User talk:Elerneron

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Funny thing. I was thinking up a few contributions just before the whole pedo scare hit. Then I just suddenly lost my inspiration. Go figure. --BakaG (talk) 23:54, 4 October 2015 (CEST)

GODDAMN STEAM SALES! ARGH! Ark: Survival Evolved was 30% off and now I've lost a week. "I can ride a Tyrannosaur?! SHUT UP AND TAKE MY MONEY!" Damnit! Damnit! Damnit! *sigh* Oh well. I don't have a Rex yet but I do have a triceratops! :P --BakaG (talk) 07:09, 12 October 2015 (CEST)

So, about turning that link you put at the old site into a "real link" (by which I assume you mean a clickable hyperlink so people don't have to copy/paste). How the hell do I do that again? I'm kind of a noob at Wiki. --BakaG (talk) 03:52, 16 October 2015 (CEST)

Thank you for your kind words and the warm welcome, must admit, hadn't hoped for somethine like that. I see that the community around here is still quite small and cozy, which can be very good or bad, depending on who will or will not join. Anyway, looking forward to read some and write some around here and thanks again for the warm welcome --Wassersaeufer (talk) 15:16, 19 October 2015

Hey! Thanks for greeting me! I'll try my best, although it's mostly copy and paste. BinaryHedgehog (talk) 14:21, 15 November 2015 (CET)

Thank you for the help with my rabbit story. By the way, while it is my story, it wasn't my title, so I was laughing a little. BinaryHedgehog (talk) 14:26, 15 November 2015 (CET)

I finished transfer for Sonic Girls ENF. Once re-linking is done, set the story's permission to public. BinaryHedgehog (talk) 15:40, 15 November 2015 (CET)

I put Tyler in Meta because of how many lolis he'd encounter. BinaryHedgehog (talk) 22:14, 15 November 2015 (CET)

OK, thank you.

I was wondering if you could do a quick favor. Do you think you could move Life of a 13 year old over here? I mean just putting it into the Meta story section and the front page, I'll handle everything after that. I'm just afraid that I'll mess up the format again if I try doing that part. (Zero)

Thank you for your welcome. I liked the other site before it started to go all "We have to block underage stuff. Bestiality and necrophilia are fine but underage is to far." Also maybe I missed it when reading through the rules and guides but how do I publish a story here?--Medici (talk) 11:24, 21 December 2015 (CET)

Ok thanks. I wasn't clear on how to do that. It is clear enough now thanks to being able to look at what you did though, so I shouldn't have to bother you with that one in the future. Jemini (talk) 22:57, 30 December 2015 (CET)

It's fine, I mostly just put lists off on the sub-pages, not areas where people are talking to me.Jemini (talk) 15:18, 5 January 2016 (CET)

Thank you for making that change my friend.--Medici (talk) 06:07, 6 January 2016 (CET)

There's my problem. I was only using two tildes (didn't know there WAS a sig button). Anyway, I think I'll enjoy the story of FOP, just not a fan of the show. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 06:16, 6 January 2016 (CET)

My apologies for being hasty. And thank you for creating a sandbox page. Now I can test my template without fear of screwing up my story. --Medici (talk) 20:52, 6 January 2016 (CET)

Yes in my story Grand Harem there will be girls, and cubs, and possibly (very likey) aliens. --Medici (talk) 17:46, 9 January 2016 (CET)

Just a heads up so you don't get confused when you start seeing this stuff, I have decided to start using my talk sub-forms as a staging area for another story I am contributing to. There are more details here. User talk:Jemini/Other projects. I will try and keep the formatting so it doesn't show up anywhere weird, but I wanted you to know just in case so you were aware of what was going on. Jemini (talk) 19:56, 14 January 2016 (CET)

concerning my story on john. Is there anyway that I can have it in the way that it would look like how I had it. Considering that this is story has a lot of dialogue and has to be written in that type of way. Contack me so that we can discuss on ways to have it both our way. Felix Zane (talk)

Hey, Elerneron, I was looking at your story Arcade Adventure on editthis.info and saw that you were making a game for it, for better ease of programming. I was wondering if it was done by now, and if so where I can find it, since I was really interested in it. Thank you for your time, and please find a way to reply. --Eta (talk) 04:46, 28 January 2016 (CET)

Is it normal that the announcement about the rule changes is still up despite being over a month ago? It's kind of annoying. :P -BakaG (talk) 00:49, 13 February 2016 (CET)

Oh. I'm dumb. Carry on. -BakaG (talk) 09:13, 14 February 2016 (CET)

Well, even if I wasn't singled out, I am still honored, and I'm happy that you welcomed me. Thank you. (and I love your Twilight picture you chose for the site <3) I am certain I will enjoy the loli stories, but unfortunately, I do not enjoy writing. Like... at all. :c I'm sorry. I do have a quick question: How do I put a story on my watchlist, so I know when it gets updated? Thorniestmax (talk) 09:51, 31 March 2016 (CEST)

Well, it's not ideal, but I added the "Recent Changes" RSS feed to my Thunderbird, so I'll have that record. I was wondering, if I add a story's "category" page to my watchlist, would it notify me each time a new page in the story was made? Thorniestmax (talk) 12:30, 31 March 2016 (CEST)

OK, Life of a 13 year old seems to be updating a lot, I've watched it, and I'll let you know whether or not it tells me. Thorniestmax (talk) 13:03, 31 March 2016 (CEST)

Hey, how do you make sub-categories in your categories page? I ask because of the story, God's Compensation, that I started. It is planned to be set out in a chapter format, and I want to be able to have separate sub-categories for each chapter. Jemini (talk) 19:38, 9 April 2016 (CEST)

I'm not sure I understand those instructions. Could you maybe give an example of exactly what I would have to type in? I can usually get it after seeing it in practice just once. Jemini (talk) 09:39, 10 April 2016 (CEST)

-sigh- so obviously my attempt at putting in a link on the main categories page to the sub-category page didn't quite work. Exactly how DO I get that to happen though? Jemini (talk) 00:00, 13 April 2016 (CEST)

Never mind, looks like you've already got that done. Thanks. Now that I have seen it I ought to be able to do that myself with the future chapters. Jemini (talk) 00:02, 13 April 2016 (CEST)

Hi. Thanks for the edit. About them, I think there is some things I still don't understand about editing stories here. Could you help me a little with that? --Atilas (talk) 22:20:45 dimanche 17 avril 2016 (CEST)

I'm trying to figure out how to upload images and gifs. I looked at what you did for FOPTA clips and I sort of get it. It looks like you upload it to a page meant specifically for that one image and then somehow link to that page. I am not so clear though on how you are supposed to set up the page for the image so that it can be linked to. Think you can help me out on that one? Jemini (talk) 11:08, 18 April 2016 (CEST)

Thank you for adding the category for that. I didn't know category pages needed categories on this site, I've mostly just been on Edit This create your own. I'll keep it in mind for future stories. :) Gisèle de Rais (talk) 10:17, 27 May 2016 (CEST)

I aim to... well, I guess challenge lol--Notsooldpervert (talk) 13:40, 1 June 2016 (CEST)

Would it be out of line for me to upload a whole bunch of images like the one I have already uploaded? I would only do so on an as-needed basis rather than all at once, but for the ROR branch of ACOF (and probably for ACOF as a whole in the future) I'm making images to use throughout the story since I can and on this website I can actually use them.

For the ROR branch I'm including a sprite character portrait that will change to reflect status and equipment, and I may later include other images. All of the images will be my own work. I'm hoping this is okay to do. -- Gisèle de Rais (talk) 21:44, 20 June 2016 (CEST)

Hey, I don't know if it's appropriate to ask this here, but I wanted to collaborate a cub-based game you. BinaryHedgehog (talk) 23:54, 2 July 2016 (CEST)

More like something here, but I understand BinaryHedgehog (talk) 04:55, 4 July 2016 (CEST)

Oh, okay then BinaryHedgehog (talk) 09:22, 5 July 2016 (CEST)

Hello, I was wondering if we could use real life pictures of 18 and older individuals to help readers get a mental image of how certain characters look like or is that against the rules in some way? Zero (talk) 19:40, 18 July 2016 (CEST)

Thanks for the tip about moving Smutty Sex Romp over. I'll keep that in mind. Privitude

I am trying to use some of your templates as the basis of templates in the Universal Acceptance story I am writing for. I used part of the "all hell" template, but I can't get text to display in the 3rd column. Think you could take a look and see what I might be doing wrong? https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Universal_Acceptance/Start_the_story_(Jerry:_Age_12) Jemini (talk) 09:39, 15 September 2016 (CEST)

Ok, thanks :) Jemini (talk) 13:50, 15 September 2016 (CEST)

Yet again, you come up with another incredibly enticing subject to write for. I'll probably dip my hand in to this Life Hacks story at some later time once you have flush it out a little more first. Eager to see where that goes. The OP is always able to do that job better. (as you have probably seen, my own stories tend to go a lot slower toward sex scenes when I am the OP Vs. when I write for someone else's story.) Jemini (talk) 19:56, 25 September 2016 (CEST)

There is a rather easy solution to concern over stepping on each other's toes, just communicate a little more. I would love to really work together on a story, you really are a pretty good writer, the evidence is in all these fantastic ideas you keep coming up with. It's not just the ideas either, you write some pretty solid stuff. I think you just need a little more confidence in your own work. I mean, it IS your work, ideally you should be the one with the ideas of where it should go and I ought to be just following in the wake and working within your lead. Jemini (talk) 07:36, 26 September 2016 (CEST)

I have to agree, you have some great starts to stories, and it's a shame when they get abandoned. I like the premise of Life Hack, but I also really like TWAWKI and Generations. Unfortunately, about the best I can do for contributions is request story paths I'd like to read. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 16:40, 26 September 2016 (CEST)

Well, since you asked, here is what I have off the top of my head. Of course, you are the writer, so that means these are only suggestions and you should alter whatever you think should be altered. I'm thinking divorced parents, lives with his mother but prefers his father beings his father taught him computer skills. 1 younger sister of about 9-11, because that is just my preference for a sex related story. At least one more sibling within a year and a half of his age, up or down, who he has a slightly antagonistic relationship with. No preference on gender, but the gender would affect the attitude of the antagonistic relationship. Actually, a bratty 14 year old sister would probably bring out a fair bit of sparks flying with her teasing him about various things, such as making fun of him for not having a car, not being "manly" enough in various senses, or still being a virgin. There is also friends and neighbors to consider, but that can be easily dealt with later. Jemini (talk) 01:52, 6 October 2016 (CEST)

Well, I think it is hillarious that Charity has the highest dislike and the highest romantic love. She's freaking perfect! The family turned out bigger than I was thinking, but since it is a sex story that gives more to work with. I'm guilty of doing the exact same thing with Universal Acceptance, witch is why I didn't push for a large family here, but I actually prefer it the way you set it up. Those meters are pretty handy BTW. I think you are getting better at giving useful information in a compact form in these stories.

Anyway, with your aside comment, did you mean I should edit what you already have up to flesh out the ambiance? Just confirming. I am sure I can do that. I would like to see you keep blazing the trail though, especially since we are still dealing with the gimmick of the story. That's really more your area. Although as a suggestion, it might be interesting to have one of the siblings barge into the room while he is expiramenting. That could go interesting places. I would suggest rolling a dice to determine witch one, because every single one can go interesting directions unique to them. I think it would be more interesting to have the dice tell you who first, and then start writing the details of the encounter after that. (If you don't want to write it, I can. I think the point after he has changed his sex is the perfect distance into the experimentation to have this curve ball in there. I am not sure how many pages in that was, but this intruder should come in the exact same number of pages in regardless of the decisions that were made up till that point just to keep it consistent.) (EDIT: Add the mother in as a potential intruder, it gives exactly 6 potential intruders to fill out 6 numbers on the die) Jemini (talk) 16:23, 7 October 2016 (CEST)

Just added 2 paragraphs to the opening to give the MC a more human reaction to the situation, I will consider the rest later. Also, something else for later would be to possibly have him delay checking out the interface because he is too freaked out and needs some time to get his bearings. It is just a matter of considering a real person in this situation rather than just trying to move the story along, and a real person would be completely freaked out. Then, of course, as he expiraments with it he develops a gradual power trip. (also, I thought the bit about liking sex with children and other talk about sexual stuff so early into it seemed a little pre-mature. Again, real person. A real person would take a bit before jumping to using this to get sex. That would be one of the very early things to do, but he would have to realize he can use it for that rather than just jump to that as his first thought. Real people know it takes some work to get someone to have sex with you. He would be stuck in that mind-set for a while till he realizes he can short-cut the old social rules.) Jemini (talk) 18:25, 8 October 2016 (CEST)

Meh, I think most of it is that I am getting thrown by the lack of build-up to the talk of sex stuff. A lot of times it can seem like it is too soon in the story to talk about sex simply because it wasn't built up to effectively. It will probably look better at the exact same point with a little tweaking to the build-up, witch is exactly what I'm going to be doing anyway. As for moving forward, go ahead and write whatever part you want. I will likely just stick to already fleshed out parts of the story until you declare the background for the story finished. (Unless I decide to write the affore mentioned route where he decides to delay experimenting with the hacking module. If I do that, it will likely be after you have written a little bit more so that I am familiar enough with the world around him to go my own route with it.) Jemini (talk) 20:09, 8 October 2016 (CEST)

Did a few more integral edits to the "familiarize yourself" page, but most of them were altering a few sentences to put more personality in them or just editing the positions of a few comas for grammar sake. The next few sections will likely get a far bigger overhaul than the previous two, beings that's going to involve adding a lot of mental unease and unrest with the situation. It will probably turn the few paragraphs you wrote into a page or two worth of writing. I think I am going to save on doing that till later though because I am going to need to plan this out a little. Jemini (talk) 20:43, 8 October 2016 (CEST)

Yeah, this direction looks a lot better. (I really liked the drop of Ronni not wearing panties without advancing it in a sexual direction.) Also, since it sort of came up, if Alexander gets into a physical fight it might be a good idea for me to handle all the details beings I have a LOT of actual martial arts experience. Also, some of my stories I am able to hold back on the pervy stuff enough that the first sexual encounter of the story is well presented and well built up to, but I tend to go off the rails after that. Something that would improve this entire story greatly is if we keep each other in check to make sure the story does not go overboard with sex. (sex is the point of the story, but it harms the mood if it becomes 100% of the story.) Jemini (talk) 03:35, 9 October 2016 (CEST)

Wow! Ok, party politics is something you NEVER want to have a major character in your story get into. You might get away with it with a character that is way off to the side, but you are always going to alienate fully half your audience if you have a central character get into party politics. As for identity politics... that's something that depends on how you play it. I think this is workable, using it as a short hand to identify an ass hole it is OK for the main character to beat up is one of the most acceptable uses so long as it is not used as a spring board to get preechy. We just need to do something about that Donald Trump comment. (and no, I am not playing sides here. I would be saying the same thing if you had made a jab at Clinton. It is just a bad idea to pull party politics into the mix. It can mean death for an otherwise good story.) EDIT: Also, for after the physical confrontation with this guy. If he manages to get the officer's radio, I actually looked up the police signals for asault by a disorderly person. It is a 24-58, and I used that to put this together as what he could say into the radio to get a response. (I made up my own name for the park since I don't remember you providing one.) “Private citizen to dispatch, I would like to report a 24-58 at Wendel Park, officer initiated. Please send out officers to receive a citizen’s arrest.” Jemini (talk) 10:29, 9 October 2016 (CEST)

Ok, finished the the change attributes edit. Let me know what you think. Jemini (talk) 12:17, 9 October 2016 (CEST)