he previous talk comment about having options where they are aware of their nudity, as long as he didn't get caught. Is the goal to get them naked in public, or just get them naked? It might work if they willingly show him some skin (and wind up going much further than they intended). --Notsooldpervert (talk) 19:55, 24 October 2020 (UTC)

I do intend on working on this story someday soon, it's just that I feel the current path spiraled a little out of control with the sister and gym teacher, makes my mind grind to a halt thinking about continuing it. That and I'm terrible at focusing on writing lol. And the goal of the girls is to get them naked, doesn't matter the circumstances so long as Ron doesn't get caught, so location and privacy are secondary concerns, although less people will make it a bit more easier. As for showing some skin, I got a few ideas for that in mind, like Addison sunbathing while Ron tutors her, lying on her stomach leaving the knot for her top vulnerable... you get the idea. --NoGo45 (talk) 21:55, 24 October 2020 (UTC)

I think I might go through and use the options skipping all the extra content to focus on Addison (or another girl), then later I can go back to flesh out the "side quests" and reconnect them to the main story. --NoGo45 (talk) 22:02, 24 October 2020 (UTC)