Talk:Disciplinary Action/Sonia/Discipline/Answer/More/Release

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Will you also be changing the Main page for this one too?

In the main story, Dr. Hartnell is the one to undo the straps, but on this page it's Mr. Gardener.

Hmm, there wasn't an option in the main story to wipe her clean prior to walking her to the Kinder class. (Use a tissue and just rub the cum a little more.)

Another thing, would be to have Sonia ask Ms. Curtis her first name (it's Carrie), so she knows who people are talking about, and that's how she did it with Elizabeth.

Sorry, linking to the other page failed, had to link externally. (Somthing about %27 being invalid characters) --MrPib (talk) 06:50, 9 February 2020 (CET)

Actually, that was just me having not re-read what I wrote in the original very well. I think this page is the one I will probably correct in order to bring it in line with the original this time around.

Also, testing the issue with the link here. It seems to work fine for me. What were you doing wrong? Jemini (talk) 09:43, 9 February 2020 (CET)


Facepalm, I was copying the URL, not the page title. The url changes 'don't to %27don%27t and I guess you can't have a % sign in the internal url. --MrPib (talk) 17:50, 9 February 2020 (CET)

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