Talk:Dirty Talk/Three Brats/June 20th, 2021/Milka's Plan/Backfires/Emilia decides to call Laura for guidance

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Very fun basement scene! I'm not sure where Ludwig went though? He wouldn't come out with her? Maybe that all makes more sense once that scene is done. But VERY curious what Laura's plans are with Milka! I think it would make sense for Ludwig to pretend nothing happened though, whether he thinks he got away with it or just to play dumb as a test for how everyone else will react since they'd be looking for a reaction from him. --Villenia (talk) 23:38, 14 November 2022 (CET)

I'm glad the basement stuff was fun, but for me the fun part is that it's not over! As for where Ludwig went? Ludwig just stayed inside the house, while everything with the girls (after the phonecall) happened outside the house. What this page doesn't show is Milka and him wondering in the living room where the girls have gone. While Milka leaves the house, Ludwig's left alone in the living room, left to contemplate his life choices lol. I'm personally still leaning towards a punishment for Emilia, which would be difficult for him given 21st (the next day) is Monday and he can't keep a leash on her while at work... At least not by himself. 😉 -- Innocent Ruin (talk) 00:10, 15 November 2022 (CET)

Oh, so the "basement" is an actual basement? When it was described as a bomb shelter I assumed the only entrance was outside. That makes more sense then. But far be it from me to dissuade you from punishing Emilia! :P --Villenia (talk) 01:29, 15 November 2022 (CET)

  • I've been using the words interchangeably, but now that you put it like that, a bomb shelter directly underneath a single-family house sounds weird. Sure, we have such shelters in the cities underneath most buildings, but... oh well... -- Innocent Ruin (talk) 10:38, 15 November 2022 (CET)

I see what you did there Leash wink wink... but ill be honest wouldn't mind seeing Emilia in actual leash wink wink. love this two pages so much has happened and now Laura definitely gonna find out the juicy details and maybe get ludwig (and as much as the leash thing was a joke i mean it may not be for long if thinks keep moving this way and one can hope) --Xephion (talk) 02:10, 15 November 2022 (CET)

  • Well, that makes two of us who want a collar around her neck. Or three, if you count Laura. 😉 -- Innocent Ruin (talk) 10:38, 15 November 2022 (CET)



Got the update out before pokemon and the world cup will keep me even busier and more distracted from writing! As much as I wanted to have Emilia grounded straight away, coming up with mental gymnastics to do it logically was simply too difficult for me. So instead, I decided to remove branching altogether, with a little bit of every option sprinkled in. It'll allow for the same sex scenes I initially had planned for where Emilia is grounded, as I do not want to scrap those shenanigans. Finally, Ludwig's motivations for "quitting" are now laid out for all to read and judge, but stuff's still up for editing. Hope his motivations make sense, lol. -- Innocent Ruin (talk) 13:42, 18 November 2022 (CET)

Part of me really wants Laura and Ludwig to double-dom Milka! And I think Laura would feel a little jealous about missing out on the basement. But I think Laura should still try to use Milka in this, even briefly. Like Milka shows up unannounced to drop something off or to see Emilia and Milka is blatantly showing off a star when Ludwig answers the door and she's all "whoops, this one wasn't for you, unless you want it to be" and when Emilia asks what that was all about Milka explains that Laura texted her that idea to tease Ludwig some more, to not only show him he has options here but that he won't be able to keep avoiding the game. --Villenia (talk) 19:51, 18 November 2022 (CET)

Double-dom in general is something worth exploring with a perverted married couple tag-teaming on kids. And I agree, makes sense for Laura to be feeling a little left out right now, maybe even jealous. Your idea regarding Milka continuing to tease Ludwig is also fun, and I can totally see something like that happening further down the road. -- Innocent Ruin (talk) 21:17, 18 November 2022 (CET)

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