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I'm fine with only branching at key points. After some "warm up" questions I would like to see him ask her if she enjoyed him seeing her nude, and what made her start doing that. It would be funny for her to take the soap lick and not answer that only to find out later that she is partners with X to expose her self to and seduce her brother whom she has a huge crush on. She can't share it until after a certain number of times having unprotected vaginal sex. Afterward, she can fill him in on everything and help him expose other girls (as long as they get to keep having "fun" together). --[[User:Notsooldpervert|Notsooldpervert]] ([[User talk:Notsooldpervert|talk]]) 04:19, 8 March 2020 (CET)
I'm fine with only branching at key points. After some "warm up" questions I would like to see him ask her if she enjoyed him seeing her nude, and what made her start doing that. It would be funny for her to take the soap lick and not answer that only to find out later that she is partners with X to expose her self to and seduce her brother whom she has a huge crush on. She can't share it until after a certain number of times having unprotected vaginal sex. Afterward, she can fill him in on everything and help him expose other girls (as long as they get to keep having "fun" together). --[[User:Notsooldpervert|Notsooldpervert]] ([[User talk:Notsooldpervert|talk]]) 04:19, 8 March 2020 (CET)
I can't say I agree on the notion of Emily and X working together. I find it much more amusing to think of Emily as a girl just now discovering that she likes exposing her self to her brother (who she may already have feelings for), and eventually just exposing herself in general. That way it's kind of like a chess game between her and Ron when it comes to what erotic things happens to her, only instead of playing against each other Emily's playing against herself and actually aiding Ron in doing so. Having them eventually (and I do mean eventually) become a ''highly'' intimate couple is ideally one of the end goals, even with the other plot threads of Addison (or any other main girl), June, or even X.
A separate inquiry; if I were to work on another girl at some point, do you think it'd be a good idea to just copy and paste a lot of the side events (like Ms. June in the maintenance building, for example) so as not to keep filling in the blanks by hand, or should there be some variety, like having the same links at one point, but a different one is chosen for that path? --[[User:NoGo45|NoGo45]] ([[User talk:NoGo45|talk]]) 04:55, 8 March 2020 (CET)

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Before moving forward, how would anyone like to see the next sections planed out? Multiple small chapters for every back and forth, or larger chapters each with multiple truths and dares, only branching at key points? --NoGo45 (talk) 04:03, 8 March 2020 (CET)

I'm fine with only branching at key points. After some "warm up" questions I would like to see him ask her if she enjoyed him seeing her nude, and what made her start doing that. It would be funny for her to take the soap lick and not answer that only to find out later that she is partners with X to expose her self to and seduce her brother whom she has a huge crush on. She can't share it until after a certain number of times having unprotected vaginal sex. Afterward, she can fill him in on everything and help him expose other girls (as long as they get to keep having "fun" together). --Notsooldpervert (talk) 04:19, 8 March 2020 (CET)

I can't say I agree on the notion of Emily and X working together. I find it much more amusing to think of Emily as a girl just now discovering that she likes exposing her self to her brother (who she may already have feelings for), and eventually just exposing herself in general. That way it's kind of like a chess game between her and Ron when it comes to what erotic things happens to her, only instead of playing against each other Emily's playing against herself and actually aiding Ron in doing so. Having them eventually (and I do mean eventually) become a highly intimate couple is ideally one of the end goals, even with the other plot threads of Addison (or any other main girl), June, or even X.

A separate inquiry; if I were to work on another girl at some point, do you think it'd be a good idea to just copy and paste a lot of the side events (like Ms. June in the maintenance building, for example) so as not to keep filling in the blanks by hand, or should there be some variety, like having the same links at one point, but a different one is chosen for that path? --NoGo45 (talk) 04:55, 8 March 2020 (CET)